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Nicely done. I only have minor nitpicks, mostly just adding commas which may not be entirely necessary.

So for English I read Jane Eyre (Bronte), Native Son (Wright), Hamlet (Shakespeare), and Macbeth (Shakespeare), plus an assortment of short stories, last semester. Now we're doing some poetry. I need to pick an outside reading book for English (AP Lit, senior year of high school) too. I think...

I just have grammar/spelling fixes; it otherwise looks good to me

The only suggestion I'm unsure about is Heatran's nature: For this particular team, Heatran isn't switching in on many physical attacks since I have Gyarados (and Scizor and Jirachi, although they aren't solid Scizor "counters") to take Scizor's Bullet Punches and Scizor and Jirachi to take...

This team's been doing fairly well, nothing outstanding. I think most of my losses come from misplaying rather than the team itself, but I'm sure there's still plenty of things to fix. I based the team around setting up for a Gyarados sweep. I don't want the team to be solely reliant on Gyarados...

I got a 4.0 unweighted last year (junior year) (5.0 weighted). I still have a 4.0 unweighted this year (senior year) but I have 1 non-honors class so I can't claim a 5.0 this year. I'd like to go to Stanford or somewhere good but I also want to stay local (southern California) so I don't really...

Minor nitpicks: "Due to Kingdra's balanced Attack and Special Attack, a Special variation of this set is equally as possible." "Special" should be lowercase, and "as" should be omitted (or rephrase it to "just as possible")

Fixed awkward moving and added some commas. Also, I don't see why Lustrous Orb is only an option when Spacial Rend is combined with Surf but not when combined with Fire Blast. I'm guessing that wasn't intended, but if there is a reason I think it should be explained.

I just have grammar nitpicks; everything else looks good Pokemon should be capitalized. "Notably [...]" wasn't a complete sentence. Pokemon should be capitalized. The Scyther/Poliwrath mention wasn't a complete sentence, so I merged it. You need a semicolon there because you're...

Well, still no reply, LonelyNess isn't on Shoddy right now, and I don't think I can stay on much longer today =\ edit: Yay, we got our battle in! I lost to LonelyNess, made a lot of stupid mistakes ._. Sending logs!

I still haven't got a reply from LonelyNess, and while I usually see him on Shoddy when I get on he hasn't been on lately.

in, this sounds fun!

Does Safeguard provide protection against Toxic Spikes?

Thanks for all the suggestions! So far I've made the following changes: - Replaced Bullet Punch with Stone Edge on Hitmontop - Replaced Reflect with Psycho Shift on Noctowl (doesn't go well with Toxic Spikes, but I'll probably be replacing Toxic Spikes soon) - Replaced Roar with HP Grass on...

I'm just getting started in UU with this stall team. So far it's been working pretty well for me, but I'm sure it's far from perfect. I think I went overboard with trying to force switches, though, and I'd like to make my team a tad more offensive (especially because I have very little...

The first sentence still feels awkward (I removed it), but I can't think of a better way to phrase it. Yeah, I'm pretty sure it should be "Naughty with 252 Attack EVs is self explanatory" and "124 SpA EVs provide enough Special Attack." The first part is singular because the subject is Naughty...

The threats lists (offensive and defensive) give a very nice overview of the dominant Pokemon in DP. I find it helps most to just dive into playing and get a feel for everything first - I grabbed 6 sets straight from the Smogon analysis, trying to get a decent variety, and then just played and...

Is Bold the best option for Explosion? I think Relaxed or even a -Special Defense nature would be a better option with Explosion. The only significant Pokemon you outspeed with a neutral speed nature is Blissey, which I guess is important if you want to Explode on her with low health. I don't...

Auspicious is an awkward word choice. I think just "great" would do fine. This sentence is awkwardly arranged; I'd rearrange it to: "After Thunder Waving, Dialga can either lay down Stealth Rock or lay waste to the opponent's Pokemon with its powerful attacks." Now that I think about it...

typo, I guess. Although because of parallel construction this part would fit better as something like "removal of some arbitrary Pokemon so that proper switches can be more effectively handled." Using the slashes seems kind of odd. I'd make it "leaving 6 turns of Rain for a sweeper like...