Let me know what you guys think

[zoso2220]

The main idea of this team is I am using pokemon who i think will be mostly UU (this isn't speculation I'm just taking stabs for now, I like using less used pokes)

Sableye 252hp 118+def 138spd
prankster leftovers
recover
taunt
toxic
will-O-wisp

went for a bulkier spread. Basic stall sableye meant to stop alot of people trying to set up spikes or rocks

Quagsire 128hp 4att 252+def
unaware Leftovers
recover
scald
stockpile
EQ

physical wall/ helps stall more with sableye soak up hits and stops boosting pokes

Serperior 128hp 128spA 252+spe
contrary Leftovers
leafstorm
giga drain
dragon pulse
substitute

leaf storm to boost, gigadrain to help recover some damage. substitute on switches can come in on alot of special attackers trying to get off a grass move on quagsire. dragon pulse for coverage. feel like i need hp fire over maybe substitute, but the hp nerf makes it so weak


xatu 252hp 128 spatt +0spd 128spd (i know kinda random spread)
magic bounce Leftovers
uturn
roost
psychic
heat wave

really useful to help bounce status and scout with uturn. psychic and heatwave for coveage

toxicroak 252 attack 252+speed
poison touch blacksludge
knock off
drain punch
sucker punch
poison jab

i know that knock off seems strange but its actually really powerful as a first attack and can surprise alot of bulky attackers coming in. functions as a fairy killer and a big of a late game sweeper

zapdos 4hp 252spA 252+speed
pressure leftovers
heatwave
thunderbolt
hp ice
roost

a bit bulky. helps with togekiss and talonflame or other flying that come in on toxicroack or serperior

 

[Jirachee]

Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it. The standard description length required is three to four lines, if you need more insight look on the detail part, check out the RMT Archive.

Your descriptions need to be improved to follow that rule. PM me your updated descriptions and I'll unlock your thread.