RMT- My first team (newbie)

[stormfyre]

Hello, This is my first post/thread. I would like some comments/suggestions on this team. Thanks.
(I am new to PO, but i was at SB for atleast a few months.)

The team:
Scizor (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Technician
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- U-turn
- Superpower
- Bullet Punch
- Pursuit

Breloom (M) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs:
Hardy Nature
- Focus Punch
- Seed Bomb
- Spore
- Swords Dance

Jellicent (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Cursed Body
EVs: 248 HP / 216 Def / 44 Spd
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Scald
- Will-O-Wisp
- Recover
- Hex

Ferrothorn (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Iron Barbs
EVs: 252 HP / 204 Atk / 52 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Leech Seed
- Power Whip
- Stealth Rock
- Gyro Ball

Jolteon (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Charge Beam
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Shadow Ball

Chandelure (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Shadow Tag
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Will-O-Wisp
- Calm Mind
- Flamethrower
- Shadow Ball

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Scizor (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Technician
EVs: 248 HP / 252 Atk / 8 Spd
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
- U-turn
- Superpower
- Bullet Punch
- Pursuit

Your standard Scizor Lead. U-Turn for scouting. SP for coverage. BP for priority. Pursuit for the switch.

Breloom (M) @ Toxic Orb
Trait: Poison Heal
EVs:
Hardy Nature
- Focus Punch
- Seed Bomb
- Spore
- Swords Dance

Your regular SporePuncher, with the addition of SD. Spore, SD, FP = kill. Nut much can counter this guy.

Jellicent (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Cursed Body
EVs: 248 HP / 216 Def / 44 Spd
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Scald
- Will-O-Wisp
- Recover
- Hex

The wall/status spreader. Breloom's partner. Scald and Will-o-wisp for Burn. recover for healing. Hex for damage.

Ferrothorn (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Iron Barbs
EVs: 252 HP / 204 Atk / 52 SDef
Relaxed Nature (+Def, -Spd)
- Leech Seed
- Power Whip
- Stealth Rock
- Gyro Ball

Tank. Not much to explain here.

Jolteon (M) @ Life Orb
Trait: Volt Absorb
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
Timid Nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Charge Beam
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Shadow Ball

Standard Jolteon. CB up, TB to death.

Chandelure (M) @ Leftovers
Trait: Shadow Tag
EVs: 255 SAtk / 255 Spd
Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
- Will-O-Wisp
- Calm Mind
- Flamethrower
- Shadow Ball

Wall breaker. 2HKOs Blisseys. Shadow Tag to keep them in. CM to set up.





Suggestions Please? thanks.

 

[Max212]

You really should make your descriptions longer before a good ol' mod locks this away.

 

[blastoiseboy19]

Yeah. What he said. And you might want to use this Breloom set (that I also use):

@Toxic Orb
Poison Heal
EV's: 4 HP, 252 Atk, 252 Spd
Jolly (+Spd, -SAtk)
Spore
Focus Punch
Seed Bomb
Facade

Moves are for awesome coverage. Spore when you get out which will activate your Toxic Orb. Whether they switch or not is up tto them, but it will give you an oppurtunity to attack. You likely won't have an oppurtunity to boost. This is virtually a 2mon KO; sleep and an attack.

 

[AxellionS]

Isn't Shadow Tag on Chandelure Ubers?

 

[Vox2]

I would replace seed bomb on breloom for a substitute. Add volt switch on volteon