Copyediting Mew (Psychic)

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[SET]
name: Stallbreaker (Psychic)
move 1: Taunt
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Will-O-Wisp
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
ability: Synchronize
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 28 SpD / 228 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mew's good bulk combined with its wide array of utility moves and pure Psychic typing makes it a good stallbreaker that can be troublesome for a variety of types such as Steel, Ground, and Psychic to deal with. Its access to moves such as Taunt, Knock Off, and Will-O-Wisp combined with reliable recovery in Roost allows it to break down a variety of defensive Pokemon in the Monotype metagame such as Toxapex, Corviknight, and Ferrothorn, while being able to cripple offensive Pokemon such as Excadrill and Duraludon with Will-O-Wisp and Knock Off. Taunt is especially important as it prevents said defensive Pokemon from healing, setting up, spreading status and setting hazards. The given EV spread allows Mew to outspeed Mimikyu and Kyurem-B in order to outspeed cripple both and prevent the latter from using Dragon Dance with Taunt, while also outpacing other offensive Pokemon such as Bisharp and Mamoswine.

Mew dislikes dealing with wallbreakers such as Dragapult and Keldeo. As such, Choice Scarf users such as Indeedee and Gardevoir support Mew by revenge killing said wallbreakers, while Mew can break down defensive Pokemon like Corviknight that they struggle with. Indeedee's Normal typing also allows it to switch into Ghost-type moves such as Gengar and Dragapult's Shadow Ball. Hatterene is a good teammate for Mew as it can utilize its Magic Bounce to reflect back hazards that chip and cripple Mew on the switch-in, namely Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Gardevoir and Hatterene are also good checks to Dark-type Pokemon such as Hydreigon and Weavile that Mew struggles with, while Healing Wish users such as the aforementioned Gardevoir, Indeedee-F, Celebi, and Jirachi can heal Mew if it ever gets worn down or inflicted with status.

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Psychic)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Volt Switch
item: Colbur Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mew's access to Nasty Plot and good coverage options make it a good setup sweeper capable of threatening many types like Steel, Grass, and Poison. Fire Blast is extremely important as it allows Mew to hit Steel-type Pokemon such as Melmetal, Ferrothorn, Corviknight, Aegislash, and Bisharp for super effective damage, therefore making it amazing in the Steel matchup when set-up. Volt Switch is used for pivoting, and is particularly useful for breaking Mimikyu's Disguise under Psychic Terrain while keeping Mew healthy. A Colbur Berry allows Mew to take Bisharp's Sucker Punch while helping with other Dark-type attacks. Generally, Mew should find passive Pokemon like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight to set up on and force out with its attacks.

As a setup sweeper, Mew appreciates support from Pokemon like Jirachi and Orbeetle. The former can set Stealth Rock for it, while the latter can set Sticky Web, both supporting Mew by chipping and slowing down foes respectively as well as setting screens to help it set up. Healing Wish users such as Gardevoir, Indeedee-F, Celebi, and Jirachi also support Mew by healing it when it is chipped or statused, giving it more setup opportunities. The aforementioned offensive Pokemon like Indeedee, Hatterene, and Gardevoir make good partners for Mew by supporting it offensively. Indeedee is a strong wallbreaker that can set Psychic Terrain for Mew, protecting it from priority and boosting its Psychic, while Hatterene and Gardevoir can keep hazards off with Magic Bounce and revenge kill faster threats, while both of these Pokemon are able to take on Dark-type Pokemon for Mew. In return, these offensive Pokemon appreciate Mew's ability to set up and deal with Steel-type Pokemon like Corviknight and Aegislash reliably with Fire Blast.

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[Stallbreaker]
- would switch the place of duraludon and excadrill, so knock/wow line up with the right target
- I would mention mimikyu as a thing it can cripple with its speed, that still annoys psychic even with indeedee

[Nasty Plot]
- nasty plot boosted fire blast is one of the only things that can OHKO Melmetal on psychic teams so that is def worth a mention as a fire blast target
- the first sentence of the second paragraph makes it sound like you want to use jirachi as a screen setter which is definetly wrong, fix that (orbeetle screens is fine)

Good job, QC 1/2!
 
I'm Waylaid and this is my AMGP. Hopefully this can help get the ball rolling for your analysis.
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[SET]
name: Stallbreaker (Psychic)
move 1: Taunt
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Will-O-Wisp
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
ability: Synchronize
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 28 SpD / 228 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mew's good bulk combined with its, (AC) wide array of utility moves, (AC) and pure Psychic typing makes it a good stallbreaker that can be troublesome for a variety of types such as Steel, Ground, and Psychic teams to deal with. (You established use of the Oxford Comma here and the rest of the analysis will be treated as such) Its access to moves such as Taunt, Knock Off, and Will-O-Wisp combine, and with reliable recovery in Roost allows it to break down a variety of defensive Pokemon in the Monotype metagame such as Toxapex, Corviknight, and Ferrothorn (RC), while being. (simplified and separated the original sentence to prevent a run-on) Mew is also able to cripple offensive Pokemon such as Excadrill and Duraludon with Will-O-Wisp and Knock Off. Taunt is especially important as it prevents said defensive Pokemon from healing, setting up, spreading status, (AC) and setting hazards. The given EV spread allows Mew to outspeed Mimikyu and taunt Dragon Dance Kyurem-B in order to outspeed cripple both and prevent the latter from using Dragon Dance with Taunt, while also outpacing other offensive Pokemon such as Mimikyu, Bisharp and Mamoswine. (I hope this change makes sense. I wanted to prevent a run-on again and I figured that you could add mimikyu into your list of offensive pokemon. This way you can be specific about kyub being taunted)

Mew dislikes dealing with wallbreakers such as Dragapult and Keldeo. As such, Choice Scarf users like (rephrase "as such" to avoid repition) Indeedee and Gardevoir support Mew by revenge killing said wallbreakers, while Mew can break down defensive Pokemon like Corviknight that they Choice Scarf users struggle with. Indeedee's Normal typing also allows it to switch into Ghost-type moves such as Gengar and Dragapult's Shadow Ball. Hatterene is also a good teammate for Mew as it can utilize its Magic Bounce to reflect back hazards that chip and cripplewear down Mew on the switch-in, most importantly namely Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Gardevoir and Hatterene also goodact as checks to Dark-type Pokemon such as Hydreigon and Weavile that Mew struggles with, while. (ended sentence here to prevent run-on) Healing Wish users such as the aforementioned Gardevoir, Indeedee-F, Celebi, and Jirachi can heal Mew if it ever gets worn down or inflicted with status.

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Psychic)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Volt Switch
item: Colbur Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mew's access to Nasty Plot and good coverage options make it a good setup sweeper capable of threatening many types like Steel, Grass, and Poison-type Pokemon. Fire Blast is extremely important as it allows Mew to hit Steel-type Pokemon such as Melmetal, Ferrothorn, Corviknight, Aegislash, and Bisharp for super effective damage, therefore making itMew amazing in the Steel matchup when set-up. (prevented redundancy and solidified) Volt Switch is used for pivoting, (RC) and is particularly useful for breaking Mimikyu's Disguise under Psychic Terrain while keeping Mew healthy. (have not mentioned psychic terrain yet) A Colbur Berry allows Mew to take Bisharp's Sucker Punch while helping with other Dark-type attacks. Generally, Mew should find passive Pokemon like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight to set up on and force out with its attacks.

As a setup sweeper, Mew appreciates support from Pokemon like Jirachi and Orbeetle. The former can set Stealth Rock for it, while the latter can set Sticky Web, both supporting Mew by chipping and slowing down foes respectively as well as. (Did not mention setting screens) Healing Wish users such as Gardevoir, Indeedee-F, Celebi, and Jirachi also support Mew by healing it when it is chipped or statused, giving it more setup opportunities. The aAforementioned offensive Pokemon like Indeedee, Hatterene, and Gardevoir make good partners for Mew by supporting it offensively. Indeedee is a strong wallbreaker that can set Psychic Terrain for Mew, protecting it from priority and boosting its Psychic, while. (ended sentence to avoid run-ons) Hatterene and Gardevoir can keep hazards off with Magic Bounce and, (AC) revenge kill faster threats, while both of these Pokemon are able to and take on Dark-type Pokemon for Mew. TIn return, these offensive Pokemon, in return, (RC)*2 appreciate Mew's ability to set up and deal with Steel-type Pokemon like Corviknight and Aegislash reliably with Fire Blast.
edit: in an attempt to help the writer I re-wrote the parts he opposed (I said "Steel, Ground, and Psychic-types" which I changed to "Steel, Ground, and Psychic teams", added the spikes and tspikes removal I made before because it didn't seem to have any apparent purpose, and added mimikyu back to the front of the list when describing nasty plot mew's evs to signify importance)
 
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Decem

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I'm Waylaid and this is my AMGP. Hopefully this can help get the ball rolling for your analysis.
add remove comments (AC) : added comma (RC): removed comma

[SET]
name: Stallbreaker (Psychic)
move 1: Taunt
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Will-O-Wisp
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers
ability: Synchronize
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 28 SpD / 228 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mew's good bulk combined with its, (AC) wide array of utility moves, (AC) and pure Psychic typing makes it a good stallbreaker that can be troublesome for a variety of types such as Steel, Ground, and Psychic-types to deal with. (You established use of the Oxford Comma here and the rest of the analysis will be treated as such) Its access to moves such as Taunt, Knock Off, and Will-O-Wisp combine, and with reliable recovery in Roost allows it to break down a variety of defensive Pokemon in the Monotype metagame such as Toxapex, Corviknight, and Ferrothorn (RC), while being. (simplified and separated the original sentence to prevent a run-on) Mew is also able to cripple offensive Pokemon such as Excadrill and Duraludon with Will-O-Wisp and Knock Off. Taunt is especially important as it prevents said defensive Pokemon from healing, setting up, spreading status, (AC) and setting hazards. The given EV spread allows Mew to outspeed Mimikyu and taunt Dragon Dance Kyurem-B in order to outspeed cripple both and prevent the latter from using Dragon Dance with Taunt, while also outpacing other offensive Pokemon such as Mimikyu, Bisharp and Mamoswine. (I hope this change makes sense. I wanted to prevent a run-on again and I figured that you could add mimikyu into your list of offensive pokemon. This way you can be specific about kyub being taunted)

Mew dislikes dealing with wallbreakers such as Dragapult and Keldeo. As such, Choice Scarf users like (rephrase "as such" to avoid repition) Indeedee and Gardevoir support Mew by revenge killing said wallbreakers, while Mew can break down defensive Pokemon like Corviknight that they Choice Scarf users struggle with. Indeedee's Normal typing also allows it to switch into Ghost-type moves such as Gengar and Dragapult's Shadow Ball. Hatterene is also a good teammate for Mew as it can utilize its Magic Bounce to reflect back hazards that chip and cripplewear down Mew on the switch-in,(RC) namely Spikes and Toxic Spikes. Gardevoir and Hatterene also goodact as checks to Dark-type Pokemon such as Hydreigon and Weavile that Mew struggles with, while. (ended sentence here to prevent run-on) Healing Wish users such as the aforementioned Gardevoir, Indeedee-F, Celebi, and Jirachi can heal Mew if it ever gets worn down or inflicted with status.

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot (Psychic)
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psychic
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Volt Switch
item: Colbur Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Mew's access to Nasty Plot and good coverage options make it a good setup sweeper capable of threatening many types like Steel, Grass, and Poison-type Pokemon. Fire Blast is extremely important as it allows Mew to hit Steel-type Pokemon such as Melmetal, Ferrothorn, Corviknight, Aegislash, and Bisharp for super effective damage, therefore making itMew amazing in the Steel matchup when set-up. (prevented redundancy and solidified) Volt Switch is used for pivoting, (RC) and is particularly useful for breaking Mimikyu's Disguise under Psychic Terrain while keeping Mew healthy. (have not mentioned psychic terrain yet) A Colbur Berry allows Mew to take Bisharp's Sucker Punch while helping with other Dark-type attacks. Generally, Mew should find passive Pokemon like Toxapex, Ferrothorn, and Corviknight to set up on and force out with its attacks.

As a setup sweeper, Mew appreciates support from Pokemon like Jirachi and Orbeetle. The former can set Stealth Rock for it, while the latter can set Sticky Web, both supporting Mew by chipping and slowing down foes respectively as well as. (Did not mention setting screens) Healing Wish users such as Gardevoir, Indeedee-F, Celebi, and Jirachi also support Mew by healing it when it is chipped or statused, giving it more setup opportunities. The aAforementioned offensive Pokemon like Indeedee, Hatterene, and Gardevoir make good partners for Mew by supporting it offensively. Indeedee is a strong wallbreaker that can set Psychic Terrain for Mew, protecting it from priority and boosting its Psychic, while. (ended sentence to avoid run-ons) Hatterene and Gardevoir can keep hazards off with Magic Bounce and, (AC) revenge kill faster threats, while both of these Pokemon are able to and take on Dark-type Pokemon for Mew. TIn return, these offensive Pokemon, in return, (RC)*2 appreciate Mew's ability to set up and deal with Steel-type Pokemon like Corviknight and Aegislash reliably with Fire Blast.
Implemented some of the bits I agree with. Some general advice on on AMGPs is to avoid changing quality related things unless you know the tier and just focus on grammar and prose. There were some bits in your AMGP which I can explain on Discord that went against what I was originally trying to say, so just be aware of this in future AMGPs.
 

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