Choice Band Azumarill [QC 0/1]

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Azumarill @ Choice Band
Ability: Huge Power
EVs: 92 HP / 252 Atk / 164 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Play Rough
- Aqua Jet
- Liquidation
- Knock Off / Superpower / Ice Punch

Azumarill's coveted access to Huge Power, which doubles its Attack, allows it to function as a premier wallbreaker in UU with severely limited switch-ins. Its Water / Fairy typing offers excellent neutral coverage, can allow it to get into play against a foe like Infernape or Mega Sharpedo if it's healthy, and notably allows it to super effectively damage a large number of top-tier threats, which include Hydreigon, Latias, Mega Aerodactyl, and Gliscor. It also has access to strong STAB priority in the form of Aqua Jet, which can be key for picking off weakened faster threats and revenge killing certain sweepers, like Infernape and Mega Houndoom. The few Pokemon that don't fold to Azumarill's powerful STAB attacks, such as Amoonguss and Volcanion, will often take significant damage from one of its commonly run coverage moves in Knock Off, Superpower, or Ice Punch, which still puts them at risk of switching in safely. However, Azumarill is not without its perks despite its devastating offensive presence. Choice Band is necessary for supplying it with its great power, though its attacks can all be punishable if locked into given the presence of both Grass- and Steel-types in the tier. Azumarill is also quite slow, which makes offensively pressuring it and wearing it down over time a generally easy task. It can also struggle to combat a few particularly bulky defensive Pokemon, most notably Mega Aggron and Mega Slowbro, which are both capable of repeatedly taking hits. All in all, Azumarill has apparent struggles in the metagame, though the sheer offensive presence it exerts and its general lack of defensive counterplay keeps it among the best physical attackers the UnderUsed metagame has to offer.
 
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So uh what's the story here? It's been a month. I guess we could be waiting for tier shifts but doesn't really explain how this has been sitting here for so long.
 

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This is frankly way too long for a simple set spotlight (for reference, it should try not to exceed 1000 characters and this is around 1700). To prevent this from sounding like an analysis overview, remove stuff that anyone would know like how Azumarill gets Huge Power and that it doubles Attack and really just assuming people on Facebook reading this have the basic knowledge like what type the Pokemon is and what moves it gets.

Next, the spotlight should be a focus on the set, not what the Pokemon itself does, especially since Azumarill can function as a wallbreaker with this set, cleaner with BD, and stallbreaker with Perish trap. Essentially, first line could read "Choice Band Azumarill functions as a premier wallbreaker in UU with severely limited switch-ins." From there, the part about Azumarill's typing and moves is fine, just shorten it. In general, you don't need to go into what each move does as long as the not so obvious stuff (like what the coverage is for is elaborated on), so something like:
- Typing allows it to gain multiple opportunities to switch in
- STAB moves have great neutral coverage and priority Aqua Jet picks off threats like....
- Ice Punch and Knock Off (remove Superpower since it's been a million years since I've seen anyone use it) are great for the threats that can take Azumarill's STAB moves somewhat comfortably like Amoonguss and Volcanion

"However, Azumarill is not without its perks despite its devastating offensive presence. " It's a spotlight but this type of fluff is still redundant. Remove it. You did a fine job talking about its shortcomings, but I don't see much in terms of how to overcome those shortcomings or really anything that can complement Choice Band Azumarill's role. The entire last line can be removed to make room for this if necessary.

Let me know when you're ready for me to look over again.
 

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remove ice punch now probably. no reason not to run knock off without amoonguss.
 

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