Copyediting Stealth Rock Flygon [GP 0/1]

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[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Scale Shot / First Impression / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn
item: Loaded Dice / Insect Plate / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows Flygon to damage and outpace foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo, while crucially giving it coverage to threaten the tier's most common Defog user in Altaria. First Impression allows Flygon to revenge kill weakened foes like Drednaw, Munkidori, and Scream Tail. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. Dragon Tail can also be used allowing Flygon to force up sweepers like Shell Smash Drednaw and Bulk Up Scrafty, however it prefers to run other moves due to them having more utility and being more usable. U-turn lets it freely pivot and chip walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Scarf set. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery. Rocky Helmet can be used to punish Pokemon like Munkidori and Flamigo by chipping them, but Flygon lack of any recovery makes it prefer running other items. Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori, Sylveon, and Trick Room Diancie, while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar, on top of walling opposing Flygon. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge kill Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Bronzong, Galarian Slowbro, and Bellibolt to check them. Wallbreakers like Chandelure, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamigo appreciate Flygon’s U-turn giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Bronzong, and Amoonguss. Spikes setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other wear down shared checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Bronzong, Copperajah, and Wo-Chien can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Sylveon, Alolan Ninetales, and Uxie. Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provide Flygon useful recovery allowing it to repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and Kilowattrel.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: First Impression / Scale Shot / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn / Dragon Dance
item: Insect Plate / Loaded Dice / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe or 144 HP / 112 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

First Impression allows Flygon to revenge killed weakened foes like Munkidori and Scream Tail. Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows it to outpace many foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. U-turn lets it freely pivot and doing solid chip damage against walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Item set, whereas Dragon Dance makes Flygon into a great offensive utility sweeper. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery. A defensive EV spread of 144 HP / 112 Def / 252 Spe allows Flygon to maintain the ability to outspeed threats like Chandelure and Overqwil while letting it better handle wallbreakers such as Paldean Tauros-W and Infernape. I think the intent here is not really to 'handle' these wallbreakers, but to survive an attack while setting rocks or getting an attack off. Although, it can opt to run an offensive EV spread making Flygon into a offensive wallbreaker. Flip your order here to discuss them in the order they are in the set. Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori and Sylveon while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge killed Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Alolan Muk, Bronzong, and Galarian Slowbro to check them. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamingo appreciates Flygon’s U-turn letting them freely take advantage of giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Gastrodon, and Amoonguss. Others hazard setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other worn wear down their checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Porygon2, Copperajah, and Milotic can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Toxtricity, Alolan Ninetales, and Chandelure. Flygon beats two of these by itself? I'm not sure what you're saying here Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provides Flygon useful recovery allowing it to consistently check repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and the Paldean Tauros forms.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pika134.609709/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.102/
Grammar checked by:
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[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: First Impression / Scale Shot / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn / Dragon Dance
item: Insect Plate / Loaded Dice / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe or 144 HP / 112 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

First Impression allows Flygon to revenge killed weakened foes like Munkidori and Scream Tail. Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows it to outpace many foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. U-turn lets it freely pivot and doing solid chip damage against walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Item set, whereas Dragon Dance makes Flygon into a great offensive utility sweeper. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery. A defensive EV spread of 144 HP / 112 Def / 252 Spe allows Flygon to maintain the ability to outspeed threats like Chandelure and Overqwil while letting it better handle wallbreakers such as Paldean Tauros-W and Infernape. I think the intent here is not really to 'handle' these wallbreakers, but to survive an attack while setting rocks or getting an attack off. Although, it can opt to run an offensive EV spread making Flygon into a offensive wallbreaker. Flip your order here to discuss them in the order they are in the set. Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori and Sylveon while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge killed Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Alolan Muk, Bronzong, and Galarian Slowbro to check them. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamingo appreciates Flygon’s U-turn letting them freely take advantage of giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Gastrodon, and Amoonguss. Others hazard setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other worn wear down their checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Porygon2, Copperajah, and Milotic can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Toxtricity, Alolan Ninetales, and Chandelure. Flygon beats two of these by itself? I'm not sure what you're saying here Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provides Flygon useful recovery allowing it to consistently check repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and the Paldean Tauros forms.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pika134.609709/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user3.102/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
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Tag me when implemented so i can review.
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[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Scale Shot / First Impression / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn / Dragon Dance I think dragon dance just belongs on DD set and U-turn is basically mandatory on rocks sets
item: Loaded Dice / Insect Plate / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows it Flygon to damage and outpace foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo, while crucially giving it coverage to threaten the tier's most common Defog user in Altaria. First Impression allows Flygon to revenge killed weakened foes like Drednaw, Munkidori, and Scream Tail. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. Dragon Tail can also be used allowing Flygon to force up sweepers like Shell Smash Drednaw and Bulk Up Scrafty, however it prefers to run other moves due to them having more utility and being more usable. U-turn lets it freely pivot and chip walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Item Scarf set, whereas Dragon Dance makes Flygon into a great offensive sweeper. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery. Rocky Helmet can be used to punish Pokemon like Munkidori and Flamigo by chipping them, but Flygon lack of any recovery makes it prefer running other items. Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori, and Sylveon, and Trick Room Diancie, while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar, on top of walling opposing Flygon. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge kill Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Alolan Muk, Bronzong, and Galarian Slowbro, and Bellibolt to check them. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak Chandelure, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamingo appreciate Flygon’s U-turn giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Gastrodon Bronzong, and Amoonguss. Others hazard Spikes setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other wear down their shared checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Bronzong, Copperajah, and Wo-Chien can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Sylveon, Alolan Ninetales, and Milotic Uxie. Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provide Flygon useful recovery allowing it to repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and the Paldean Tauros forms Kilowattrel. If Flygon is your Tauros switch in you are beyond cooked

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pika134.609709/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/hammer798.641404/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/shengineer.312113/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
 
Tag me when implemented so i can review.
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[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Scale Shot / First Impression / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn / Dragon Dance I think dragon dance just belongs on DD set and U-turn is basically mandatory on rocks sets
item: Loaded Dice / Insect Plate / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug

[SET COMMENTS]

Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows it Flygon to damage and outpace foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo, while crucially giving it coverage to threaten the tier's most common Defog user in Altaria. First Impression allows Flygon to revenge killed weakened foes like Drednaw, Munkidori, and Scream Tail. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. Dragon Tail can also be used allowing Flygon to force up sweepers like Shell Smash Drednaw and Bulk Up Scrafty, however it prefers to run other moves due to them having more utility and being more usable. U-turn lets it freely pivot and chip walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Item Scarf set, whereas Dragon Dance makes Flygon into a great offensive sweeper. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery. Rocky Helmet can be used to punish Pokemon like Munkidori and Flamigo by chipping them, but Flygon lack of any recovery makes it prefer running other items. Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori, and Sylveon, and Trick Room Diancie, while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar, on top of walling opposing Flygon. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge kill Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Alolan Muk, Bronzong, and Galarian Slowbro, and Bellibolt to check them. Wallbreakers like Toxicroak Chandelure, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamingo appreciate Flygon’s U-turn giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Gastrodon Bronzong, and Amoonguss. Others hazard Spikes setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other wear down their shared checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Bronzong, Copperajah, and Wo-Chien can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Sylveon, Alolan Ninetales, and Milotic Uxie. Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provide Flygon useful recovery allowing it to repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and the Paldean Tauros forms Kilowattrel. If Flygon is your Tauros switch in you are beyond cooked

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pika134.609709/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/hammer798.641404/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/shengineer.312113/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
Implemented the changes
 
Noticed a couple more things, mostly just trimming out the options that aren't a part of the set. After these fixes you can move it to GP [0/1]

[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Scale Shot / First Impression / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn
item: Loaded Dice / Insect Plate / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug


[SET COMMENTS]

Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows Flygon to damage and outpace foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo, while crucially giving it coverage to threaten the tier's most common Defog user in Altaria. First Impression allows Flygon to revenge kill weakened foes like Drednaw, Munkidori, and Scream Tail. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. Dragon Tail can also be used allowing Flygon to force up sweepers like Shell Smash Drednaw and Bulk Up Scrafty, however it prefers to run other moves due to them having more utility and being more usable. < Not mentioned in set and sounds a lil weird so we can just cut it out U-turn lets it freely pivot and chip walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Scarf set. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery at the cost of revealing its held item early. Rocky Helmet can be used to punish Pokemon like Munkidori and Flamigo by chipping them, but Flygon lack of any recovery makes it prefer running other items. same as above Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori, Sylveon, and Trick Room Diancie, while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar, on top of walling opposing Flygon. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge kill Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Bronzong, Galarian Slowbro, and Bellibolt to check them. Wallbreakers like Chandelure, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamigo appreciate Flygon’s U-turn giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Bronzong, and Amoonguss. Spikes setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other wear down shared checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Bronzong, Copperajah, and Wo-Chien can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Sylveon, Alolan Ninetales, and Uxie. Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provide Flygon useful recovery allowing it to repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and Kilowattrel.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pika134.609709/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/hammer798.641404/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/shengineer.312113/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
 
Noticed a couple more things, mostly just trimming out the options that aren't a part of the set. After these fixes you can move it to GP [0/1]

[SET]
name: Stealth Rock
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Earthquake
move 3: Scale Shot / First Impression / Throat Chop
move 4: U-turn
item: Loaded Dice / Insect Plate / Leftovers
ability: Levitate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spe
tera type: Steel / Fairy / Bug


[SET COMMENTS]

Scale Shot paired with Loaded Dice allows Flygon to damage and outpace foes like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo, while crucially giving it coverage to threaten the tier's most common Defog user in Altaria. First Impression allows Flygon to revenge kill weakened foes like Drednaw, Munkidori, and Scream Tail. Throat Chop allows Flygon to block sound based attacks from foes like Sylveon and Toxtricity as well as hitting Bronzong. Dragon Tail can also be used allowing Flygon to force up sweepers like Shell Smash Drednaw and Bulk Up Scrafty, however it prefers to run other moves due to them having more utility and being more usable. < Not mentioned in set and sounds a lil weird so we can just cut it out U-turn lets it freely pivot and chip walls like Bronzong, Swampert, and Gligar while bluffing a Choice Scarf set. Insect Plate increases the power of both First Impression and U-turn while Leftovers provides Flygon useful recovery at the cost of revealing its held item early. Rocky Helmet can be used to punish Pokemon like Munkidori and Flamigo by chipping them, but Flygon lack of any recovery makes it prefer running other items. same as above Tera Steel lets it better handle threats such as Munkidori, Sylveon, and Trick Room Diancie, while Tera Fairy allows it to better handle Fighting- and Dark-types like Flamigo, Scrafty, and Incineroar, on top of walling opposing Flygon. Tera Bug gives First Impression and U-turn an extra power boost, but gives Flygon a weakness against Stealth Rock.

Faster Pokemon like Munkidori, Kilowattrel, and Choice Scarf Flamigo can easily revenge kill Flygon. So it best partners with defensive walls like Bronzong, Galarian Slowbro, and Bellibolt to check them. Wallbreakers like Chandelure, Substitute Basculegion-M, and Swords Dance Flamigo appreciate Flygon’s U-turn giving them free entry on passive walls such as Vaporeon, Bronzong, and Amoonguss. Spikes setters such as Diancie, Klefki, and Overqwil synergize greatly with Flygon, since they can help each other wear down shared checks like Bronzong, Wo-Chien, and Amoonguss. Special walls like Bronzong, Copperajah, and Wo-Chien can help Flygon by better handling special attackers like Sylveon, Alolan Ninetales, and Uxie. Wish Passers like Vaporeon and Sylveon provide Flygon useful recovery allowing it to repeatedly switch into threats like Toxicroak, Munkidori, and Kilowattrel.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pika134.609709/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/hammer798.641404/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/shengineer.312113/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user4.103/
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