[Warstory] - The Rise of the D.Knight

[_Dark_Knight_]

Well this is my first warstory. The battle took place in Shoddybattle. This story may be lacking some humor, but I rather be a serious player. Hope you enjoy it. Here are the teams.

My(D.Knight) team:

fooly990's team:

And so the battle began:

fooly990 sent out Typhlosion.
D.Knight sent out Skarmory.
D.Knight switched in Starmie.
Typhlosion used Sunny Day.
The sun began to shine!
The sun continues to shine.

I knew I had to switch so I did. But I had forgotten that Typhlosion was able to get Solarbeam.

Starmie used Surf.
It's super effective!
Typhlosion lost 53% of its health.
Typhlosion used Solarbeam.
It's super effective!
Starmie lost 110% of its health.
D.Knight's Starmie fainted.
The sun continues to shine.

6 - 5

This early in the game and I am already down by one. I thought i didn't stand a chance anymore. Thinking he was going to use another Special move, I brought it my Special Wall.

D.Knight switched in Blissey.
Typhlosion used Fire Blast.
Blissey lost 22% of its health.
Blissey used Thunderbolt.
Typhlosion lost 24% of its health.
Typhlosion is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
The sun continues to shine.
Typhlosion's Salac Berry raised its speed!
Blissey's leftovers restored a little health!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.

Yay!Woohoo! His Typhlosion got paralyzed. He also had Salac Berry, which made no real difference to me since it was already faster.

fooly990 switched in Zangoose.
Blissey used Thunderbolt.
Zangoose lost 29% of its health.
The sun continues to shine.
Blissey's leftovers restored a little health!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.

Seeing that Blissey will die to Zangoose i switched to my Special Sweeper.

D.Knight switched in Lucario.
Zangoose used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
Lucario lost 123% of its health.
D.Knight's Lucario fainted.
Zangoose's defence was lowered.
Zangoose's special defence was lowered.
The sun faded.

6 - 4

Very bad pokemon to switch into. I didn't know what I was thinking I just did it. I thought time to set up Stealth Rock.

D.Knight switched in Skarmory.
fooly990 switched in Typhlosion.
Skarmory used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!

Hey look at that he switched, dont know why really, but it allowed me to use S.R. without taking a hit this turn. However here comes another silly mistake.

D.Knight switched in Bronzong.
Typhlosion used Fire Blast.
It's super effective!
Bronzong lost 140% of its health.
D.Knight's Bronzong fainted.

6 - 3

Oh my god! How dare I do that!? I lost another one of my teammates. Oh well...


D.Knight switched in Blissey.
fooly990 switched in Zangoose.
Pointed stones dug into Zangoose
Zangoose lost 12% of its health.
Blissey used Thunderbolt.
Zangoose lost 30% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored a little health!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.

Well now I just decided to let him think he was going to win by letting my Blissey stay in to take the Close Combat. I bet you never expected the following.

Zangoose used Close Combat.
It's super effective!
Blissey lost 144% of its health.
D.Knight's Blissey fainted.
Zangoose's defence was lowered.
Zangoose's special defence was lowered.

6 - 2

Yep I only had 2 Pokemon left. What to do, what to do...??? Hmmm...I decided to hurt his pokemon as much as I can with Stealth Rock by using Skarmory, so...

D.Knight switched in Skarmory.
fooly990 switched in Typhlosion.
Pointed stones dug into Typhlosion
Typhlosion lost 25% of its health.
fooly990's Typhlosion fainted.
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
fooly990 switched in Zangoose.
Pointed stones dug into Zangoose
Zangoose lost 12% of its health.
Zangoose's Salac Berry raised its speed!

5 - 2

Wow, Typhlosion fainted due to S.R. Guess I wasted a Whirlwind. Oh well...keep Whirlwinding...

Zangoose used Close Combat.
Skarmory lost 23% of its health.
Zangoose's defence was lowered.
Zangoose's special defence was lowered.
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
fooly990 switched in Rampardos.
Pointed stones dug into Rampardos
Rampardos lost 12% of its health.
Skarmory's leftovers restored a little health!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

So as I said I kept using Whirlwind to hurt my rival. Letting Skarmory take some hits, as it healed using Lefties.

Rampardos used Rock Polish.
Rampardos's speed was sharply raised.
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
fooly990 switched in Froslass.
Pointed stones dug into Froslass
Froslass lost 25% of its health.
Froslass's leftovers restored a little health!
Froslass restored 6% of its health.
Skarmory's leftovers restored a little health!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

Wow, i thought he would have done something by now to try to stop me from Whirlwinding his Pokemon. and why would he use Rock Polish if he knew I was going to use Whirlwind again. Unless he didn't know that...

Froslass used Thunderbolt.
It's super effective!
Skarmory lost 70% of its health.
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
fooly990 switched in Ursaring.
Pointed stones dug into Ursaring
Ursaring lost 12% of its health.
Skarmory's leftovers restored a little health!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

About time he did some good damage to me. But I keep using Whirlwind.

Ursaring used Stone Edge.
Skarmory lost 34% of its health.
D.Knight's Skarmory fainted.

5 - 1

Hehehe...I guess I wasn't able to pull of that last Whirlwind. No problem, I have him right where I want him. Though he didn't know that yet...

D.Knight switched in Garchomp.
fooly990 switched in Froslass.
Pointed stones dug into Froslass
Froslass lost 25% of its health.
Garchomp used Earthquake.
Froslass lost 84% of its health.
fooly990's Froslass fainted.

4 - 1

Guess he thought he could be able to beat me with an Ice Beam perhaps or another Ice move??? Nope, I got the first hit. :naughty:

fooly990 switched in Hariyama.
Pointed stones dug into Hariyama
Hariyama lost 6% of its health.
Garchomp used Earthquake.
Hariyama lost 55% of its health.
Hariyama used Cross Chop.
Garchomp lost 55% of its health.
Hariyama's leftovers restored a little health!
Hariyama restored 6% of its health.
Garchomp's leftovers restored a little health!
Garchomp restored 6% of its health.


OK, so I lost quite a chunk of Points there, but no problem, I'm faster...


Garchomp used Earthquake.
Hariyama lost 55% of its health.
fooly990's Hariyama fainted.
Garchomp's leftovers restored a little health!
Garchomp restored 6% of its health.

3 - 1

Another one down, three more to go...

fooly990 switched in Zangoose.
Pointed stones dug into Zangoose
Zangoose lost 12% of its health.
Garchomp used Earthquake.
Zangoose lost 100% of its health.
fooly990's Zangoose fainted.
Garchomp's leftovers restored a little health!
Garchomp restored 6% of its health.

2 - 1

Two more to go...Can I still win???

fooly990 switched in Rampardos.
Pointed stones dug into Rampardos
Rampardos lost 12% of its health.
Garchomp used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Critical hit!
Rampardos lost 321% of its health.
fooly990's Rampardos fainted.
Garchomp's leftovers restored a little health!
Garchomp restored 6% of its health.

1 - 1

OMG!!! Thank you for that Critical Hit. I don't know if it would have made a difference but hey Rampardos fainted. The last fight...

fooly990 switched in Ursaring.
Pointed stones dug into Ursaring
Ursaring lost 12% of its health.
Garchomp used Earthquake.
Ursaring lost 69% of its health.
Ursaring used Close Combat.
Garchomp lost 68% of its health.
Ursaring's defence was lowered.
Ursaring's special defence was lowered.
Garchomp's leftovers restored a little health!
Garchomp restored 6% of its health.

We are both down to our last Pokemon, most of our Pokemon's energy have been drained. Who will win this fight...???

Garchomp used Earthquake.
Ursaring lost 111% of its health.
fooly990's Ursaring fainted.
Garchomp's leftovers restored a little health!
Garchomp restored 6% of its health.
D.Knight wins!

0 - 1

Wow, I didn't believe I won at first. Sorry, but I have to say this, That was some Garchomp Pwnage! :naughty:
Thanks to fooly990 for a great match. Thought I was going to lose at first but i guess I didnt. This shows how good Garchomp can be at times.

Props:
- Garchomp for defeating more that half his team!
- Skarmory for setting up Stealth Rock, and using Whirlwind with it.
- Luck.

Hope you all enjoy this battle as I enjoyed experiencing it.

 

[Sciz]

OMG Font is Broken.

if you fix that, I'll read. Have fun :D

edit: read some, looks interesting. However, it would be nice if you would write more than a sentence for each turn.

 

[porygon3]

It gets really boring when people start writing more than 1 sentence per turn. I hate seeing things like "I didn't know what to do. I had my mechanical duck with a Nasty Plot, but he had a Blissey with alot of concentration (calm mind). I decided to switch and blah blah blah" its way too annoying

Also, nice story, though standard Garchomp sweep is kinda lame imo

edit- also,

OMG!!! Thank you for that Critical Hit. I don't know if it would have made a difference but hey Rampardos fainted. The last fight...

You did over 300%, I don't think the CH mattered

 

[Burn Jack]

My god, you so deserved to lose that. That Starmie switch, switching Bronzong in on Typhlosion; switching Lucario into something that was clearly aiming to land an SE hit on Blissey. >__>

The funny thing is, though, you didn't hax at the end: he just had nothing to stop Garchomp, which shows massive failure on fooly's part. Can you explain why you chose to lead with Skarm? It's a rather unusal choice.

 

[Andren]

Um...WTF. Garchomp taking out 5...wow.

Still, your prediction skills lack, and I believe you only won because of your opponent's lack of a Garchomp counter or Physical wall....that or something that counters Skarmory.

 

[Eo Ut Mortus]

With all due respect, I felt your opponent should've won. In fact, he would have if he had actually bothered to put a physical wall over another Pokemon, or had let another Pokemon die and then sent out Froslass (who outspeeds non-CS Chomp). I guess that's the way the cookie crumbles, though. One mistake can prove fatal than five if Garchomp is involved.

I felt that the actual story was way too one-sided. This statement may seem ridiculous considering you came back from being 5 - 1, but the majority of the story was just fooly annihilating most of your team until Garchomp came out. Close matches are usually the best candidates for warstories. The only time where both battlers were having a close match was the last few turns.

I guess I might be somewhat biased toward your opponent because he was more original, and during this whole story I was just yearning for the underdog to win. In terms of writing, I guess it was okay.

 

[Footnote]

This is a classic example of the 600 Club being overpowered. No Pokémon should have the power, defense, speed, typing, and movepool that Garchomp does. If it weren't for your Garchomp, this battle would have gone to your opponent.

 

[Hipmonlee]

This was just.. A really bad battle..

If you want to make a warstory, you need better subject material, or it wont matter how much humour you add..

Have a nice day.

 

[chaos]

font isnt broken, its removed

and dont post retarded ass cat macros