Monotype Rotom-C (Grass) [QC: 2/2] [GP: 1/1]

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Dark Pulse
item: Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Rotom-C's useful Electric typing, access to Nasty Plot, good Special Attack, and average Speed stat allow it to help out greatly with Flying-types and become a fearsome setup sweeper. Nasty Plot allows Rotom-C to net OHKOs against bulkier Water- and Flying-types such as Toxapex and Corviknight. Use Substitute on passive Pokemon such as Ferrothorn and Toxapex to avoid status and set up with Nasty Plot. Thunderbolt makes Rotom-C able to take on Flying-types such as Corviknight and Mandibuzz. Dark Pulse is used for neutral damage and greatly helping with Ferrothorn, Seismitoad, and Excadrill and Ghost- and Psychic-types like Aegislash and Celebi. Maximum HP makes it easier for Rotom-C to keep its Substitute while setting up on Ferrothorn, while maximum Speed with a Timid nature allows Rotom-C to outpace Togekiss.

Rotom-C's appreciate its ability to be able to threaten Flying-types such as Pelipper and Corviknight. Rotom-C loves entry hazard setters such as Ferrothorn and Roserade to sweep more easily mid- to late-game and in particular likes Ferrothorn thanks to its Steel typing allowing it to come in on Ice-type attacks. Appletun forms a good defensive core with Ferrothorn because its Dragon typing and Thick Fat makes it able to come in on Fire-type attacks from Pokemon like Dragapult and Charizard. Virizion makes a great partner due to its ability to take on Charizard and Centiskorch with Stone Edge, OHKO Alolan Ninetales with Smart Strike and Steel-type Pokemon like Excadrill. Leech Seed users such as Ferrothorn, Appletun, and Whimsicott are good partners for Rotom-C, as they wear down opposing Pokemon for it while helping it set up by providing it with more passive recovery. Whimsicott can be used for its Substitute + Leech Seed to chip Pokemon down and make it easier for Rotom-C to clean up. Whimsicott's Fairy typing and access to Moonblast also help greatly in the Dragon- and the Dark-type matchup with pressuring and taking care of Hydreigon and Grimmsnarl. Whimsicott can also use Heat Rock and Sunny Day to make Venusaur and Celebi turn into dangerous sweepers that greatly help in the Steel-type matchup, taking care of Pokemon that Rotom-C has trouble with such as Duraludon with Growth-boosted Weather Ball or Nasty Plot-boosted Earth Power .

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Grass analysis by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Quality checked by: [[Decem, 362454], [maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[The Dutch Plumberjack, 232216]]

 

[mushamu]

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Dark Pulse
item: Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Reordered this since I feel Substitute should go in tandem with Nasty Plot as you talk about it in set comments.

[SET COMMENTS]
Highlight that Nasty Plot makes it a good setup sweeper.

Talk about Substitute working together with Nasty Plot and how it lets Rotom-C avoid status. Give Ferrothorn as an example.

"Dark Pulse is used for neutral damage and greatly helping with Psychic-types like Chandelure and Aegislash. "
Chandelure and Aegislash aren't Psychic type Pokemon. Just say how it can hit a lot of Pokemon Thunderbolt can't like Ferrothorn, Seismitoad, and Excadrill, and then you can say how it hits Psychic- and Ghost-type Pokemon like Celebi and Aegislash for super effective damage too.

Chandelure is Choice Scarf, give a better example or remove it for something the Speed helps with. Talk about maximum HP too, and how it helps it set up easier while letting it use Subsitute against Ferrothorn's attacks.

"Virizon makes a great partner due to its access to Stone Edge allowing it to take on Charizard and Centiskorch and can take on troubling Steel-type Pokemon like Ferrothorn and Excadrill."
Rotom-C sets up on Ferrothorn.

Generalize Appletun's ability to take Fire attacks, it's not just Hydreigon and Torkoal, I'd do Dragapult or Charizard as an example and do like "from Pokemon such as Dragapult and Charizard". Put it after where you talk about Ferrothorn and say how they can form a good defensive core.

Would just not talk about Appletun and Whimsicott's Leech Seed and just generalize it in a separate line. So something like "Leech Seed users such as Ferrothorn, Appletun, and Whimsicott are good partners for Rotom-C as they wear down opposing Pokemon for it while helping it set up by providing it with more passive recovery." pretty much works. Talking about Whimsicott's Moonblast in that line seems fine.

"It can also use Heat Rock and Sunny Day to make Venusaur and Celebi turn into dangerous sweepers that grealty help in the Steel-type matchup due to setting up with Growth / Nasty Plot and using Weather Ball and Earth Power to take care of these."
Connect this to Rotom-C's role on Grass?

QC 1/2

 

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[maroon]

Set up Nasty Plot or use Substitute on predicted switches or on passive Pokemon such as Toxapex and Ferrothorn.
- you repeat this line or something v similar in the paragraph earlier, so remove this its just repeating info

Virizon makes a great partner due to its access to Stone Edge allowing it to take on Charizard and Centiskorch and can take on troubling Steel-type Pokemon like Excadrill.
- scarf cc can also threaten kyub and smart strike bops alolan ninetales (one of these you should def include)

QC 2/2

 

[Lumari]

remove add / fix (comments); (AC=add comma; RC=remove comma; SC=semicolon)
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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Dark Pulse
item: Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Rotom-C's has a useful Electric typing, (RH) access to Nasty Plot, good Special Attack, (AC) and average Speed stat that allows allow it to help out greatly with Flying-types to and become a fearsome setup sweeper. Nasty Plot allows Rotom-C to net OHKOs against more bulkier Water- and Flying-types such as Toxapex and Corviknight. Use Subitiute Substitute on passive Pokemon such as Ferrothorn and Toxapex to avoid status and set up with Nasty Plot. Thunderbolt makes Rotom-C able to take on Flying-types such as Corviknight and Mandibuzz. Dark Pulse is used for neutral damage and greatly helping with Ferrothorn, Seismitoad, and Excadrill and Ghost- and Psychic-types like Aegislash and Celebi. Using Maximum HP makes it easier for Rotom-C to keep its Substitute while setting up on Ferrothorn, (comma) while maximum Speed with a Timid natures nature allows Rotom-C to outpace Togekiss.

Its Rotom-C's teammates appreciates Rotom-C's Electric typing to be able appreciate its ability to threaten Flying-types such as Pelipper and Corviknight. Rotom-C loves entry hazard settlers setters such as Ferrothorn and Roserade due to making it easier to sweep more easily mid- to late-game and also in particular likes Ferrothorn thanks to its Steel typing (RH) allows allowing it to come in on Ice-type attacks. Appletun forms a good defensive core with Ferrothorn because of its Dragon typing (RH) makes it able to come in on Fire-type attacks from Pokemon like Dragapult and Charizard. Virizon Virizion makes a great partner due to its access to Stone Edge allowing it ability to take on Charizard and Centiskorch with Stone Edge, use Smart Strike to OHKO Alolan Ninetales with Smart Strike, and can take on troubling Ice-types like Kyurem-B (dead) and Steel-type Pokemon like Excadrill. Leech Seed users such as Ferrothorn, Appletun, and Whimsicott are good partners for Rotom-C, (AC) as they wear down opposing Pokemon for it while helping it set up by providing it with more passive recovery. Whimsicott can be used for its Substitute + Leech Seed to chip Pokemon down to and make it easier for Rotom-C to clean up. Whimsicott's Fairy typing (RH) and access to Moonblast also helps help greatly in the Dragon- and the Dark-type matchup with pressuring and taking care of Hydreigon and Grimmsnarl and can take of these with Moonblast. Whimsicott can also use Heat Rock and Sunny Day to make Venusaur and Celebi turn into dangerous sweepers that greatly help in the Steel-type matchup, (AC) due to setting up with Growth / Nasty Plot and using Weather Ball and Earth Power to take taking care of Pokemon that Rotom-C has trouble with such as Duraludon with Growth-boosted Weather Ball or Nasty Plot-boosted Earth Power.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Grass analysis by: [[Yami, 393488]]
- Quality checked by: [[Decem, 362454], [maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

 

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