Monotype Heatran (Steel) [QC: 3/3] [GP: 2/2]

[Giyu]

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions on Steel as a good lure for normally faster threats like Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, easing the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran attacking first, threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Flash Fire-boosted Eruption is hard to check, threatening even walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent STAB move in case Heatran gets damaged; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types like Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon is Heatran's best option against Cradily and Fire-neutral Ice-types such as Kyurem and Thick Fat Mamoswine.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for its team and can revenge kill threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. Substitute + Toxic Aegislash is a good teammate, as it deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves. Additionally, it wears down walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets them check threats to Heatran such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda and Tapu Fini, chips Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards. Excadrill uses Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stay healthy enough to utilize Eruption. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal checks Zeraora, which is still faster than Heatran, and breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Swift Swim Barraskewda with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
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Overheat may be used over Flamethrower on Choice Scarf Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean Grass and Steel teams late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[CryoGyro, 331519], [UT, 523866]]

 

[Aqua Jet]

Lava

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran is a phenomenal revenge killer (I wouldn't say phenomenal. It's a good revenge killer, but phenomenal sort of exaggerates what it can do.) due to it's ability to ease mirror matches against opposing Steel teams (As Neko said on Discord, its not that great into other Steel teams due ot the fact that protect is everywhere.) and to outpace threats such as Excadrill outside of sandstorm, Buzzwole, and Magnezone. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf so its total base power doesn't get affected, because of this Heatran is usually able to maintain Eruption's high base power making it a bigger offensive threat than other Heatran sets. Flamethrower is a backup Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use. (Mention how this is relevent to allow it to hit things like Celesteel and Corviknight) Earth Power helps Heatran deal with Fire-types such as Volcanion, Cinderace, and most importantly opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse allows Heatran to hit Dragon-type threats such as Garchomp and Hydreigon super-effectively, whereas Flash Cannon can be used instead because of STAB and it hits Pokemon such as Tapu Fini, Azumarill, and Terrakion (2/3 of the Pokémon you mentioned are neutral to Steel, and the other is hit super effectively by Earth Power). The chosen EV spread allows Heatran to outpace as many threats as possible with Choice Scarf whilst still keeping a high offensive profile.

Paragraph 2:
(Just say all of Heatran's teammates appreciate its Fire-immunity, then in a separate sentence mention its ability to revenge Cobalion and Mamoswine)
Aegislash, Celesteela, and Ferrothorn all appreciate Heatran's ability to absorb Fire-type attacks and revenge kill threats such as opposing Heatran, Cobalion, and Mamoswine. In return, Aegislash is immune to Fighting-type attacks, Celesteela is immune to Ground-type attacks, and Ferrothorn has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. Excadrill is able to remove entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough for Eruption's base power to not be affected. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey, Tapu Fini, and Slowking. Bisharp helps Heatran break through Tyranitar, Porygon2, and Alolan Muk as well as check threats such as Dragapult, Barraskewda in rain, and weakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch. (AP)

QC: 1/3
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[Giyu]

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran is a phenomenal revenge killer (I wouldn't say phenomenal. It's a good revenge killer, but phenomenal sort of exaggerates what it can do.) due to it's ability to ease mirror matches against opposing Steel teams (As Neko said on Discord, its not that great into other Steel teams due ot the fact that protect is everywhere.) and to outpace threats such as Excadrill outside of sandstorm, Buzzwole, and Magnezone. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf so its total base power doesn't get affected, because of this Heatran is usually able to maintain Eruption's high base power making it a bigger offensive threat than other Heatran sets. Flamethrower is a backup Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use. (Mention how this is relevent to allow it to hit things like Celesteel and Corviknight) Earth Power helps Heatran deal with Fire-types such as Volcanion, Cinderace, and most importantly opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse allows Heatran to hit Dragon-type threats such as Garchomp and Hydreigon super-effectively, whereas Flash Cannon can be used instead because of STAB and it hits Pokemon such as Tapu Fini, Azumarill, and Terrakion (2/3 of the Pokémon you mentioned are neutral to Steel, and the other is hit super effectively by Earth Power). The chosen EV spread allows Heatran to outpace as many threats as possible with Choice Scarf whilst still keeping a high offensive profile.

Paragraph 2:
(Just say all of Heatran's teammates appreciate its Fire-immunity, then in a separate sentence mention its ability to revenge Cobalion and Mamoswine)
Aegislash, Celesteela, and Ferrothorn all appreciate Heatran's ability to absorb Fire-type attacks and revenge kill threats such as opposing Heatran, Cobalion, and Mamoswine. In return, Aegislash is immune to Fighting-type attacks, Celesteela is immune to Ground-type attacks, and Ferrothorn has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. Excadrill is able to remove entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough for Eruption's base power to not be affected. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey, Tapu Fini, and Slowking. Bisharp helps Heatran break through Tyranitar, Porygon2, and Alolan Muk as well as check threats such as Dragapult, Barraskewda in rain, and weakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch. (AP)

QC: 1/3
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[Neko]

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Catran

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran is a good revenge killer due to it's ability to ease mirror matches against opposing Steel teams and to outpace threats such as Excadrill outside of sandstorm, Buzzwole, and Magnezone. (For the record, Excadrill usually runs Scarf (for steel, which means it will still Eq you first), or Adamant (Sandy Ground, which means you outspeed it without the scarf [275 vs 278 Speed iirc]. Buzzwole will usually be used in Bug, meaning Webs (so you can't outspeed it, Magnezone you outspeed normally [if you invest in speed] or is scarf. Magnezone isn't staying in either way. I'd like to see examples such as Nidoking, Tapu Koko [things that normally stay in on you] and threats like Landorus-T, Garchomp, and Hydreigon which you kinda pick off after prior chip. Its not good in the Steel matchup either, but it helps a lot in mus such as Ground (FF boosted Eruption 2HKO'es Gastrodon, no one wants to switch into it lol), Flying (Catching cocky Lando-T's is nice, though you forfeit momentum as DDnite will come on you next turn), Electric (No more Tapu Koko = A.Chu not being as scary), Grass. Also you should probably note somwhere that its kinda bad for a Scarfer, ultra fast stuff like Dragpult, Zeraora will outspeed it.) Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf so its total base power doesn't get affected, because of this Heatran is usually able to maintain Eruption's high base power making it a bigger offensive threat than other Heatran sets. (Mention actual targets, that normally dont mind typical Heatran sets, this kinda reads like Fluff rn) Flamethrower is a backup Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; this is especially useful for the likes Corviknight and Celesteela which otherwise wall Heatran when Eruption is weak enough. (just mention its a consistent STAB, more than just hitting Corv Celes I think) Earth Power helps Heatran deal with Fire-types such as Volcanion, Cinderace, and most importantly opposing Heatran. (252 SpA Heatran Earth Power vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Heatran: 272-324 (70.4 - 83.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Stealth Rock and Leftovers recovery, you actually lose the trade unless it comes on you. You also don't beat [0HKO] Cinderace, Volcanion, buut I think the better wording is picks off, or catch these off guard. Should you do this, also add Victini) Dragon Pulse allows Heatran to hit Dragon-type threats such as Garchomp and Hydreigon super-effectively, whereas Flash Cannon can be used instead because it hits Pokemon such as Cradily, Aerodactyl, and Grimmsnarl. (Cradily is an alright mention, but Aerodactyl and Grimmsnarl not so much. Aero doesn't really exist in monotype, and Grimmsnarl...wont stay in [It can even Twave you, so I'd rather not hit Grimmsnarl in the first place XP]. I legitimately cannot think of targets to hit aside from Kyurem and Mamoswine, which makes me question why is this slashed) The chosen EV spread allows Heatran to outpace as many threats as possible with Choice Scarf whilst still keeping a high offensive profile. (Better say what mons it outpaces/murders)

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Cobalion and Mamoswine. In return, Aegislash is immune to Fighting-type attacks, Celesteela is immune to Ground-type attacks, and Ferrothorn has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. Excadrill is able to remove entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough for Eruption's base power to not be affected. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey, Tapu Fini, and Slowking. Bisharp helps Heatran break through Tyranitar, Porygon2, and Alolan Muk as well as check threats such as Dragapult, Barraskewda in rain, and weakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch.
Ok so Alolan Muk isn't in Galar [otherwise every Poison team would literally run it]. Please review this paragraph and the mons it targets and I will check it again.
Its also nicer to say what mons Ferro, Celes, Aegis check.
Also, one of the main uses of Scarf Tran is that it frees Exca from being a scarfer, so I think SD Exca should have a mention here, somewhere.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

Will recheck after the requested edits are made.

 

[Giyu]

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Catran

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran is a good revenge killer due to it's ability to ease mirror matches against opposing Steel teams and to outpace threats such as Excadrill outside of sandstorm, Buzzwole, and Magnezone. (For the record, Excadrill usually runs Scarf (for steel, which means it will still Eq you first), or Adamant (Sandy Ground, which means you outspeed it without the scarf [275 vs 278 Speed iirc]. Buzzwole will usually be used in Bug, meaning Webs (so you can't outspeed it, Magnezone you outspeed normally [if you invest in speed] or is scarf. Magnezone isn't staying in either way. I'd like to see examples such as Nidoking, Tapu Koko [things that normally stay in on you] and threats like Landorus-T, Garchomp, and Hydreigon which you kinda pick off after prior chip. Its not good in the Steel matchup either, but it helps a lot in mus such as Ground (FF boosted Eruption 2HKO'es Gastrodon, no one wants to switch into it lol), Flying (Catching cocky Lando-T's is nice, though you forfeit momentum as DDnite will come on you next turn), Electric (No more Tapu Koko = A.Chu not being as scary), Grass. Also you should probably note somwhere that its kinda bad for a Scarfer, ultra fast stuff like Dragpult, Zeraora will outspeed it.) Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf so its total base power doesn't get affected, because of this Heatran is usually able to maintain Eruption's high base power making it a bigger offensive threat than other Heatran sets. (Mention actual targets, that normally dont mind typical Heatran sets, this kinda reads like Fluff rn) Flamethrower is a backup Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; this is especially useful for the likes Corviknight and Celesteela which otherwise wall Heatran when Eruption is weak enough. (just mention its a consistent STAB, more than just hitting Corv Celes I think) Earth Power helps Heatran deal with Fire-types such as Volcanion, Cinderace, and most importantly opposing Heatran. (252 SpA Heatran Earth Power vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Heatran: 272-324 (70.4 - 83.9%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Stealth Rock and Leftovers recovery, you actually lose the trade unless it comes on you. You also don't beat [0HKO] Cinderace, Volcanion, buut I think the better wording is picks off, or catch these off guard. Should you do this, also add Victini) Dragon Pulse allows Heatran to hit Dragon-type threats such as Garchomp and Hydreigon super-effectively, whereas Flash Cannon can be used instead because it hits Pokemon such as Cradily, Aerodactyl, and Grimmsnarl. (Cradily is an alright mention, but Aerodactyl and Grimmsnarl not so much. Aero doesn't really exist in monotype, and Grimmsnarl...wont stay in [It can even Twave you, so I'd rather not hit Grimmsnarl in the first place XP]. I legitimately cannot think of targets to hit aside from Kyurem and Mamoswine, which makes me question why is this slashed) The chosen EV spread allows Heatran to outpace as many threats as possible with Choice Scarf whilst still keeping a high offensive profile. (Better say what mons it outpaces/murders)

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Cobalion and Mamoswine. In return, Aegislash is immune to Fighting-type attacks, Celesteela is immune to Ground-type attacks, and Ferrothorn has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. Excadrill is able to remove entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough for Eruption's base power to not be affected. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey, Tapu Fini, and Slowking. Bisharp helps Heatran break through Tyranitar, Porygon2, and Alolan Muk as well as check threats such as Dragapult, Barraskewda in rain, and weakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch.
Ok so Alolan Muk isn't in Galar [otherwise every Poison team would literally run it]. Please review this paragraph and the mons it targets and I will check it again.
Its also nicer to say what mons Ferro, Celes, Aegis check.
Also, one of the main uses of Scarf Tran is that it frees Exca from being a scarfer, so I think SD Exca should have a mention here, somewhere.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [<username2>, <userid2>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

Will recheck after the requested edits are made.

Implemented
(Apologies for the Alolan Muk mention, NDM brain took over kekw

 

[Neko]

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Chris

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to Choice Scarf Heatran is a good revenge killer due to it's ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, so its total base power doesn't get affected, because of this Heatran is usually able to maintain Eruption's high base power which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. making it a bigger offensive threat to Pokemon such as Volcarona, Hippowdon, and Celesteela (Hippo and Celes will not stay in on you, Hippo has to stay healthy to keep on Sanding, and you don't kill it with Eruption either. If you wanna, you can add that this move is disgustingly strong after Flash Fire, if you predict Lamethrower from Nidoking or V-Create from [Choiced] Victini, this will 2HKO even the most defensive walls in (Physdef) Gastrodon and Galarian Slowking after SR [Slowbro/Toxapex even can't switch into it lol]). Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use. (Can clean Grass and Steel late-game, perhaps?) Earth Power helps Heatran pick off weakened Fire-types such as Volcanion, Cinderace, Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets it deal with Cradily better. Dragon Pulse allows Heatran to hit Dragon-type threats such as Garchomp and Hydreigon super-effectively, whereas Flash Cannon can be used instead because it hits Pokemon such as Cradily, Kyurem, and Mamoswine. The chosen EV spread allows Heatran to outpace

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Cobalion (barely viable) Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, Aegislash is immune to Fighting-type attacks from Terrakion; Cobalion; and Galarian Zapdos, Celesteela is immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Excadrill; Landorus-T; and Garchomp, and Ferrothorn has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks such as Barraskewda; Crawdaunt; and Landorus-T with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. Excadrill is able to remove entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough for Eruption's base power to not be affected and is free to use Swords Dance now that it doesn't need to be a revenge killer with Choice Scarf. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey, Tapu Fini, and Slowking. Bisharp helps Heatran break through Tyranitar, Porygon2, and Galarian Slowking as well as check threats such as Dragapult, Barraskewda in rain, and weakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch.
*This part is quite problematic
*Make the ; into , (eg. SubTox Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it.)
*Something to note is that Cobalion with CC is hardly seen, Fighting runs Iron Head, so.... yea
*Stick to one Pokemon per sentence, unless they share something in common (eg. Celes and Corv can share a sentence, but Celes and Ferro should have diff sentences)
*Crawdaunt actually breaks Ferrothorn, Idt there's anything that actually counters all Crawdaunt sets for Steel
*What does Exca do for Tran if it can use SD? (It breaks thru Heatrans checks like x,y,z?)
*Tapu Fini isnt a specially defensive wall, Ferrothorn checks it more than Melmetal does, Imo
*Melmetal can 1v1 Zeraora [something you dont outspeed] tho, if you wanna add that
*For more info on how to write this paragraph -> https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/choice-scarf-tapu-bulu-fairy.3683996 (Me not Mushamu simp tho)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [<username2>, <userid2>], [<username3>, <userid3>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

Will stamp it the next round GiyuForPresident

 

[Giyu]

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Chris

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to Choice Scarf Heatran is a good revenge killer due to it's ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, so its total base power doesn't get affected, because of this Heatran is usually able to maintain Eruption's high base power which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. making it a bigger offensive threat to Pokemon such as Volcarona, Hippowdon, and Celesteela (Hippo and Celes will not stay in on you, Hippo has to stay healthy to keep on Sanding, and you don't kill it with Eruption either. If you wanna, you can add that this move is disgustingly strong after Flash Fire, if you predict Lamethrower from Nidoking or V-Create from [Choiced] Victini, this will 2HKO even the most defensive walls in (Physdef) Gastrodon and Galarian Slowking after SR [Slowbro/Toxapex even can't switch into it lol]). Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use. (Can clean Grass and Steel late-game, perhaps?) Earth Power helps Heatran pick off weakened Fire-types such as Volcanion, Cinderace, Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets it deal with Cradily better. Dragon Pulse allows Heatran to hit Dragon-type threats such as Garchomp and Hydreigon super-effectively, whereas Flash Cannon can be used instead because it hits Pokemon such as Cradily, Kyurem, and Mamoswine. The chosen EV spread allows Heatran to outpace

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Cobalion (barely viable) Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, Aegislash is immune to Fighting-type attacks from Terrakion; Cobalion; and Galarian Zapdos, Celesteela is immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Excadrill; Landorus-T; and Garchomp, and Ferrothorn has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks such as Barraskewda; Crawdaunt; and Landorus-T with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. Excadrill is able to remove entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough for Eruption's base power to not be affected and is free to use Swords Dance now that it doesn't need to be a revenge killer with Choice Scarf. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey, Tapu Fini, and Slowking. Bisharp helps Heatran break through Tyranitar, Porygon2, and Galarian Slowking as well as check threats such as Dragapult, Barraskewda in rain, and weakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch.
*This part is quite problematic
*Make the ; into , (eg. SubTox Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it.)
*Something to note is that Cobalion with CC is hardly seen, Fighting runs Iron Head, so.... yea
*Stick to one Pokemon per sentence, unless they share something in common (eg. Celes and Corv can share a sentence, but Celes and Ferro should have diff sentences)
*Crawdaunt actually breaks Ferrothorn, Idt there's anything that actually counters all Crawdaunt sets for Steel
*What does Exca do for Tran if it can use SD? (It breaks thru Heatrans checks like x,y,z?)
*Tapu Fini isnt a specially defensive wall, Ferrothorn checks it more than Melmetal does, Imo
*Melmetal can 1v1 Zeraora [something you dont outspeed] tho, if you wanna add that
*For more info on how to write this paragraph -> https://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/choice-scarf-tapu-bulu-fairy.3683996 (Me not Mushamu simp tho)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [<username2>, <userid2>], [<username3>, <userid3>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

Will stamp it the next round GiyuForPresident

Implemented

 

[Neko]

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I got farmed by this in MLT...

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. (added period), Eruption is also incredibly hard to switch into after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls resists such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it can also clean Grass and Steel teams in late-game. Earth Power helps Heatran pick off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace, Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets it deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, SubToxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it. Celesteela and Corviknight are immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Excadrill, Landorus-T, and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks such as Barraskewda, and Tapu Fini, and can wear also down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. (Add that it can set entry hazards for it, which wears down the opposing team too) Excadrill is able to removes entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough to utilize for Eruption's base power to not be affected and is free to use a Swords Dance set to now that it doesn't need to be a revenge killer with Choice Scarf. Swords Dance Excadrill notably checks the likes of Toxapex and Slowbro which in most cases are quite problematic for Heatran. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking and can deal with Zeraora, which outspeeds Heatran. is capable of winning against Zeraora in a one on one situation. Bisharp helps Heatran break through deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking as well as check threats such as Dragapult and ,Barraskewda in rain, andweakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch. (You can also mention stuff like it cleaning teams late-game, after the opposing team has been worn down by heatran, or the other way around, but this sounds a bit like filler)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [<username3>, <userid3>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

2/3

 

[Giyu]

add remove (comment)

I got farmed by this in MLT...

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. (added period), Eruption is also incredibly hard to switch into after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls resists such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it can also clean Grass and Steel teams in late-game. Earth Power helps Heatran pick off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace, Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets it deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, SubToxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it. Celesteela and Corviknight are immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Excadrill, Landorus-T, and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as has the ability to wear down Heatran's checks such as Barraskewda, and Tapu Fini, and can wear also down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed and Iron Barbs. (Add that it can set entry hazards for it, which wears down the opposing team too) Excadrill is able to removes entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough to utilize for Eruption's base power to not be affected and is free to use a Swords Dance set to now that it doesn't need to be a revenge killer with Choice Scarf. Swords Dance Excadrill notably checks the likes of Toxapex and Slowbro which in most cases are quite problematic for Heatran. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking and can deal with Zeraora, which outspeeds Heatran. is capable of winning against Zeraora in a one on one situation. Bisharp helps Heatran break through deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking as well as check threats such as Dragapult and ,Barraskewda in rain, andweakened Landorus-Therian with Sucker Punch. (You can also mention stuff like it cleaning teams late-game, after the opposing team has been worn down by heatran, or the other way around, but this sounds a bit like filler)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [<username3>, <userid3>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

2/3

Implemented

 

[Mada]

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption is also incredibly hard to switch into after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it can also clean Grass and Steel teams in late-game. Earth Power helps Heatran pick off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace, Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets it deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, SubToxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it. Celesteela, (AC) and Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks from the likes of Excadrill, Landorus-T, and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption and is free to use a Swords Dance set to checks the likes of Toxapex and Slowbro for Heatran. Melmetal can break specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking and can deal with Zeraora, which outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking as well as check threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

(Mention Overheat>Flamethrower that can ensure OHKO's on threats like Zarude, Melmetal and more power after Eruption becomes to weak. After the debuff you can safely switch out)



[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [<username3>, <userid3>]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

Looks good, QC:3/3 when implemented.

 

[Neko]

add remove

>.<

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption is also incredibly hard to switch into after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it can also cleans Grass and Steel teams in late-game. Earth Power helps Heatran picks off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace, and Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas. Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets Heatran it deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and can revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, SubToxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets these check threats such as from the likes of Excadrill, Landorus-T, (gravity Landorus-T) and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption and is free to use a Swords Dance set to checks the likes of Toxapex and Slowbro for Heatran. Melmetal can breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking and can deal with Zeraora, which outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking as well as check and at the same time checking threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat is a viable option over Flamethrower on the Choice Scarf variant because it allows Heatran to check the likes of Zarude and Melmetal, and due to Heatran commonly having to switch out because of it being locked into a move; the special attack drops may not be too significant. Overheat over Flamethrower may be used on the Choice Scarf set to let Heatran consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, (forfeiting momentum to the opposing team and) rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

*This will be added in the current other options section for Heatran in the smogdex

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

You can send this to GP after this, sorry for the delay

 

[Giyu]

Looks good, QC:3/3 when implemented.

add remove

>.<

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threaten Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption is also incredibly hard to switch into after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it can also cleans Grass and Steel teams in late-game. Earth Power helps Heatran picks off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace, and Victini, and opposing Heatran. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon, whereas. Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets Heatran it deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the team and can revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. In return, SubToxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, and also wears down opposing walls such as Mantine, Galarian Slowking, and Slowbro for it. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets these check threats such as from the likes of Excadrill, Landorus-T, (gravity Landorus-T) and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry hazards with Rapid Spin so Heatran stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption and is free to use a Swords Dance set to checks the likes of Toxapex and Slowbro for Heatran. Melmetal can breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking and can deal with Zeraora, which outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking as well as check and at the same time checking threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat is a viable option over Flamethrower on the Choice Scarf variant because it allows Heatran to check the likes of Zarude and Melmetal, and due to Heatran commonly having to switch out because of it being locked into a move; the special attack drops may not be too significant. Overheat over Flamethrower may be used on the Choice Scarf set to let Heatran consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, (forfeiting momentum to the opposing team and) rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

*This will be added in the current other options section for Heatran in the smogdex

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

You can send this to GP after this, sorry for the delay

Implemented

 

[Giyu]

GP Team

 

[berry]

just started amchecking, take my changes lightly
add remove comment or justification

GiyuForPresident, post: 9262292, member: 574288

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace outpacing active wording opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption threatens these mons Eruption is hard to switch into check higher damage output means the mentioned special walls have a harder time checking heatran (unsure though) after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase in case (add space) Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets Heatran deal with Cradily better. might want to change some of these "such as" to "like" to avoid repetition (unsure though)

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the its team and can revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. this sentence may be better suited for the first paragraph, since the second paragraph discusses teammates (unsure though) SubToxic Substitute + Toxic not in the list under gp standards 1.1 Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, . (add period) and also Additionally, it split this into 2 sentences wears down opposing walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for it Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets these them check threats such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, (remove comma) and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down potentially change this wear down to avoid repetition from the previous phrase the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry unsure about removing the "entry", need another opinion hazards with Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption. (add period) and is free to use a Swords Dance set to check Toxapex for Heatran. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking, (add comma) and can deal as well as dealing with Zeraora, (remove comma) which was considering changing which -> who but i couldn't decide outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking and at the same time while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower may be used on the Choice Scarf set to let Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

 

[Giyu]

just started amchecking, take my changes lightly
add remove comment or justification

GiyuForPresident, post: 9262292, member: 574288

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace outpacing active wording opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption threatens these mons Eruption is hard to switch into check higher damage output means the mentioned special walls have a harder time checking heatran (unsure though) after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase in case (add space) Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets Heatran deal with Cradily better. might want to change some of these "such as" to "like" to avoid repetition (unsure though)

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the its team and can revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. this sentence may be better suited for the first paragraph, since the second paragraph discusses teammates (unsure though) SubToxic Substitute + Toxic not in the list under gp standards 1.1 Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, . (add period) and also Additionally, it split this into 2 sentences wears down opposing walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for it Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets these them check threats such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, (remove comma) and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down potentially change this wear down to avoid repetition from the previous phrase the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry unsure about removing the "entry", need another opinion hazards with Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption. (add period) and is free to use a Swords Dance set to check Toxapex for Heatran. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking, (add comma) and can deal as well as dealing with Zeraora, (remove comma) which was considering changing which -> who but i couldn't decide outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking and at the same time while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower may be used on the Choice Scarf set to let Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

I'm colorblind and can barely tell the difference between similar colors such as Orange/Red, Blue/Purple, Dark Green/Black, etc. so I'll try my best but it's extremely hard to differentiate "add" and "comment or justification". Apologies for the inconvenience lol.

 

[Lotus]

I'm colorblind and can barely tell the difference between similar colors such as Orange/Red, Blue/Purple, Dark Green/Black, etc. so I'll try my best but it's extremely hard to differentiate "add" and "comment or justification". Apologies for the inconvenience lol.

add remove comment or justification

Color changed

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace outpacing active wording opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption threatens these mons Eruption is hard to switch into check higher damage output means the mentioned special walls have a harder time checking heatran (unsure though) after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase in case (add space) Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets Heatran deal with Cradily better. might want to change some of these "such as" to "like" to avoid repetition (unsure though)

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the its team and can revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. this sentence may be better suited for the first paragraph, since the second paragraph discusses teammates (unsure though) SubToxic Substitute + Toxic not in the list under gp standards 1.1 Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, . (add period) and also Additionally, it split this into 2 sentences wears down opposing walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for it Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets these them check threats such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, (remove comma) and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down potentially change this wear down to avoid repetition from the previous phrase the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry unsure about removing the "entry", need another opinion hazards with Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption. (add period) and is free to use a Swords Dance set to check Toxapex for Heatran. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking, (add comma) and can deal as well as dealing with Zeraora, (remove comma) which was considering changing which -> who but i couldn't decide outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking and at the same time while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower may be used on the Choice Scarf set to let Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

Is this better?

 

[Giyu]

add remove comment or justification

Color changed

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise threats such as Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran being able to outpace outpacing active wording opponents with a Choice Scarf, which lets it threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Eruption threatens these mons Eruption is hard to switch into check higher damage output means the mentioned special walls have a harder time checking heatran (unsure though) after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move incase in case (add space) Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened beyond use; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types such as Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon deals with Ice-types such as Kyurem and Mamoswine, and lets Heatran deal with Cradily better. might want to change some of these "such as" to "like" to avoid repetition (unsure though)

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for the its team and can revenge kills threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. this sentence may be better suited for the first paragraph, since the second paragraph discusses teammates (unsure though) SubToxic Substitute + Toxic not in the list under gp standards 1.1 Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves, . (add period) and also Additionally, it split this into 2 sentences wears down opposing walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for it Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets these them check threats such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda, (remove comma) and Tapu Fini, wears down Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down potentially change this wear down to avoid repetition from the previous phrase the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes entry unsure about removing the "entry", need another opinion hazards with Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stays healthy enough to utilize Eruption. (add period) and is free to use a Swords Dance set to check Toxapex for Heatran. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking, (add comma) and can deal as well as dealing with Zeraora, (remove comma) which was considering changing which -> who but i couldn't decide outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking and at the same time while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
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Overheat may be used over Flamethrower may be used on the Choice Scarf set to let Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions on Steel as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise normally faster threats like Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease easing the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran outpacing opponents with Choice Scarf attacking first, threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Flash Fire-boosted Eruption is hard to check, (comma) threatening after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move in case Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types like Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon deals with better damages Cradily and Fire-neutral Ice-types such as Kyurem and Thick Fat Mamoswine, and lets Heatran deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for its team and can revenge kill threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. Substitute + Toxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves. Additionally, it wears down opposing walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets them check threats such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda and Tapu Fini, chips Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes hazards with uses Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stay healthy enough to utilize Eruption. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal checks Zeraora, which is still faster than Heatran, and breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking, as well as dealing with Zeraora which outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Swift Swim Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower on Choice Scarf Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

 

[Giyu]

GP 1/2

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions on Steel as a good lure for Steel teams due to its ability to outpace and surprise normally faster threats like Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, allowing it to ease easing the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran outpacing opponents with Choice Scarf attacking first, threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Flash Fire-boosted Eruption is hard to check, (comma) threatening after Flash Fire activation; letting Heatran threaten even bulky walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent Fire-type STAB move in case Heatran gets damaged and Eruption's base power is weakened; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types like Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon deals with better damages Cradily and Fire-neutral Ice-types such as Kyurem and Thick Fat Mamoswine, and lets Heatran deal with Cradily better.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for its team and can revenge kill threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. Substitute + Toxic Aegislash deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves. Additionally, it wears down opposing walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets them check threats such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda and Tapu Fini, chips Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards to wear down the opposing team for Heatran. Excadrill removes hazards with uses Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stay healthy enough to utilize Eruption. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal checks Zeraora, which is still faster than Heatran, and breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking, as well as dealing with Zeraora which outspeeds Heatran. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Swift Swim Barraskewda in rain with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower on Choice Scarf Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>], [<username2>, <userid2>]]

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[UT]

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[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions on Steel as a good lure for normally faster threats like Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, easing the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran attacking first, threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Flash Fire-boosted Eruption is hard to check, threatening even walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent STAB move in case Heatran gets damaged; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types like Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon better damages is Heatran's best option against Cradily and Fire-neutral Ice-types such as Kyurem and Thick Fat Mamoswine.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for its team and can revenge kill threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. Substitute + Toxic Aegislash is a good teammate, as it deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves. Additionally, it wears down walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets them check threats to Heatran such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda and Tapu Fini, chips Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards. Excadrill uses Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stay healthy enough to utilize Eruption. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal checks Zeraora, which is still faster than Heatran, and breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Swift Swim Barraskewda with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower on Choice Scarf Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel teams late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[CryoGyro, 331519], [UT, 523866]]

GP 2/2!

GP Team done

 

[Giyu]

add remove conjecture

GP Check

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Steel)
move 1: Eruption
move 2: Flamethrower
move 3: Earth Power
move 4: Dragon Pulse / Flash Cannon
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Flash Fire
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Scarf Heatran functions on Steel as a good lure for normally faster threats like Tapu Koko, Nidoking, and Landorus-T, easing the Electric, Ground, and Flying matchups. Eruption takes advantage of Heatran attacking first, threatening Tapu Koko, non-Choice Scarf Zarude, and Nidoking. Flash Fire-boosted Eruption is hard to check, threatening even walls such as Gastrodon, Galarian Slowking, and Toxapex. Flamethrower is a consistent STAB move in case Heatran gets damaged; it also cleans Grass and Steel teams late-game. Earth Power picks off weakened Fire-types like Cinderace and Victini. Dragon Pulse threatens Dragon-types such as Garchomp and Hydreigon. Flash Cannon better damages is Heatran's best option against Cradily and Fire-neutral Ice-types such as Kyurem and Thick Fat Mamoswine.

Heatran provides a Fire-type immunity for its team and can revenge kill threats like Nidoking and Mamoswine. Substitute + Toxic Aegislash is a good teammate, as it deters Galarian Zapdos, Thundurus-T, and Choice Band Zeraora from using Fighting-type moves. Additionally, it wears down walls such as Mantine and Slowbro for Heatran. Celesteela, Corviknight and Skarmory are immune to Ground-type attacks, which lets them check threats to Heatran such as Excadrill and Garchomp. Ferrothorn deals with Water-types such as Barraskewda and Tapu Fini, chips Garchomp and Landorus-T with Leech Seed, and sets up entry hazards. Excadrill uses Rapid Spin so that Heatran can stay healthy enough to utilize Eruption. Additionally, Excadrill can use Swords Dance + Earthquake to remove Toxapex, one of Heatran's strongest checks. Melmetal checks Zeraora, which is still faster than Heatran, and breaks specially defensive walls such as Chansey and Slowking. Bisharp deals with bulky Pokemon such as Tyranitar, Porygon2, Clefable, and Galarian Slowking while also checking threats such as Dragapult and Swift Swim Barraskewda with Sucker Punch.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Overheat may be used over Flamethrower on Choice Scarf Heatran to consistently OHKO Zarude and non-Assault Vest Melmetal. However, the Special Attack drop means that Heatran has to always switch out, rendering it unable to clean types such as Grass and Steel teams late-game.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Steel analysis by: [[GiyuForPresident, 574288]]
- Quality checked by: [[Aqua Jet, 531302], [neko, 542526], [AtraX Madara, 513753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[CryoGyro, 331519], [UT, 523866]]

GP 2/2!

GP Team done

Implemented