rate my team

[pkmn trainer jack]

tentacruel leftovers/black sludge
252hp/120def/136spdef
calm
liqiud ooze
toxic spikes
rapid spin
surf
sludge bomb
spinner/spiker/special wall

swampert leftovers
248hp/216def/44spdef
relaxed
stealth rock
earthquake
waterfall
roar
physical wall/SR

vaporeon leftovers
248hp/224def/36spdef
bold
wish
surf
toxic
protect
stall


kingdra damp rock/leftovers swift swim
4hp/252spatk/252spe
modest
rain dance
surf
dragon pulse
signal beam
rain dancer/psychic/dark counter


starmie life orb natural cure
252spatk/252spe/4spdef
timid
surf
thunderbolt
ice beam
recover
special sweeper

gyrados wide lens
252atk/4def/252spe
jolly
dragon dance
waterfall
stone edge
bounce
physical sweeper

 

[pkmn trainer jack]

sorry everyone im new and i know its not the best presentation but i use only water types and any advice is welcome

 

[Thundur]

You have to add descriptions or this thread will be locked. Just a heads up.

 

[Methmite]

What thundur said. Basically give a description of what each does. Monotype teams aren't necessarily bad, but you need to play them right.

 

[pkmn trainer jack]

is that good or should i add more detail?

 

[Dragone]

If you want a guide to go off of check out my RMT, http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3456788
It's over 23,000 characters long, so that should give you some ideas of what to post, as far as detail goes.

 

[Tomahawk]

You need to read the RMT Rules before posting a RMT, this team is in violation with Rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.