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I actually think having a more percentage of critical hits will be interesting considering the damage nerf it has. Which is more gamebreaking? A 200% crit very rarely, or a 150% occasionally? I believe the latter to be more impactful.
Hey, I really like your Dusclops and your Marowak. I really would like these for my Pokemon Battle Revolution team. I could offer you credits, or I still have a small of Pokemon left in my shop. Thank you for your time.
You forgot the period at the end there my friend.
On-topic: Cloyster is indeed very powerful, however; I believe that Cloyster can be fairly reliably countered by the more prominent Grass-types out there.
Actually I just look onling for something called, "Pokemon Devamps". Give it a google search and you will find 3rd and 4th and (a couple) 5th Generation Pokemon made to look like the RBYGSC spriting style.
Make Friends can give Truant to other Pokemon. I saw a trapping strat with Shandera where this guy had Aianto use Make Friends against a Gliscor, then had his Shandera set up 6 CMs and sweep the other guy's team on PO.