UU QCQD Slowbro

[avarice]

[SET]
name: QCQD
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psyshock / Sludge Wave
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Ice Beam / Grass Knot
item: Quick Claw
ability: Quick Draw
nature: Modest
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpA

[SET COMMENTS]

Galarian Slowbro is able to maximize its power with Nasty Plot and destroy would-be checks like Kommo-o and Aegislash. The chance to activate either Quick Draw or Quick Claw is 44%, which makes a fortunate Galarian Slowbro difficult to check. Galarian Slowbro can be tailored to what it needs to check. Psyshock is useful for dealing with Keldeo and Chansey, while Sludge Wave lets Galarian Slowbro do more damage to Pokémon like Rotom-W and hit Bulletproof Kommo-o. Fire Blast is essential for hitting Steel-types like Celesteela and Aegislash. Ice Beam hits common Pokemon such as Salamence, Krookodile, and Thundurus, but Grass Knot is an alternative to have a better matchup against bulkier teams,(AC) as it can OHKO Quagsire and Rhyperior. Other combinations of these moves like Sludge Wave / Psyshock / Fire Blast or Weather Ball with rain support are also acceptable, depending on the rest of the team.

Quick Claw Quick Draw Galarian Slowbro is best on hyper offense structures, especially with team support from Pokemon such as Alolan Ninetales, which helps it set up much easier. Galarian Slowbro is also useful on Sticky Web teams, where it can be slightly less reliant on Quick Claw + Quick Draw to outspeed Amoonguss and Aegislash and provide some defensive utility with its resistances and ability to absorb Toxic Spikes. Entry hazard support from Pokemon such as Krookodile can facilitate an easier sweep. Galarian Slowbro is vulnerable to Pokemon like Krookodile and Kommo-o, so other setup sweepers such as Galarian Moltres and Salamence are good partners. Thundurus and Zarude can draw in passive Pokemon such as Chansey and Tangrowth for Galarian Slowbro. In return, Galarian Slowbro can lure Rhyperior and Kommo-o.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
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[Hilomilo]

avarice finish this up soon plz, looks about ready

 

[Hilomilo]

avarice, post: 8922883, member: 346653

[SET]
name: QCQD
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psyshock / Sludge Wave
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Ice Beam / Grass Knot
item: Quick Claw
ability: Quick Draw
nature: Modest
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpA

[SET COMMENTS]

Paragraph 1
Galarian Slowbro is able to maximize its power with Nasty Plot and destroy would-be checks like Kommo-o and Aegislash with a fortunate Quick Draw or Quick Claw. Galarian Slowbro’s coverage is mostly team dependent with what it needs to check. Psyshock is useful for dealing with Keldeo while Sludge Wave lets Galarian Slowbro do more damage to Pokémon like Rotom-W while still hitting Bulletproof Kommo-o variants personally I'm not super convinced Sludge Wave needs to be a slash? Maybe we should discuss with QC but Psyshock and its coverage feel more important in most situations. Fire Blast is essential for hitting Steel-types like Celesteela and Aegislash. Ice Beam can hit common Pokemon such as Salamence and Thundurus, maybe bring Krookodile up here too but Grass Knot is an alternative to have a better matchup against bulkier teams as it can OHKO Quagsire and Rhyperior.

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Quick Claw Galarian Slowbro is best on hyper offense structures, primarily screens offense with Alolan Ninetales to take advantage of it's natural bulk. Galarian Slowbro can also be useful on Sticky Web teams where it can be slightly less reliant on Quick Claw + Quick Draw to outspeed Amoonguss and Aegislash variants and provide some defensive utility. These offensive builds appreciate having a Toxic Spikes absorber too. Galarian Slowbro is vulnerable to Pokemon like Krookodile and Kommo-o, making other set-up sweepers such as Galarian Moltres and Salamence good partners. Thundurus-I and Zarude can draw in passive Pokemon such as Chansey and Tangrowth for Galarian Slowbro. In return, Galarian Slowbro can lure Rhyperior and Kommo-o respectively. Tapu Bulu appreciates Galarian Slowbro’s ability to check Pokemon like Buzzwole and Salamence and can pivot into Dark-types like Krookodile and Zarude while providing Grassy Terrain for easier setup.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
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Great work! 1/3 but please separate this back into bullet points until it gets to 2/3. You can ofc use the same sentences that you currently have as long as they're separated.

 

[Monky25]

On mobile rn

[SET]
name: QCQD
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psyshock / Sludge Wave
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Ice Beam / Grass Knot
item: Quick Claw
ability: Quick Draw
nature: Modest
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpA

[SET COMMENTS]

Paragraph 1
-Galarian Slowbro is able to maximize its power with Nasty Plot and destroy would-be checks like Kommo-o and Aegislash with a fortunate Quick Draw or Quick Claw.
-Galarian Slowbro’s coverage is mostly team dependent with what it needs to check.
-Psyshock is useful for dealing with Keldeo and Chansey while Sludge Wave lets Galarian Slowbro do more damage to Pokémon like Rotom-W while still hitting Bulletproof Kommo-o variants.
-Fire Blast is essential for hitting Steel-types like Celesteela and Aegislash.
-Ice Beam can hit common Pokemon such as Salamence, Krookodile, and Thundurus, but Grass Knot is an alternative to have a better matchup against bulkier teams as it can OHKO Quagsire and Rhyperior.
-you should talk about quick claw and quick draw together giving it a 44% chance (I think) to move first, making it dangerous to even offensive checks

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-Quick Claw Quick Draw Galarian Slowbro is best on hyper offense structures, primarily screens offense with Alolan Ninetales to take advantage of it's natural bulk.
-Galarian Slowbro can also be useful on Sticky Web teams where it can be slightly less reliant on Quick Claw + Quick Draw to outspeed Amoonguss and Aegislash variants and provide some defensive utility. These offensive builds appreciate having a Toxic Spikes absorber too.
-talk about entry hazard support from Pokémon like Krookodile to help Glowbro get KOs
-Galarian Slowbro is vulnerable to Pokemon like Krookodile and Kommo-o, making other set-up sweepers such as Galarian Moltres and Salamence good partners.
-Thundurus-I and Zarude can draw in passive Pokemon such as Chansey and Tangrowth for Galarian Slowbro. In return, Galarian Slowbro can lure Rhyperior and Kommo-o respectively.
-Tapu Bulu appreciates Galarian Slowbro’s ability to check Pokemon like Buzzwole and Salamence and can pivot into Dark-types like Krookodile and Zarude while providing Grassy Terrain for easier setup. Honestly maybe remove this, bulu isn’t too relevant too much and the decent defensive sets don’t work on hyper offense. Probably worth talking about in QC but I’d personally remove it

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
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Good job QC 2/3
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[KM]

[SET]
name: QCQD
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psyshock / Sludge Wave
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Ice Beam / Grass Knot
item: Quick Claw
ability: Quick Draw
nature: Modest
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpA

[SET COMMENTS]

Paragraph 1
Galarian Slowbro is able to maximize its power with Nasty Plot and destroy would-be checks like Kommo-o and Aegislash with a Quick Draw or Quick Claw. Together, one of Quick Draw or Quick Claw occurring is about 44%, making a fortunate Galarian Slowbro difficult to check. Galarian Slowbro’s coverage is mostly team dependent with what it needs to check. rephrase, something like "can be tailored to what it needs to check" is prob better. Psyshock is useful for dealing with Keldeo and Chansey while Sludge Wave lets Galarian Slowbro do more damage to Pokémon like Rotom-W while still hitting Bulletproof Kommo-o variants. Fire Blast is essential for hitting Steel-types like Celesteela and Aegislash. Ice Beam can hit common Pokemon such as Salamence, Krookodile, and Thundurus, but Grass Knot is an alternative to have a better matchup against bulkier teams as it can OHKO Quagsire and Rhyperior. Other combinations of these moves like Sludge Wave / Psyshock / Fire Blast or Weather Ball with Rain support are also acceptable depending on the rest of the team.

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Quick Claw Quick Draw Galarian Slowbro is best on hyper offense structures, primarily screens offense with Alolan Ninetales to take advantage of it's natural bulk. I think non-clay screens just suck so much that stressing them ever is bad. Maybe instead, second phrase should be "especially with team support from things like Memento or ATails that can ease its setup" or something similar. Galarian Slowbro can also be useful on Sticky Web teams where it can be slightly less reliant on Quick Claw + Quick Draw to outspeed Amoonguss and Aegislash variants and provide some defensive utility with its resistances and ability to absorb Toxic Spikes.. These offensive builds appreciate having a Toxic Spikes absorber too. Hazard support from Pokemon such as Krookodile can facilitate a full sweep easier. Galarian Slowbro is vulnerable to Pokemon like Krookodile and Kommo-o, making other set-up sweepers such as Galarian Moltres and Salamence good partners. Thundurus and Zarude can draw in passive Pokemon such as Chansey and Tangrowth for Galarian Slowbro. In return, Galarian Slowbro can lure Rhyperior and Kommo-o respectively.

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- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
- Quality checked by: [[Hilomilo, userid1], [Monky25, userid2], [username3, userid3]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]

3/3 x

 

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Quick Bro

[SET]
name: QCQD
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Psyshock / Sludge Wave
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Ice Beam / Grass Knot
item: Quick Claw
ability: Quick Draw
nature: Modest
evs: 252 HP / 4 Def / 252 SpA

[SET COMMENTS]

Paragraph 1
Galarian Slowbro is able to maximize its power with Nasty Plot and destroy would-be checks like Kommo-o and Aegislash with a Quick Draw or Quick Claw. Together, one of Quick Draw or Quick Claw occurring is 44%, making a fortunate Galarian Slowbro difficult to check. The chance to activate either Quick Draw or Quick Claw is 44%, which makes a fortunate Galarian Slowbro difficult to check. Galarian Slowbro can be tailored to what it needs to check. Psyshock is useful for dealing with Keldeo and Chansey,(AC) while Sludge Wave lets Galarian Slowbro do more damage to Pokémon like Rotom-W while still hitting and hit Bulletproof Kommo-o variants. Fire Blast is essential for hitting Steel-types like Celesteela and Aegislash. Ice Beam can hits common Pokemon such as Salamence, Krookodile, and Thundurus, but Grass Knot is an alternative to have a better matchup against bulkier teams,(AC) as it can OHKO Quagsire and Rhyperior. Other combinations of these moves like Sludge Wave / Psyshock / Fire Blast or Weather Ball with rain(lowercase) support are also acceptable,(AC) depending on the rest of the team.

Paragraph 2
Quick Claw Quick Draw Galarian Slowbro is best on hyper offense structures, especially with team support from Pokemon such as Alolan Ninetales,(AC) that can ease pressure on Galarian Slowbro while boosting which helps it set up much easier. Galarian Slowbro can also be is also useful on Sticky Web teams,(AC) where it can be slightly less reliant on Quick Claw + Quick Draw to outspeed Amoonguss and Aegislash variants and provide some defensive utility with its resistances and ability to absorb Toxic Spikes. Hazard Entry hazard support from Pokemon such as Krookodile can facilitate a full an easier sweep easier. Galarian Slowbro is vulnerable to Pokemon like Krookodile and Kommo-o, making so other set-up setup sweepers such as Galarian Moltres and Salamence are good partners. Thundurus and Zarude can draw in passive Pokemon such as Chansey and Tangrowth for Galarian Slowbro. In return, Galarian Slowbro can lure Rhyperior and Kommo-o respectively.

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- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
- Quality checked by: [[Hilomilo, userid1], [Monky25, userid2], [username3, userid3]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]

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