Hydreigon (Dragon) [QC 3/3] [GP 0/1]

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[OVERVIEW]

Dragon
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* Hydreigon is a great special attacker for Dragon teams capable of blowing past both offensive and bulkier teams.
* It can utilize various items ranging from Choice Scarf to Life Orb to deal with whichever team archetypes the team faces trouble with. A set using Choice Scarf is great versus offensive teams while balance team archetypes crumble to Life Orb Hydreigon.
* It's typing and ability Levitate gives it a free switch to Psychic, Ghost and Ground type-moves. This is especially useful in Dragon teams as it preserves the health of other members as most Dragon-type Pokemons do not have recovery.
* It's ability also gives it a nifty immunity to Spikes, Toxic Spikes and Sticky Web.
* Hydreigon has an extensive movepool with good coverage options such as Fire Blast, U-turn, Flash Cannon, Taunt, and Roost.
* It has good bulk for an offensive Pokemon thus letting it switch in on resisted hits.
* Dark is a good offensive typing, especially in tandem with Hydreigon's great Special Attack. However, it has a hard time beating Fairy-types, since they resist Dark.
* Hydreigon has an unfortunate 4X weakness to the common Fairy-types and weakness to common Fighting and Bug-types.
* It usually suffers from four-moveslot syndrome, which means it will always be walled by threats depending on what coverage it chooses to run.
* It has good Speed but is outsped by common Choice Scarf users such as Terrakion, Keldeo, Latios and faster foes like Mega Charizard X, Mega Charizard Y, Mew etc.

[SET]
name: Wallbreaker (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Earth Power
item: Choice Specs / Life Orb
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

* Dark Pulse is an easily spammable move which has no drawbacks.
* Draco Meteor deals insane damage even to resisted hits and is Hydreigon's strongest option, but has the recoil of lowering Hydreigon's Special Attack by two stages.
* Fire Blast hits opposing Steel and Bug types super effectively. It OHKOes the likes of Scizor, Ferrothorn, Heracross etc.
* Earth Power breaks Steel-types along with Fire Blast, and has great coverage, OHKOing Electric-types such as Tapu Koko and Xurkitree.

Set Details
========

* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature lets it outspeed base 95 Speed Pokemons such as Mimikyu, Kyurem-B, Mega Garchomp etc.
* Maximum investment in Special Attack allows Hydreigon to hit as hard as possible.
* Choice Specs allows Hydreigon to OHKO Magearna with Fire Blast and Azumarill after a Z-Belly Drum with Earth Power.
* Life Orb lets Hydreigon have an easier time breaking Steel-types, but the recoil reduces its longevity.
* Levitate is the only ability Hydreigon has, but is useful as it allows it to switch into Ground-type moves.

Usage Tips
========

* This set functions as an early-game wallbreaker for heavily denting the opposition through powerful attacks which another teammate can utilize.
* Dark Pulse is an easily spammable move which has little drawbacks.
* Don't fear to use Draco Meteor. It's raw power is almost always worth it. That being said, be careful if the opponent has a Fairy type such as Tapu Fini on Water teams and Togekiss on Flying as Dragon teams have no switch in to them. The Special Attack drop is quite detrimental at times.
* Use Hydreigon's typing and ability to switch in Psychic and Ground-type attacks.
* Hydreigon has relatively good bulk, so it can easily switch in on resisted hits.
* Try to use the coverage moves on the switch, as this Hydreigon set does not have the freedom to switch moves.
* Be careful when choosing what to lock yourself into. Locking yourself in Draco Meteor, for example, will allow Steel- and Fairy-type Pokemon to set up freely or will deal a large amount of damage to whatever you choose to switch into, causing a large loss of momentum.
* If using Life Orb, avoid switching Hydreigon into attacks, as it cannot afford to take much chip damage in combination of Life Orb recoil.

Team Options
========

* Garchomp provides Stealth Rock for Hydreigon which helps it accomplish some crucial KOes such as the OHKO on Physically Defensive Celesteela, Specially Defensive Skarmory, and Mandibuzz and the 2HKO on Toxapex. Garchomp is also a secondary Mimikyu check, as it can outspeed it and revenge kill it easily, relieving pressure off of Hydreigon.
* Strong Wallbreakers like Choice Band Dragonite can work together to bring down opposing special walls such as Chansey that Hydreigon struggles to get past.
* Late-game sweepers and cleaners appreciate Hydreigon leaving holes in the opposing team so that they may clean afterwards. Z-move Salamence is a good example as it can easily sweep after Hydreigon has softened up the opposition. Choice Scarf Latios is a good late-game cleaner which can come in after Hydreigon has weakened the opposition.
* Dragalge is a great teammate to deal with Fairy types while also providing Toxic Spikes which further increases Hydreigon's wallbreaking potential.
* Latias is a good teammate as it can provide hazard removal with Defog, take care of Fighting-types or provide Tailwind to make Hydreigon more threatening.
* Kyurem-B is a great mixed wallbreaker which can help Hydreigon deal with the few Specially Defensive walls it has trouble with.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: U-turn
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

* Dark Pulse is stab, and is the move Hydreigon will use the most. It also has a nifty 20% chance to flinch the target.
* Draco Meteor is a strong nuke, capable of dealing tons of damage to non resistant foes but has the drawback of reducing Hydreigon's Special Attack by two stages.
* Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Bug- and Steel-types such as Heracross, Klefki, Excadrill, and Celesteela, while OHKOing Mega Scizor and Ferrothorn, and 2HKOes non Assault Vest variants of Magearna.
* U-turn brings momentum to the team.

Set Details
========

* Maximum investment in Special Attack allows Hydreigon to hit as hard as possible.
* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature and Choice Scarf allows it to outspeed the majority of the metagame such as Scolipede, Choice Scarf Excadrill, and Cloyster at +2.
* Levitate is the only ability Hydreigon has, but it is useful for switching into Ground-type moves.

Usage Tips
========

* This set functions as a late-game cleaner when all of it's checks and counters have been sufficiently weakened.
* It also performs as a great revenge killer.
* Don't be intimidated to use U-turn, as a U-turn on a predicted switch to Chansey, Toxapex or Tyranitar will bring tons of momentum to the team.
* Use Hydreigons typing and ability to get a free switch in to Psychic and Ground-type attacks.
* Try to keep hazards on the opponent's side, as it will let Hydreigon achieve some crucial OHKOes, such as against Excadrill, Heracross, and Landorus.
* Hydreigon can also function as a good lead, as it can bring momentum with U-turn for its teammates.
* Be careful while using Draco Meteor, since Hydreigon can be setup bait due to the drop in Special Attack.
* Be careful to not take too much damage while switching in, as it can be difficult to clean late-game.

Team Options
========

* Hydreigon appreciates entry hazard support to ensure some OHKOes and 2HKOes. Garchomp can provide Stealth Rock while Dragalge provides Toxic Spikes.
* Strong Wallbreakers are appreciated to softening the opposition before cleaning with it. Choice Band Dragonite and Kyurem-B are notable. They also deal with Specially defensive walls which Hydreigon struggles to get past.
* Latios is capable of dealing with the Fighting types such as Keldeo which Hydreigon is weak to. Choice Scarf Latios also helps against opposing Dragon teams and pressures Choice Scarf Nihilego. Latias is also a good teammate as it can give hazard removal with Defog which helps Hydreigon a lot as it will be pivoting in and out.
* Hydreigon appreciates setup sweepers to weaken the opposing team before Hydreigon can clean. Dragon Dance Salamence is thus a great teammate.
* Dragalge is a great partner for Hydreigon as it somewhat mitigates Hydreigon's 4X weakness against Fairy types.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Dragon
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* A stallbreaker set with Dark Pulse, Fire Blast, Roost, and Taunt could be used to deal with stall teams, but it still can't break through Porygon2, and is useless against Fairy and offense.
* Flash Cannon could be used to hit Fairy-type super effectively, but many of them are neutral to it and Hydreigon thus loses a more important coverage.

Checks and Counters
===================

Dragon
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**Chansey**: Chansey is the perfect counter to Hydreigon, as Hydreigon can't do anything to it due to its stellar Special bulk.

**Fairy-types**: Fairy-type Pokemons can capitalize on Hydreigon's 4X weakness to Fairy-type moves, but they do have to watch out for Flash Cannon. Azumarill and Tapu Fini stand out as Hydreigon can do little damage to them.

**Fighting-types**: Fighting-types can come in on a Choice locked Hydreigon. However, they get heavily damaged by Draco Meteor. Choice Scarf Terrakion can outspeed it and OHKO it with Close Combat.

**Bug-types**: Bug-types force Hydreigon out with their super effective stabs. They do have to watch out for Fire Blast though. Araquanid can easily take any of it's move and recover through Leech Life.

**Revenge Killers**: Hydreigon can be revenge killed by faster threats like Mega Alakazam, Greninja, Garchomp, Mega Charizard-X and other Choice Scarf users such as Kyurem-B, although they cannot switch in on Hydreigon. Hydreigon is also weak to common forms of priority such as Mach Punch from Breloom , Ice Shard from Mamoswine etc. Hydreigon is not weak to Extreme Speed, but Extreme Speed from Choice Band Dragonite can KO it with some prior damage.
 
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Dharma

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Amcheck, doesnt count for QC 1/3. Implement what you agree with, or wait for feedback from QC.

[OVERVIEW]

Dragon
========

* Hydreigon is a great special attacker for Dragon teams capable of blowing past both offensive and bulkier teams.
* Can use Choice Scarf against offensive teams and Life Orb or Choice Specs against defensive teams.
* It has one of the most spammable moves in the game in Dark Pulse. I wouldnt classify dark pulse as one of the most spammable moves in the game, so probably remove this bullet.
* It's typing and ability gives it a free switch to Psychic and Ground type-moves. Mention how this is useful for dragon teams.
* Mention how levitate prevents it from being affected by webs and spikes.

* Has an extensive movepool with good coverage options. Like? Fire blast, focus blast, uturn, superpower, iron tail, roost, taunt, etc.
* Has good bulk for an offensive Pokemon thus letting it switch in on resisted hits.
* Has 4X weakness to the common Fairy-types and weakness to common Fighting and Bug-types.
* Suffers from four-moveslot syndrome, which means it will always be walled by threats depending on what coverage it chooses to run.
* It's Speed stat leaves much to be desired as it is outspeed by some offensive threats without the Choice Scarf.

[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast / U-turn
move 4: Flash Cannon / U-turn
item: Choice Scarf
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

* Dark Pulse is stab, and is the move Hydreigon will use the most. It also has a nifty 20% chance to flinch the target.
* Draco Meteor is a strong nuke, capable of dealing tons of damage to non resistant foes but has the drawback of reducing Hydreigon's Special Attack by two stages.
* Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Steel types, and OHKOes Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, two Pokemons that give Dragon teams problem. Mention that it hits troublesome steel types like magearna, klefki, and celesteela as well as bug types like heracross.
* Flash Cannon deals with Fairy types, which naturally has good matchup against Dragon teams, as well as dent Tyranitar, which often switches in on Hydreigon.
* U-turn is for bringing momentum and is an option over both coverage moves.
* Flamethrower can be run over Fire Blast as it is more reliable with perfect accuracy. Mention some important KOes that are missed if running flamethrower.

Set Details
========

* Maximum investment in Special Attack to hit as hard as possible.
* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature and Choice Scarf allows it to outspeed the majority of the metagame.
* A Modest nature is also viable to pick up some 2HKOes which it would not get otherwise, but the drop in Speed is often not worth most of times. Modest isnt good imo, remove this bullet.

Usage Tips
========

* This set functions as a late-game cleaner when all of it's checks and counters have been sufficiently weakened.
* It also performs as a great revenge killer.
* Don't be intimidated to use U-turn on a predicted switch as it will bring tons of momentum.
* What mons should it uturn out of? Notable ones include chansey, Tyranitar, and toxapex.
* Use Hydreigons typing and ability to get a free switch in to Psychic and Ground-type attacks.
* Protect Hydreigon from Knock Off, as Hydreigon is pretty useless without it's item. I wouldnt say it is entirely useless, it still sits at a decent speed tier and hits hard as well.
* Try to keep hazards on the opponent's side, as it will let Hydreigon achieve some crucial OHKOes. I don't think this bullet is really needed unless there are some absolutely necessary KOes. If so, list a few.

Team Options
========

* Dragalge is the best partner for Hydreigon as it somewhat mitigates Hydreigon's 4X weakness against Fairy types while also providing Toxic Spikes support.
* If Hydreigon is not running Fire Blast, Turtonator can be used to deal with Steel and Bug-types while also being neutral to Fairy-types. Turtonator just isnt good tbh, quite underwhelming to use on an offensive dragon team.
* Hydreigon appreciates entry hazard support to get some OHKOes and 2HKOes. Garchomp can provide Stealth Rock while Dragalge provides Toxic Spikes.
* Strong Wallbreakers are appreciated to softening the opposition before cleaning with it. Choice Band Dragonite and Kyurem-B are notable. They also deal with Specially defensive walls which is appreciated.
* Latios and Latias are both capable of dealing with the Fighting types Hydreigon is weak to.

[SET]
name: Wallbreaker (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Flash Cannon
item: Life Orb / Expert Belt
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

This looks almost identical to the previous set. Not saying that what you said is wrong, but maybe edit the phrasing a bit so they dont look identical?

* Dark Pulse is stab and the move to click the most.
* Draco Meteor is an incredibly powerful nuke which deals damage to resistant targets.
* Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Steel types, and OHKOes Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, two Pokemons that give Dragon teams problem.
* Flash Cannon deals with Fairy types, which naturally has good matchup against Dragon teams, as well as dent Tyranitar, which often switches in on Hydreigon.
* Flamethrower can be used for more accuracy, but it practically necessitates Modest nature.

Set Details
========

* Maximum investment in Special Attack to hit as hard as possible.
* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature to be as fast as possible while Speed tying with opposing Hydreigon.
* Modest can be an option if running Flamethrower. Nah.
* A Life Orb gives it a boost in all of it's attacks. Expert Belt can be used if the recoil is not wanted but is generally an inferior option. Mention some KOes that are gained with life orb.

Usage Tips
========

* This set is best utilized as an early- or mid-game wallbreaker for softening up the opposing team prior to a teammate's sweep.
* This set has the benefit of not locking into moves, but lacks the speed or power of the other sets so this has to be kept in mind while playing. Its more powerful than choice scarf, so remove the word 'power'.
* Dark Pulse is the move Hydreigon is going to use the most.
* Don't be afraid to click Draco Meteor. It deals tons of damage to most foes. Draco shouldn't be spammed freely unless it is needed for a kill, so reword this.
* Try to avoid taking needless damage, as Life Orb recoil will wear down Hydreigon pretty easily. Don't be reckless with this set. Avoid switching into attacks often or into stealth rock.
* Use Hydreigon's typing and ability to switch into predicted Psychic and Ground-type moves.
* Try to keep hazards on the opponent's side, as it will let Hydreigon achieve some crucial OHKOes and 2HKOes.
* If you predict the opponent to switch, feel free to click one of the coverage moves as Hydreigon lacks the speed in this set to reliably 2HKO some foes. This bullet doesnt say much, so maybe remove it.

Team Options
========

* Dragalge is the best partner for Hydreigon as it somewhat mitigates Hydreigon's 4X weakness to Fairy-type moves while also providing Toxic Spikes to further boost its wallbreaking capabilities.
* Rock Helmet Garchomp is another good teammate as it provides Stealth Rock while also weakens the opposing team by Rocky Helmet+Rough Skin and Dragon Tail.
* Hazard removal is appreciated as Hydreigon might kill itself by recoil. Both Latios and Latias gives Defog support and checks Fighting types. Latias stands out as it can give Hydreigon another chance through Healing Wish or make it devastating with Tailwind.
* Late-game cleaners appreciate Hydreigon softening up the opposition prior to a sweep. Choice Scarf Garchomp and Kyurem-B are some examples.

[SET]
name: Choice Specs (Dragon)
move 1: Draco Meteor
move 2: Dark Pulse
move 3: Flash Cannon
move 4: Focus Blast / Fire Blast
item: Choice Specs
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Moves
========

* Draco Meteor deals insane damage even to resisted hits and is Hydreigon's strongest option.
* Dark Pulse is an easily spammable move which does not have the recoil of Draco Meteor.
* Flash Cannon deals super effective damage to Fairy-types.
* Focus Blast is used to hit Steel and Normal types super effectively.
* Fire Blast can be used to hit Steel types like Scizor and Ferrothorn harder.
* Flamethrower can be used for more reliability and better accuracy.

Set Details
========

* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature to outspeed other base 95 Speed Pokemons.
* Maximum investment in Special Attack with Choice Specs allows Hydreigon to hit as hard as possible.
* A Modest nature is also viable to hit harder, but leaves Hydreigon be outsped by relevant threats.

Usage Tips
========

* This set functions as an early-game wallbreaker for heavily denting the opposition through powerful attacks which another teammate can utilize.
* Don't fear to use Draco Meteor. It's raw power is almost always worth it. That being said, be careful if the opponent has a Fairy type as Dragon teams have no switch in to them.
* Use Hydreigon's typing and ability to switch in Psychic and Ground attacks.
* Hydreigon has relatively good bulk, so it can easily switch in on resisted hits.
* Try to use the coverage moves on the switch, as this Hydreigon set does not have the freedom to switch moves.

Team Options
========

* Dragalge is a great teammate to deal with Fairy types while also providing Toxic Spikes which further increases Hydreigon's wallbreaking potential. Dragalge isnt the best option to have on a poison team, since it is quite slow and only useful niche aside from toxic spikes is being able to hit fairies. If this is gonna stay, it should probably be somewhere near the end of team options.
* Garchomp provides Stealth Rock for Hydreigon which helps it accomplish some crucial KOes.
* Strong Wallbreakers like Choice Band Dragonite can work together to bring down opposing walls.
* Late-game sweepers and cleaners appreciate Hydreigon leaving holes in the opposing team so that they may clean afterwards. Choice Scarf Kyurem-B, Dragon Dance Salamence and Haxorus are thus good teammates.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

Dragon
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* Dragon Pulse could be run instead of Draco Meteor to avoid recoil but Hydreigon misses the sheer power of Draco Meteor.
* Substitute and Roost could be used on the Life Orb set to avoid Status but the lack of coverage moves is not appreciated. Sub roost isnt a thing in mono, so remove this.
* A Physical Choice Band set with Outrage, U-turn, Iron Tail and Superpower can be used as a lure to Specially defensive foes like Chansey, but is too inconsistent and requires much prediction.
* Mixed life orb set with superpower.
* Taunt
* Roost


Checks and Counters
===================

Dragon
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**Fairy-types**: Fairy types can capitalize on Hydreigon's 4X weakness to Fairy-type moves, but they do have to watch out for Flash Cannon. Azumarill and Tapu Fini stand out as Hydreigon can do little damage to them. Magearna and klefki as well.

**Fighting-types**: Fighting-types can come in on a Choice locked Hydreigon. However, they get heavily damaged by Draco Meteor. Assault Vest Conkeldurr stands out as it takes little damage from Draco Meteor and can recover it with Drain Punch. Probably remove conkeldurr, it isnt too good rn.

**Bug-types**: Bug types force Hydreigon out with their super effective stabs. They do have to watch out for Fire Blast though. Araquanid can easily take any of it's move and recover through Leech Life.

**Specially Defensive Pokemons**: Specially Defensive Pokemons like Mandibuzz and Mantine avoid the 2HKO from Draco Meteor and can recover the damage through Roost. Chansey takes little to no damage from Hydreigon due to it's sky high bulk. Mandibuzz is usually defensive, so mention toxapex instead.

**Priority**: Hydreigon is weak to common forms of priority such as Mach Punch from Breloom and Conkeldurr and Vacuum Wave from Lucario, which can finish off Hydreigon with some prior damage. I would use better examples of priority than lucario and conkeldurr. Espeed dragonite, ice shard mamoswine, etc.

**Faster Pokemon**: Hydreigon has poor speed outside of its Choice Scarf set. Mega Alakazam, Greninja, Choice Scarf Kyurem-B, Garchomp, Mega Charizard-X and other Choice Scarf users can revenge kill it.
 
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You seem to have implemented most of the check already but it looks fine so implement everything just to be sure.

All three of your sets have very similar sentences, please change them up a bit instead of reusing the same sentences.

[OVERVIEW]

You have some bullets that aren't full sentences, fix that. All bullets must be complete sentences.

* Can use Choice Scarf against offensive teams and Life Orb or Choice Specs against defensive teams.
- You almost make it seem like it can switch items depending on what team it faces. 'Hydreigon can utilize various items ranging from Choice Scarf to Life Orb to deal with whichever team archetypes the team faces trouble with. A set using Choice Scarf is great versus offensive teams while balance team archetypes crumble to Life Orb Hydreigon' sounds much better. Reword this a bit if you want but you get what i'm trying to say.
* It has one of the most spammable moves in the game in Dark Pulse
- Unnecessary fluff, remove it.
* It's Speed stat leaves much to be desired as it is outspeed by some offensive threats without the Choice Scarf.
- Actually, 98 Speed is pretty fast. Reword it to something along the lines of 'It has great Speed but get outsped by common Choice Scarf users such as . . .' Give some examples too.
- Mention Levitate.
* Has an extensive movepool with good coverage options.
- Give some examples.

[SET 1]

Flash Cannon is terrible and should not be on the main set. Dark Pulse -> Draco Meteor -> Fire Blast -> U-Turn seems much better and simplifies the set too. Modest is also horrible and should not be on the main set, as the Speed tier is too good to forgo.

name: Choice Scarf (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: U-turn

item: Choice Scarf
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Moves

- Re-order the moves to Dark Pulse -> Draco Meteor -> Fire Blast -> U-Turn
- Remove Flash Cannon
* Flamethrower can be run over Fire Blast as it is more reliable with perfect accuracy.
- What KOs does Flamethrower miss out on?

Set Details

* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature and Choice Scarf allows it to outspeed the majority of the metagame.
- Examples of notable Pokemon it outspeeds?

Usage Tips

* Don't be intimidated to use U-turn on a predicted switch as it will bring tons of momentum.
* Use U-turn against predicted switches like Chansey, Tyranitar and Toxapex.
- Combine these two.
* Protect Hydreigon from Knock Off, as it hinders its viability.
- Not really? Its a decent enough switchin to Knonk Off because of the Dark-type resistance and its pretty fast even without a Choice Scarf. Nothing likes taking Knock Off.

Team Options

* Dragalge is the best partner for Hydreigon as it somewhat mitigates Hydreigon's 4X weakness against Fairy types while also providing Toxic Spikes support.
- Dragalge.. I understand what you're trying to say but Dragalge is really not a great Pokemon on Dragon teams and the fact that both Hydreigon and Dragalge usually compete for the last slot on Dragon teams means you'll rarely see both of them on the same team. Keep it but move it lower.
* Latios and Latias are both capable of dealing with the Fighting types Hydreigon is weak to
- Latias is capable of switching into Fighting-type moves and can Defog to remove hazards and prevent Hydreigon from being lowered down too quickly. Choice Scarf Hydreigon takes the pressure off from Latios and allows it to run a Life Orb set instead.

[SET 2]

I don't think a Life Orb with the exact same set as the Choice Scarf and Specs set deserves a set of its own. I do think a Stallbreaker set should be mentioned, with Taunt.

name: Stallbreaker (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Taunt
item: Life Orb / Expert Belt
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Moves

* Draco Meteor is an incredibly powerful nuke which deals damage to resistant targets.
- Weird sentence. You need to mention its damage output is far more than Dark Pulse but lowers Hydreigon's Special Attack by two stages whenever used.
* Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Steel types, and OHKOes Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, two Pokemons that give Dragon teams problem. It also hits troublesome Fairy and Steel-types like Magearna, Klefki, and Celesteela and also Bug-types like Heracross.
- Same sentence? Reword it.
- Remove Flash Cannon.
- Add Taunt.
- Re-order it to Dark Pulse -> Draco Meteor -> Fire Blast -> Flamethrower -> Taunt

Set Details

* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature to be as fast as possible while Speed tying with opposing Hydreigon.
- And outspeeds what notable threats?

Usage Tips

* This set has the benefit of not locking into moves, but lacks the speed or power of the other sets so this has to be kept in mind while playing.
- It definitely does not lack power. The difference between Choice Specs' and Life Orb's damage output is minor.
* Dark Pulse is the move Hydreigon is going to use the most.
- Why? Expand.
* Don't be afraid to click Draco Meteor. It deals tons of damage to most foes.
- But never use it unnecessarily because of the drop in Special Attack.
* Try to avoid taking needless damage, as Life Orb recoil will wear down Hydreigon pretty easily. Avoid switching into strong attacks with this set.
* Use Hydreigon's typing and ability to switch into predicted Psychic and Ground-type moves.
- These are kinda contradictory. If you're going to hard switch Hydreigon in on even the moves you're immune to, you'll end up taking some sort of chip damage that'll wear you down. Remove the second bullet.
* Try to keep hazards on the opponent's side, as it will let Hydreigon achieve some crucial OHKOes and 2HKOes.
- Examples.

Team Options

* Dragalge is the best partner for Hydreigon as it somewhat mitigates Hydreigon's 4X weakness to Fairy-type moves while also providing Toxic Spikes to further boost its wallbreaking capabilities.
- What I said earlier. Lower it down.
* Hazard removal is appreciated as Hydreigon might kill itself by recoil. Both Latios and Latias gives Defog support and checks Fighting types. Latias stands out as it can give Hydreigon another chance through Healing Wish or make it devastating with Tailwind.
- Also mention that Hydreigon takes the wallbreaker / stallbreaker role, allowing Latios to abuse its Speed to its full potential by running a Choice Scarf instead of a Life Orb.
* Late-game cleaners appreciate Hydreigon softening up the opposition prior to a sweep. Choice Scarf Garchomp and Kyurem-B are some examples.
- Choice Scarf Garchomp is not a viable set.

[SET 3]

Re-order it. Remove Flash Cannon, I stated my reasons earlier. Earth Power is a lot better than Focus Blast for combating Steel-types.

name: Choice Specs (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor

move 3: Fire Blast / Flamethrower
move 4: Earth Power

item: Choice Specs
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Moves

- Re-order it to Dark Pulse -> Draco Meteor -> Fire Blast -> Flamethrower -> Earth Power.
- Remove Flash Cannon.
- Remove Focus Blast.
- Add Earth Power.
* Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Steel types, and OHKOes Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, two Pokemons that give Dragon teams problem. It also hits troublesome Fairy and Steel-types like Magearna, Klefki, and Celesteela and also Bug-types like Heracross.
- Again, exact same sentence as the two sets above. Change the wording.

Set Details

* Maximum investment in Speed with a Timid nature to outspeed other base 95 Speed Pokemons.
- 'Other' makes it sound like Hydreigon is base 95 too. Its 98. Also give some examples.
* A Modest nature is also viable to hit harder, but leaves Hydreigon be outsped by relevant threats.
- Remove this.

Usage Tips

* Don't fear to use Draco Meteor. It's raw power is almost always worth it. That being said, be careful if the opponent has a Fairy type as Dragon teams have no switch in to them.
- Mention the Special Attack drop too.
- Be careful when choosing what to lock yourself into. Locking yourself in Draco Meteor, for example, will allow Steel- and Fairy-type Pokemon to set up freely or will deal a large amount of damage to whatever you choose to switch into, causing a large loss of momentum.

Team Options

* Dragalge is a great teammate to deal with Fairy types while also providing Toxic Spikes which further increases Hydreigon's wallbreaking potential.
- Lower it.
* Garchomp provides Stealth Rock for Hydreigon which helps it accomplish some crucial KOes.
- Examples.
* Late-game sweepers and cleaners appreciate Hydreigon leaving holes in the opposing team so that they may clean afterwards. Choice Scarf Kyurem-B, Dragon Dance Salamence and Haxorus are thus good teammates.
- Haxorus, Salamence, and Choice Scarf Kyurem-B are terrible. Use Choice Scarf Latios as an example instead.
- Mention Latias.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]

Other Options

* A Physical Choice Band set with Outrage, U-turn, Iron Tail and Superpower can be used as a lure to Specially defensive foes like Chansey, but is too inconsistent and requires much prediction.
- Remove this.
* Taunt can be used against passive Pokemons to prevent them from recovering, but this means Hydreigon has to forgo an important coverage.
- Remove this, its now on set 2.
* Roost can be used to keep Hydreigon healthy.
- Why is it unviable and what sets can it be used on?
- Mention Flash Cannon.

Checks and Counters

**Fighting-types**: Fighting-types can come in on a Choice locked Hydreigon. However, they get heavily damaged by Draco Meteor. Assault Vest Conkeldurr stands out as it takes little damage from Draco Meteor and can recover it with Drain Punch.
- Conkeldurr isn't a great example. Mention Fighting-type Pokemon that can outspeed and OHKO Hydreigon, such as Choice Scarf Terrakion.
**Priority**: Hydreigon is weak to common forms of priority such as Mach Punch from Breloom and Conkeldurr and Vacuum Wave from Lucario, Ice Shard from Mamoswine and Extreme Speed from Dragonite which can finish off Hydreigon with some prior damage.
- Remove Conkeldurr and Lucario. Hydreigon isn't 'weak' to Extreme Speed Dragonite so change the wording a bit.

QC 1/3
 
Overview:
- Dragon-types are actually usually pretty bulky (Multiscale Dragonite, Kyurem-B, Garchomp). However, they often lack recovery, so having immunities is very important.
- From your list of coverage, remove Focus Blast, Iron Tail, and Superpower.
- Base 98 Speed isn't "great". Even without Choice Scarf, it's outsped by threats like Garchomp, Mega Charizard X, Mega Charizard Y, and Mew.
- Definitely mention how good of an offensive typing Dark is, especially when used in combination with its great Special Attack. However, you should also mention that it has a hard time beating Fairy-types, since they resist Dark.

Set Order:
The wallbreaker set is the best set right now. The power is crucial for beating many types. The reason your second and third sets look similar is because they are the same set. With Life Orb, Dark Pulse + Fire Blast breaks Steel, and with Stealth Rock, it also beats Flying. Choice Specs is even more power to make it harder to switch into, so it should definitely be there as well. Combine these two sets and put it first.

The second best set is Choice Scarf, so that's fine.

The stallbreaker set uses Roost, Taunt, Dark Pulse, Fire Blast, and should be OO. While it beats Chansey (after like 30 turns), that ignores the fact that Porygon2 doesn't lose to it. Also, the set's useless against Fairy-types and offense.

Wallbreaker (Formerly your Choice Specs set):

Set:
- Choice Specs's power makes it better than Life Orb in most matchups. However, LO so good against Steel that it has to be slashed because the power drop is sometimes worth it depending on your team.
- Remove Flamethrower because it's just not good at all. Choice Specs needs Fire Blast to OHKO offensive Magearna, and Life Orb needs it to 2HKO Celesteela.

[SET]
name: Wallbreaker (Dragon)
move 1: Dark Pulse
move 2: Draco Meteor
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Earth Power
item: Choice Specs / Life Orb
ability: Levitate
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Moves:
- Draco Meteor doesn't have recoil?
- Definitely mention the two calcs I had above for Fire Blast.
- Specifically say that Earth Power breaks Steel alongside Fire Blast and has great coverage, OHKOing Tapu Koko and Xurkitree. (Also, Magnezone drops to Fire Blast anyway)
- Remove Flamethrower.

Set Details:
- For Timid, remove Alolan Ninetales, it's base 109. Add Mimikyu, the most important target.
- Remove Modest. Mimikyu outspeeds you if you use Modest.
- Add Life Orb here.
- Specific things to say about the items:
Choice Specs damage allow it to OHKO Magearna with Fire Blast and Azumarill after a Z-Belly Drum with Earth Power
Life Orb allows Hydreigon to break Steel.
- Add that Levitate allows it to switch into Ground-types.

Usage Tips:
- Mention how spammable Dark Pulse is and the fact that you can almost always just lock into it safely due to its great coverage.
- Add that if using the Life Orb set, Hydreigon should avoid switching into attacks, as it cannot afford to take much chip damage in combination with the Life Orb recoil.

Team Options:
- I'd add that Garchomp is a secondary Mimikyu check, as it outspeeds it and even has Rough Skin, able to revenge kill it easily to relieve pressure off of Hydreigon.
- Add Z-Move Salamence, which can easily sweep after Hydreigon's wallbreaks. Choice Scarf Latios is more of an example of a revenge killer, so distinguish the two.
- Add Kyurem-B, a great mixed wallbreaker that can help Hydreigon with the few special walls it has a hard time with.

Choice Scarf:

Moves:
- Fire Blast hits Excadrill and 2HKOes non-Assault Vest Magearna on the switch.
- Remove Flamethrower.
- What's this:
* U-turn is for bringing momentum and is an option over both coverage moves.

Set Details:
- Haxorus isn't a relevant example. You can use Choice Scarf Excadrill.
- Add that Levitate allows it to switch into Ground-types.

Usage Tips:
- Talk about leading with U-turn.
- Talk about being setup bait after using Draco Meteor.
- Do mention that it shouldn't take too much damage switching in, as it'll be more difficult to clean late-game if it does.

Team Options:
- Latias is a pretty bad teammate for this set.
- Note that Choice Scarf Latios is still a needed teammate to take on opposing Dragon teams and to avoid being swept being pressured by Choice Scarf Nihilego.
- Definitely add Salamence here as well. After Salamence's sweep, many checks will be weakened and Hydreigon has an easy time cleaning.

Other Options:
- Dragon Pulse is bad, remove.
- Mixed is bad. Superpower can't break Chansey.
- Roost can only be used on the Taunt Stallbreaker set. (Dark Pulse, Fire Blast, Roost, Taunt as a reminder). Do mention this.

Checks and Counters:
- Remove Special Walls. Mandibuzz and Toxapex aren't the best examples, as they're usually physically defensive and 2HKOed by Draco Meteor. Mantine is as well after Stealth Rock damage. Realistically, without type advantage, most walls are going to lose to Hydreigon.
- Give Chansey its own section at the top. It's the perfect counter to Hydreigon every time.
- Combine Priority and Faster Pokemon into Revenge Killers.

QC 2/3
 

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Just gonna repost to make sure you get this!

[Overview]:
* It's typing and ability Levitate gives it a free switch to Psychic and Ground type-moves.
+ Helpful against Ghost teams too.

[SET]
name: Wallbreaker (Dragon)

[Moves]:
* Dark Pulse is an easily spammable move which does not have the recoil of Draco Meteor.
+ Kind of have trouble understanding what you mean by "recoil of Draco Meteor" are you talking about Dark Pulse having no drawbacks? If so, I'd say that instead.
+ OHKOing the likes of Tapu Koko and Xurkitree. (Add "Electric-types such as" before Tapu Koko)

[Set Details]:
+ Talk about why Life Orb isn't much preferred as Choice Specs is (since Life Orb is slashed with it).
* Don't fear to use Draco Meteor. It's raw power is almost always worth it. That being said, be careful if the opponent has a Fairy type as Dragon teams have no switch in to them. The Special Attack drop is quite detrimental at times.
+ Give an example of a Fairy-type something like Tapu Fini on Water teams and Togekiss on Flying teams.

[Team Options]:
* Strong Wallbreakers like Choice Band Dragonite can work together to bring down opposing walls.
+ Give an example, something like Chansey that Hydreigon struggles against. And "special walls" btw.
* Latias is a good teammate as it can provide hazard removal, take care of Fighting-types or provide Tailwind to make Hydreigon more threatening.
+ with Defog <-- Add after removal


[SET]
name: Choice Scarf (Dragon)

[Moves]:
* Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Steel types, and OHKOes Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, two Pokemons that give Dragon teams problem. It also hits troublesome Fairy and Steel-types like Magearna, Klefki, Excadrill, and Celesteela and also Bug-types like Heracross. It also 2HKOes non-Assault Vest Magearna on the switch.
+ Seems a bit out of place. "Fire Blast deals super effective damage to Bug- and Steel-types such as Heracross, Klefki, Excadrill, and Celesteela, while OHKOing Mega Scizor and Ferrothorn, and 2HKOes non Assault Vest variants of Magearna.

[Usage Tips]:
* Hydreigon can function as a good lead as it can bring momentum with U-turn right off the bat.
+ "Hydregion can also function as a good lead, as it can bring momentum with U-turn for its teammates" Reads better at least
* Be careful while using Draco Meteor, since Hydreigon can be setup bait due to the recoil.
+ Nope, Draco Meteor does not give you recoil.

[Team Options]:
* Latios is capable of dealing with the Fighting types Hydreigon is weak to.
+ Give an example of a Fighting-type. Something like Keldeo.
* Dragalge is a great partner for Hydreigon as it somewhat mitigates Hydreigon's 4X weakness against Fairy types while also providing Toxic Spikes support.
+ Already mentioned it in the first sentence so you can remove that.
+ Add Latias because Hydreigon will be pivoting in and out so it would appreciate its Defog support.

[Checks and Counters]:
"Hydreigon can be revenge killed by faster threats like Mega Alakazam, Greninja, Choice Scarf Kyurem-B, Garchomp, Mega Charizard-X and other Choice Scarf users such as Kyurem-B."
+ The examples you mentioned above here generally need to be wary of Choice Scarf Hydreigon.

There's a lot of wording that needs to be fixed in this analysis, I can't help right now since the lagging is bad and I don't feel like sitting on this but check your sentences before sending it off to GP! http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/spelling-and-grammar-standards.3490681/ This resource to help you with it.

Anyway just nitpicks, well done.

QC 3/3
 
Writer is banned for being an alt, so I'm going to move this thread to locked/outdated for now. Eien and co. can decide what they want to do about the analysis.
 
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