Vivillon [QC 3/3] [GP 0/2]

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Overview
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When Vivillon was announced, it was shrugged off as the next worthless bug/flying type. Contrary to that, Vivillon is anything but worthless. Vivillon got a fantastic present in the ability Compoundeyes, along with Quiver Dance and Hurricane. These three things were enough to transform this butterfly into a fearsome late-game sweeper. On top of all that, Vivillon gets a buffed sleep powder to incapacitate any checks that try to come in and stop it. Not all is clear skies for our little moth-like friend, as Vivillon's paper defenses combined with a 4x Stealth Rock weakness means a stiff wind could blow this thing over, even after a couple of boosts. Vivillon's base stats are also verry unimpressive, leaving it outsped by a bunch of common scarfers, even at +1. Factor in the common Rock, Steel, and Electric types that infest the metagame, and it is evident that Vivillon needs bit of support before it can mindlessly just set up and sweep everything. If you can get this mothball rolling, though, it isn't very easy to stop it.

Sleep n' Sweep
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name: Sleep n' Sweep
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Quiver Dance
move 3: Hurricane
move 4: Sleep Powder
ability: Compound Eyes
item: Leftovers
evs: 252 SAtk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd
nature: Timid

Moves
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Substitute can be used for many different things: to capitalize on switches caused by Sleep Powder, to ease setup, or to give you a safety net if your opponent gets a one-turn sleep or if you miss a sleep powder/hurricane. Quiver Dance is the other move that makes this set work, Boosting Vivillon's mediocre Special Attack and Speed to frightening levels after just a few boosts. Hurricane is the STAB move of choice, as it's a strong, spammable move whose only downfall was bad accuracy, which is remedied by Compoundeyes. Sleep Powder, another move which previously only struggled with accuracy that is fixed by Compoundeyes allows you at least a free turn to do what you need: whether it be setup with Quiver Dance, use Substitute to scout, or incapacitate a mon that may be standing in the way of Vivillon sweeping.

Set Details
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252 EVs go into Speed to max out vivillon's admittedly underwhelming speed stat, and Special Attack is maxed as well to allow vivillon to hit as hard as possible after boosts.
The remaining 4 EVs go into Special defense instead of HP so that vivillon can switch into stealth rock twice. Leftovers give Vivillon a form of passive recovery that it can capitalize on versus sleeping opponents or while it is behind a sub.

Usage Tips
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Vivillon should be used mid to late game after the opposing team is weakened to setup and sweep. Vivillon should not try to sweep if it's counters are still alive and well, as while you can incapacitate most of them, they will be hard to break through with even a boosted resisted hurricane. Vivillon doesn't need stealth rocks removed to sweep, but it is highly recommended. It's not always best to instantaneously start quiver dancing once you get the chance; it's usually better to sleep powder and sub to scout for different sets.
It needs to be brought in cleanly, by the death of another pokemon, or by a slow volt switch, as vivillon's defenses are paper and it won't even be able to stand up to strong resisted attacks.

Team Options
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Lanturn is a fantastic partner to Vivillon, resisting ice and fire, two of vivillon's weaknesses. It also lures in grass types which vivillon can set upo on a lot of. Dugtrio is another great partner for Vivillon, trapping the steel and rock types that give it trouble. Magneton is another good partner to vivillon, as it can trap or kill most of vivillon's checks and counters. Finally, it provides a slow volt switch which allows vivillon to get in safely. A spinner or defogger like hitmonlee is appreciated because of Vivillon's 4x Weakness to Stealth Rocks. Virizion is a good teammate, as it threatens the rocks and steels vivillon hates.

Other Options
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An offensive Quiver Dance set with a life orb, sleep powder, and 2 attacks is feasible, but is worn down very easily and is very easily revenge killed, and Vivillon prefers substitute. Vivillon gets stun spore along with sleep powder you could use a dual status set. Vivillon has access to energy ball which can surprise and hurt rhyperior, but has really bad coverage. Vivillon has U-turn, which would allow it to pick up momentum and scout a potential switch after it puts something to sleep, but is relatively useless after it puts something to sleep. Vivillon gets Powder to bop any fire types trying to revenge it. Vivillon also has access to the powerful, deadly boosting move calm mind, but was deemed too amazing to include as a main set. Vivillon has a nice support movepool, including options such as Roost, Aromatherapy, and draianing kiss, but once again, Vivillon has the defenses of a paper mache house of cards.


Checks & Counters
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**Rhyperior**- Rhyperior is the main counter to SubQD Vivillon as it can sponge hurricanes and OHKO back with rock blast only being threatened by the rare Energy Ball.

**Steel types**- Steel types like magneton can take Vivillon's hurricanes all day and either cripple or kill it in return. Assault vest Escavalier is also another very solid counter as it's immune to sleep powder with overcoat, can take hurricanes relatively easily, and retaliate with a hard hitting iron head.

**Sub-breakers**- Any pokemon with access to strong sound moves or infiltrator is instantly a problem to vivillon, as it relies heavily on Substitute to sweep. Golbat OHKOs with brave bird, and Specs Exploud can take up to a +1 Hurricane and OHKO back with Boomburst.
 
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Escavalier should be added to the Checks and Counters section, it is immune to Sleep Powder, the AV version is only 3HKO'd by a +0 Hurricane, and it can easily 2HKO Vivillon with Iron Head. Apart from that, this looks good.
 
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So Kawaii (ᵔᴥᵔ)
Overview
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When Vivillon was announced, it was shrugged off as the next worthless bug/flying Bug/Flying-type. Contrary to that, but Vivillon is anything but worthless. Vivillon got a fantastic present in theability Compoundeyes, which along with Quiver Dance, Sleep Powder and Hurricane. These three things were enough to transform this butterfly into a fearsome late-game sweeper. On top of all that, Vivillon gets a buffed sleep powder to incapacitate any checks that try to come in and stop it.Not all is clear skies for our little moth-like friend though, as Vivillon's paper-thin defenses combined with a 4x Stealth Rock weakness means a stiff wind could blow it this thingover, even after Quiver Dance a couple of boosts. Vivillon's base stats are Speed is also verry unimpressive, leaving it outsped by a bunch of common Scarfers scarfers, even at +1. Factor in the common Rock, Steel, and Electric types that infest the metagame, and it is evident that Vivillon needs bit of support before it can mindlessly just set up and sweep everything. Nevertheless, if If you can get this mothball rolling, though, it isn't very easy to stop it.


Sleep n' Sweep
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name: Sleep n' Sweep
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Quiver Dance
move 3: Hurricane
move 4: Sleep Powder
ability: Compound Eyes
item: Leftovers
evs: 252 SAtk / 4 SDef / 252 Spd 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
nature: Timid

Moves
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Substitute can be used for many different things: to capitalize on switches caused by Sleep Powder, to ease setup, or to give you a safety net if your opponent gets a one-turn sleep or if you miss a sleep powder/hurricane. Quiver Dance is the other move that makes this set work, boosting Boosting Vivillon's mediocre Special Attack and Speed to frightening levels after just a few boosts. Hurricane is the STAB move of choice, as it's a strong, spammable move whose only downfall was bad accuracy, which is remedied by Compoundeyes Eyes. Sleep Powder, another move which previously only struggled with accuracy that is fixed by Compoundeyesallows you at least a one free turn to do what you need: whether it be setupset up with Quiver Dance, use Substitute to scout, or incapacitate a Pokémon that may be standing in the way of Vivillon sweeping and also benefits from Compound Eyes.


Set Details
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252 EVs go into Speed to max out vivillon's Vivillon’s admittedly underwhelming speed stat Speed, as is and Special Attack is maxed as well to allow vivillon Vivillon to hit as hard as possible after boosts. Line break, but not full paragraph break (double space); you should add another line space here.
The remaining 4 EVs go into Special defenseinstead of Defense rather than HP so that vivillon Vivillon can switch into stealth rock Stealth Rock twice. Leftovers give gives Vivillon a form of passive recovery that it can capitalize on versus sleeping opponents or while it isbehind a sub Substitute.


Usage Tips
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Vivillon should be used mid to late game, after the opposing team is weakened, to setup and sweep. (Vivillon should not try to sweep if it's counters are still alive and well, as while you can incapacitate most of them, they will be hard to break through with even a boosted resisted hurricane.) Vivillon doesn't need stealth rocks Stealth Rock removed to sweep but it is highly recommended to do so. It's not always best to instantaneously instantly start quiver dancing Quiver Dancing once you get the chance; it's usually a better choice to use Sleep Powder and Substitute sleep powder and sub to scout for your opponent’s different sets. Line break, but not full paragraph break (double space): pick one, probably full paragraph break.
It Vivillon needs to be brought in without being hit cleanly, either by the death of a teammate another pokemon, or by a teammate’s slow volt switch U-turn or Volt Switch, as Vivillon vivillon's defenses are paper and it won't even be able to stand up to strong resisted attacks if they are strong enough.


Team Options
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Lanturn is a fantastic partner to for Vivillon, resisting ice and fire Ice and Fire-type attacks, which Vivillon is weak to, and also two of vivillon's weaknesses. It also lures in grass types Grass-types, many of whom Vivillon can set up on which vivillon can set upo on a lot of. Dugtrio is another great partner for Vivillon, trapping the steel and rock types Steel and Rock-types that give it trouble. Magneton is another good partner to vivillon, as it can trap or kill most of vivillon's checks and counters. Finally, it provides a slow volt switch which allows vivillon to get in safely. A Rapid Spinner or Defogger spinner or defogger like hitmonlee Hitmonlee or <Defogger> is appreciated because of Vivillon's 4x weakness Weakness to Stealth Rocks. Virizion is a good teammate, as it threatens the rocks and steels vivillon hates. Virizion is a good teammate, as it threatens the Rock and Steel-types that Vivillon hates.


Other Options

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An offensive Quiver Dance set with a Life Orb, Sleep Powder, life orb, sleep powder, and 2 attacks is feasible, but as it is worn down very easily quickly and is very easily revenge killed, and Vivillon prefers substitute. Vivillon gets Stun Spore, which can be used alongside Sleep Powder in a double status set stun spore along with sleep powder you could use a dual status set. Vivillon has access to Energy Ball energy ball which can surprise and hurt rhyperior Rhyperior, but otherwise has really bad coverage. Vivillon has U-turn, which would allow it to pick up momentum and scout a potential switch after it puts something to sleep, but is relatively useless after it puts something to sleep. Vivillon gets Powder to bop any Fire-types fire types trying to revenge kill it. Vivillon also has access to the powerful, deadly boosting move Calm Mind calm mind, but it was deemed too amazing to include as a main set. Vivillon has a nice support movepool, including options such as Roost, Aromatherapy, and Draining Kiss draianing kiss, but once again, as Vivillon has the defenses of a paper mache house of cards, it cannot make much use of these moves.


Checks & Counters
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**Rhyperior**- (space) Rhyperior is the main best counter to SubQD Vivillon as it can sponge Hurricanes hurricanes and OHKO back with Rock Blast, even through Substitute, rock blast only being threatened by the rare Energy Ball.

**Steel types**- Steel types like Magneton magneton can take Vivillon's Hurricanes hurricanes all day and either cripple or kill it in return. Assault Vest vest Escavalier is a also another very solid counter as it's immune to sleep powder with Overcoat overcoat, can take hurricanes Hurricanes relatively easily, and retaliate with a hard hitting iron head hard-hitting Iron Head.

**Sub-breakers**- (space) Any Pokémon pokemon with access to strong sound moves or to Infiltrator infiltrator is instantly a problem to vivillon, as it Vivillon, who relies heavily on Substitute to sweep. Golbat OHKOs Vivillon with Brave Bird brave bird, and Specs Exploud can take up to even a +1 Hurricane and OHKO back with Boomburst.

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Usage Tips: This is an extremely awkward sentence, and you should rewrite it completely (as I can't fix it, lol) but use its (possessive) instead of it's (it is).

Team Options: Magneton doesn’t use Magnet Pull, so I’m not sure how this is relevant, especially as of the three Steel-types in RU it can’t trap Doublade and gets walled by Registeel and Bronzong. The Virizion sentence seems awfully specific, as it seems like any Fighting-type would work here. It should also be moved to before the Spinner / Defogger sentence.
 
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Overview
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When Vivillon was announced, it was shrugged off as the next worthless a useless bug/flying Bug / Flying type. Contrary to thatHowever, Vivillon is anything but worthless useless. Vivillon; it got a fantastic present in the ability, Compound eEyes, along with Quiver Dance and Hurricane. These three things were enough to transform this butterfly Vivillon into a fearsome late-game sweeper. On top of all that, Vivillon gets a buffed sleep powder high-accuracy Sleep Powder to incapacitate any checks that try to come in and stop it. Not all is clear skies for our little moth-like friend, asHowever, Vivillon's paper defenses combined with a 4x Stealth Rock weakness means a stiff wind could blow this thing over that it can be revenge killed easily, even after a couple of boosts. Vivillon's base stats are also verry unimpressive, leaving it outsped by a bunch of common scarfersChoice Scarf users, even at +1. Factor in the common Furthermore, due to the ubiquity of Rock-, Steel-, and Electric-types, that infest the metagame, and it is evident that Vivillon needs bit of support before it can mindlessly just set up and sweep everything. If you can get this mothball rolling, though, it isn't very easy to stop itIf Vivillon has set up, however, it won't be easy to stop it.

Sleep 'n' Sweep
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name: Sleep 'n' Sweep
move 1: Substitute
move 2: Quiver Dance
move 3: Hurricane
move 4: Sleep Powder
ability: Compound Eyes
item: Leftovers
evs: 252 SAtk SpA / 4 SDef SpD / 252 Spd Spe
nature: Timid

Moves
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Substitute can be used for many different things: to capitalize on switches caused by Sleep Powder, to ease setup, or to give you a safety net if your opponent gets a one-turn sleep or if you miss a sleep powder/hurricane. Quiver Dance is the other move that makes this set work, Boosting boosting Vivillon's mediocre Special Attack and Speed to frightening levels after just a few boosts. Hurricane is the STAB move of choice, as it's being a strong, spammable move whose only downfall was bad accuracy, which is remedied by Compound eEyes. Sleep Powder, another move which previously only struggled with accuracy that is fixed by Compoundeyes allows, whose accuracy is also fixed by Compound Eyes, gives you at least a free turn to do what you need: whether it be set up (add space) with Quiver Dance, use Substitute to scout, or incapacitate a Pokemon that may be standing in the way of Vivillon's sweeping.

Set Details
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252 EVs go into Speed to maximize out vVivillon's admittedly underwhelming sSpeed stat, and Special Attack is maximized as well to allow vVivillon to hit as hard as possible after boostings.
The remaining 4 EVs go into Special dDefense instead of HP so that vVivillon can switch into stealth rock Stealth Rock twice instead of only once. Leftovers gives Vivillon a form of passive recovery that it can capitalize on versus against sleeping opponents or while it is behind a subSubstitute.

Usage Tips
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Vivillon should be used mid- to late-game after the opposing team is weakened to set up (add space) and sweep. Vivillon should not try to sweep if it's counters are still alive and well, as while you can incapacitate most of them, they will be hard to break through with even a boosted but resisted Hurricane hurricane. Vivillon doesn't need stealth rocks Stealth Rock removed to sweep, but it is highly recommended. It's not always best to instantaneously start quiver dancing setting up once you get the chance; it's usually better to use Sleep Powder and Substitute sleep powder and sub to scout for different sets.
It needs to be brought in cleanly, by the death of another pokemon, or by a slow volt switch, as vivillon's defenses are paper and it won't even be able to stand up to strong resisted attacks. Vivillon needs to be brought in safely by a teammate being KOed or a slow Volt Switch/U-turn user, as its defenses are paper-thin and it won't be able to take even resisted attacks.

Team Options
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Lanturn is a makes for a fantastic partner to Vivillon, resisting iIce and fFire, two of vVivillon's weaknesses. It also lures in gGrass-types, which vVivillon's can set upo on a lot of. Dugtrio is another great partner for Vivillon, trapping the steel and rock types Steel- and Rock-types that give it trouble. Magneton is another good partner, as it can trap or kill KO most of vVivillon's checks and counters; it also is a slow Volt Switch user, which allows Vivillon to get in safely. Finally, it provides a slow volt switch which allows vivillon to get in safely. A spinner or dDefogger like such as hHitmonlee is appreciated because of Vivillon's 4x Wweakness to Stealth Rocks. Virizion is a good teammate, as it threatens the Rock- and Steel-types Vivillon hates. rocks and steels vivillon hates.

Other Options
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An offensive Quiver Dance set with a life orb Life Orb, sleep powder Sleep Powder, and 2 attacks is feasible, but is worn down very easily and is very easily revenge killed, and Vivillon prefers substitute Substitute. Vivillon gets stun spore along with sleep powder you could use a dual status set. Vivillon gets Stun Spore along with Sleep Powder, allowing for a dual status set. Vivillon has access to energy ball Energy Ball, which can surprise and hurt rhyperior Rhyperior, but has really bad coverage. Vivillon has U-turn, which would allow it to pick up momentum and scout a potential switch after it puts something to sleep, but is relatively useless after it puts something to sleep. Vivillon gets Powder to bop any fire Fire-types trying to revenge KO it. Vivillon also has access to the powerful, deadly boosting move calm mind Calm Mind, but Calm Mind is outclassed by Quiver Dance was deemed too amazing to include as a main set. Vivillon has a nice support movepool, including options such as Roost, Aromatherapy, and draianing kiss Draining Kiss, but once again, Vivillon has the defenses of a paper mache house of cards ; however, those are quite useless due to Vivillon's subpar bulk.


Checks & Counters
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**Rhyperior**- Rhyperior is the main counter to SubQD Vivillon, as it can sponge hurricanes Hurricane and OHKO back Vivillon with rock blast Rock Blast, only being threatened by the rare Energy Ball.

**Steel-types**- Steel-types like such as magneton Magneton can take Vivillon's hurricanes all day Hurricane with ease, and either cripple or kill KO it in return. Assault vest Vest Escavalier is also another very solid counter to Vivillon, as it's immune to sleep powder Sleep Powder with overcoat thanks to Overcoat, can take hurricanes Hurricane relatively easily, and retaliate with a hard hitting iron head powerful Iron Head.

**Sub-breakersPokemon with moves that go through Substitute**- Any pokemon Pokemon with access to strong sound moves or infiltrator Infiltrator is instantly a problem to vivillon, as it relies heavily on Substitute to sweep. Golbat OHKOes Vivillon with brave bird Brave Bird, and Specs Exploud can take up to a +1 Hurricane and OHKO back with Boomburst.
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atomicllamas I wanted to get everything rewritten before changing the title but I've been busy lately so idk if that'll happen right now, most likely later on or tomorrow
 
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