Finchinator I like the images you present in most of the poems and the way you use words to describe emotions! I think what you could do to make your poetry better, though, is to make it (a) tighter and (b) a little less direct.
With (a), I feel like you use a lot of extra words that sort of spoil the rhythm of the poem, but don't really add meaning to it. Like in the Decent Humanity Gone Indecent one:
The “good guy” is actually just labeled as such because he does the least “bad”
We all cheat, steal, and lie
No, you may not believe me
But each and every day we find ourselves cheating ourselves
But each and every day we find ourselves stealing from ourselves
But each and every day we find ourselves lying to ourselves
I'm not sure if it's just because my style of poetry is different from yours, but I feel like it sounds better if you cut out unnecessary words, so:
The "good guy" label comes from the least bad.
We all cheat, steal, lie, no, you may not believe me.
But we find ourselves cheating ourselves,
stealing from ourselves, lying to ourselves,
each and every day.
Of course this isn't the only way to cut words but I do think making your poems more compact would help them read better.
Also another thing with the tightness is the consistency in your poem. I really like the images you present -- the play in "Click" and the bubble and tears in "Different" are my favourites out of the ones on this page. But I feel like you didn't develop them as much as they could have been developed -- it feels as if they were put there because they sound nice, then left aside and the poem just continues and moves on to another image. I already like these images a lot, and if you did a lot more with them your poems would be amazing, so consider extending the metaphor a bit more. Maybe for example in "Different", you could play with the bubbling, the tears, the hot fire and the clouds with an image of the water cycle -- so it not only keeps all these great images but also ties them all in and creates the sense of an inescapable cycle the character feels.
With (b), I feel as if some of your poems are telling me exactly what to feel. I find that poetry's beauty lies in how multiple and deep meanings can be crafted out of simple things, and being overly direct spoils that a bit, imo.
Societal norms craft moral codes like Legos craft children’s buildings
Ironically, the latter renders more accurate results than the former
Don’t do this, don’t do that – they say
No reason needed, no justification necessary – nope
Just how we /should/ act
I don’t see instructions being given to the children with the Legos
Yet those children all seem happy
I really like this image, but I feel like it kind of gets spoiled when you tell me "(cool image). oh and this is what the image is trying to tell you". This stanza presents the image of Lego buildings = moral codes in very direct way, and then becomes even more direct when it tells us exactly what the Lego bricks are meant to represent. If you replaced the underlined portion with something more subtle, it could read like:
Societal norms craft moral codes like Legos craft children’s buildings
Instructions aren't given to the children with the Legos
Yet those children all seem happy
And the Legos all seem accurate
To be honest, I still don't like the directness of the first line that much: I feel that it would be better if you simply talked about how Lego buildings are a role model that is commonly looked up to, and then hinted at societal norms and moral codes with the rest of the poem.
But yeah, I don't know how you'd feel about removing all those words, but for me it doesn't change the intended meaning of the stanza, and it makes it a lot more subtle, which I find reads better.
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so yeah, I hope the feedback I gave was at least a little bit constructive! I'm really sorry if I misinterpreted any of your poems or took out any of your original intentions from when I suggested edits to them; just take them with a pinch of salt because I'm not an experienced editor in any way. You should write more because you have lots of great ideas n_n