Sneasel [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

[Calucha]

[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Knock Off
move 2: Icicle Crash
move 3: Ice Shard
move 4: Brick Break
item: Choice Band
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its blistering speed stat, Sneasel finds its home in NFE as the fastest unboosted wallbreaker the metagame has to offer. Knock Off is Sneasels bread and butter, allowing it to break down bulkier Pokemon by getting rid of their Eviolites, Pokemon such as Gurdurr and Piloswine. Icicle Crash is Sneasels strongest Ice STAB with a nice chance to flinch opponents. Ice Shard helps Sneasel deal with priority and Choice Scarf users, while also helping against boosted Pokemon such as Toxic Orb Quick Feet Galarian Linoone and sun boosted Gloom. Brick Break allows Sneasel to hit common switch-ins like Piloswine and Klang much harder.

Sneasels role is to be sent out and click Knock off on as many Pokemon as it safely can, then switch out to clean up later. Fighting-type Pokemon like Machoke and Gurdurr appreciate having Sneasel on the same team because it helps take care of the Psychic and Ghost-type Pokemon that threaten them like Hattrem and Haunter. Pokemon that set hazards such as Galarian Corsola and Piloswine are also great partners for Sneasel as it helps it tear through teams easier. Special Wallbreakers like Haunter that can take care of the physical walls such as Gurdurr that tank Sneasels blows are also good partners. Defensively, Ghost-type Pokemon like Galarian Corsola are great support for Sneasel as they are immune to the Fighting-type moves that can get rid of Sneasel easily. Aurora Veil is an incredibly useful tool to Sneasel, giving it an extra amount of bulk to let it more easily grab revenge kills and stay in on some things that would usually force it out, such as Piloswine or Scarfed Haunter. Lastly hazard control is important as Sneasel is weak to Stealth Rocks, so Pokemon that can get rid of them such as Rapid Spin Wartortle or Defog Gurdurr are great partners.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Calucha, 301990]]
- Quality checked by: [[SBPC, 468904], [Marjane, 355753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[Calucha]

Not completely happy with this, but for my first analysis it should do,
ready for QC~

 

[SBPC]

add remove comments

Qc 1

SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Icicle Crash
move 2: Throat Chop
move 3: Ice Shard
move 4: Brick Break
item: Choice Band
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its blistering speed stat, Sneasel finds its home in NFE as the fastest unboosted wallbreaker the metagame has to offer. Icicle Crash and Throat Chop are Sneasels strongest and best STAB options. Ice Shard helps Sneasel deal with priority and Choice Scarf users, while also helping against boosted Pokemon such as Toxic Orb Quick Feet Galarian Linoone. Brick Break allows Sneasel to hit common switch-ins like Piloswine and Klang much harder. Max attack and max speed allows Sneasel to be as fast and lethal as possible. max max evs are self explanatory and do not need commented on

Fighting-type Pokemon like Machoke and Gurdurr appreciate having Sneasel on the same team because it helps take care of the Psychic and Ghost-type Pokemon that threaten them like Hattrem and Haunter. Pokemon that set hazards such as Galarian Corsola and Piloswine are also great partners for Sneasel as it helps it tear through teams easier. Special Wallbreakers like Haunter that can take care of the physical walls give examples here that tank Sneasels blows are also good partners. Lastly Sneasel is a glass cannon, so having teammates that can tank some blows are greatly appreciated. rather than using this sentence to end off, the analysis needs some examples of mons that can support it defensively. List examples of walls that can help vs common sneasel checks, also mention that ghost types are helpful for being immune to fighting types that can remove sneasel easily.

Analysis overall needs a little beefing up id like to see it after this is implemented

 

[Calucha]

alrighty everythings implemented, I also changed throat chop to knock off cuz of the home drop, ready for another look through

 

[SBPC]

QC 1: Home

[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Icicle Crash
move 2: Knock Off
move 3: Ice Shard
move 4: Brick Break
item: Choice Band
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its blistering speed stat, Sneasel finds its home in NFE as the fastest unboosted wallbreaker the metagame has to offer. Icicle Crash is Sneasels strongest Ice STAB with a nice chance to flinch opponents. Knock Off is Sneasels bread and butter, allowing it to break down bulkier Pokemon by getting rid of their Eviolites. Ice Shard helps Sneasel deal with priority and Choice Scarf users, while also helping against boosted Pokemon such as Toxic Orb Quick Feet Galarian Linoone and sun boosted Gloom. Brick Break allows Sneasel to hit common switch-ins like Piloswine and Klang much harder.

Fighting-type Pokemon like Machoke and Gurdurr appreciate having Sneasel on the same team because it helps take care of the Psychic and Ghost-type Pokemon that threaten them like Hattrem and Haunter. Pokemon that set hazards such as Galarian Corsola and Piloswine are also great partners for Sneasel as it helps it tear through teams easier. Special Wallbreakers like Haunter that can take care of the physical walls such as Gurdurr that tank Sneasels blows are also good partners. Defensively, Ghost-type Pokemon like Galarian Corsola are great support for Sneasel as they are immune to the Fighting-type moves that can get rid of Sneasel easily. Aurora Veil is an incredibly useful tool to Sneasel, giving it an extra amount of bulk to let it more easily grab revenge kills and stay in on some things that would usually force it out, such as Piloswine or Scarfed Haunter.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Calucha, 301990]]
- Quality checked by: [[username1, userid1], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Imp this and then qc 1/2

 

[Calucha]

Nice, first check implemented, ready for the second~

 

[Eris]

qc

[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Knock Off
move 2: Icicle Crash
move 3: Ice Shard
move 4: Brick Break
item: Choice Band
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its blistering speed stat, Sneasel finds its home in NFE as the fastest unboosted wallbreaker the metagame has to offer. Icicle Crash is Sneasels strongest Ice STAB with a nice chance to flinch opponents move this after knock off, also add what mons you're hitting and how hard you're hitting them especially after a knock off. Knock Off is Sneasels bread and butter, allowing it to break down bulkier Pokemon by getting rid of their Eviolites. Ice Shard helps Sneasel deal with priority and Choice Scarf users, while also helping against boosted Pokemon such as Toxic Orb Quick Feet Galarian Linoone and sun boosted Gloom. Brick Break allows Sneasel to hit common switch-ins like Piloswine and Klang much harder expand


talk about how one is meant to use Sneasel, free switch in, knock as much as possible, switch out.
Fighting-type Pokemon like Machoke and Gurdurr appreciate having Sneasel on the same team because it helps take care of the Psychic and Ghost-type Pokemon that threaten them like Hattrem and Haunter. Pokemon that set hazards such as Galarian Corsola and Piloswine are also great partners for Sneasel as it helps it tear through teams easier. Special Wallbreakers like Haunter that can take care of the physical walls such as Gurdurr that tank Sneasels blows are also good partners. Defensively, Ghost-type Pokemon like Galarian Corsola are great support for Sneasel as they are immune to the Fighting-type moves that can get rid of Sneasel easily. Aurora Veil is an incredibly useful tool to Sneasel, giving it an extra amount of bulk to let it more easily grab revenge kills and stay in on some things that would usually force it out, such as Piloswine or Scarfed Haunter. hazard removers like tortle and gurdurr

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Calucha, 301990]]
- Quality checked by: [[SBPC, 468904], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

qc 2/2

 

[kt3]

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sneasel

[SET]
name: Choice Band
move 1: Knock Off
move 2: Icicle Crash
move 3: Ice Shard
move 4: Brick Break
item: Choice Band
ability: Inner Focus
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to its blistering speed stat Speed, Sneasel finds its home in NFE as the fastest unboosted wallbreaker the metagame has to offer. Knock Off is Sneasels bread and butter, allowing allows it to break down bulkier Pokemon such as Gurdurr and Piloswine by getting rid of their Eviolites, Pokemon such as Gurdurr and Piloswine. Icicle Crash is Sneasel's (AA) strongest Ice-type STAB move with a nice chance to flinch opponents foes (this line does not have much substance; maybe a few key threats Icicle Crash KOes?). Ice Shard helps Sneasel deal with priority and Choice Scarf users, (RC) while also helping against boosted Pokemon such as Toxic Orb Quick Feet (is this the used set name?) Galarian Linoone and sun-boosted (AH) Gloom. Brick Break allows Sneasel to hit common switch-ins like Piloswine and Klang much harder.

Sneasel's (AA) role is to be sent out with a free switch, (AC; reading above's QC check, I think this has to be said) and click use (click does not really fit well in this context) Knock Off on as many Pokemon as it safely can, and then switch out to clean up later. Fighting-type Pokemon like Machoke and Gurdurr appreciate having Sneasel on the same team (this is implied) because it helps take care of the Psychic- (AH) and Ghost-type Pokemon that threaten them like Hattrem and Haunter. Pokemon that set entry hazards such as Galarian Corsola and Piloswine are also great partners for Sneasel, (AC) as it they helps it tear through teams easier more easily. Special wallbreakers like Haunter that can take care of the physical walls such as Gurdurr that tank Sneasel's (AA) blows are also good partners. Defensively, Ghost-type Pokemon like Galarian Corsola are provide great support for to Sneasel, as they are immune to the Fighting-type moves that can get rid of Sneasel it easily. Aurora Veil is an incredibly useful tool to Sneasel, giving it an gives Sneasel extra amount of bulk to let it more easily grab revenge kills and stay in on some things Pokemon (or matchups?) that would usually force it out, such as Piloswine or Scarfed and Choice Scarf Haunter. Lastly Entry hazard control is important as because Sneasel is weak to Stealth Rocks, so Pokemon that can get rid of them (unnecessary, since you're talking about eh control anw) such as Rapid Spin Wartortle or and Defog Gurdurr are great partners (or teammates to avoid rep).

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Calucha, 301990]]
- Quality checked by: [[SBPC, 468904], [Marjane, 355753]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[Ginger Princess]

so close-

archiving, banned