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Dice Thanks for the QC Added toxic to it's main set alexwolf I added the most important mons that he checks to the summary, but the others mentioned were already included under set details. Jukain Thanks for the QC. I'll begin writing this up

CyclicCompound I figured that out, but then missed all the uses of it in the Moves section(s). Went through and substituted the right phrase. Thanks!

TRC. Thanks for the input on specific OU special threats! Added those pokes, and gave Mega-Venusaur it's own special section as it is probably one of the best all around check to Rhyperior along with (Mega-)Blastoise

bump for additional critiques/QC imput

Because that's not a useful track in writing projects like this. It should be assumed that if something isn't mentioned in a category that there's a reason.

alexwolf added Ttar to team options, but I'm not 100% sure my reasoning is comprehensive.

Anything else I need to work on towards getting this QC approved?

Roar's interaction with Sub noted, and Dragon Tail added to OO. Jukain Thanks for the prompt replies!

Jukain alexwolf Fire Punch and Roar added to Set Details. Is Dragon Tail worth a mention for the same reason, or is Soundproof not a big enough consideration?

Those would be additional options for the last slot right?

http://www.smogon.com/forums/threads/rhyperior-qc-0-3.3496870/#post-5148670 Any other changes you'd like to see?

acebass32 --I have in my hidden tag an AV set +4 attacks. It's definitely good at some things (checking Togekiss, Thundrus, living unSTAB super effective moves), but is outclassed by a Sub+3attack set (as you're getting the benefit of lefties recovery and only taking ~19% damage from their...

I started a completely unoffical critique of it, but I think I make some good points--let me know if you want me to go through the whole thing in the same style (RemoveChangeComment). Also of general enough use to re-mention outside the tags, a reminder that the semicolon is used to separate two...

Thanks for the input on Rhyperior--are there any other changes/suggestions?

alexwolf Thank you for the feedback--I've updated my post to include the QC team's set, and hidden the others so that I can incorporate pieces into OO or as alternate sets later if needed. EDIT: Colonel M Added mention of Sub + 3 attack in the OO. Anecdotal evidence (my own games with it in...

Togekiss, Thundrus (both formes), Lati@s (at least dragon pulse, psyshock sets). Also, it still checks CharX and Talonflame, even without putting EVs into physical bulk

The line "Quagsire's EVs provide it with the most possible physical bulk as possible, making its job checking physical attackers as easy as[possible] pick another word, like "it can"." I'd go with: "These EV's provide Quagsire the most physical bulk possible, making the most of its role as a...

CyclicCompound, It also hits Celebi and Shaymin harder, as their physical bulk means they aren't OHKOed by Ice Punch, but your point is noted! Added Sub+3 attacks as the 2nd build option, pushed Offensive set down to 3rd option, Colonel M