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GP APPROVED 1/0 "while" is also reserved for chronological contexts, should be avoided when talking about differences.

Incorrect. Here, "while" is not the correct word choice, "whereas" is the one you're looking for. You are being presented with a choice. "while", along with "since" should strictly only be used for chronological purposes. For contrasts / differing choices, use "whereas", "although," and "but"...

Okuu chill on the commas, dude. gp approved

Don't waste your 4k, by all means have at it. I still play Middle Cup, but I don't think I could pioneer it and be a tier leader.

Didn't know about Roar vs Whirlwind. I thought that was just a mistake. If that's the case, then yes, I am mistaken. Giving it your own checks is always good, but I personally found it to be okay otherwise. This is indeed completed. Regarding your English, I'm not berating you, it's an...

Sweep gp 2/2

Princess Bubblegum reminding you to take a look at this.

Good shit. As expected of the Tyrant.

General studies is a piece of shit, the fact that your school has it compulsory means I'm already judging. My personal tutor at Imperial is also one of the Admissions Tutors, and he says he ignores General Studies when it's written on an application. Regarding Manchester - a lot of my friends...

not quite finished yet, still need to clean up some formatting / character encodings. also contents. <h2>Introduction</h2> <p>Breeding Pok&eacute;mon in previous generations was an enormous pain. Even if you put a huge amount of effort into breeding a Pok&eacute;mon, very little would come...

So just finished and handed in three pieces of coursework, only to have received two new ones today. At least these are just problem sheets and don't involve programming jack shit. In the past two weeks, I've had to work in Haskell, C++, Java, FSP, Prolog, and Python. I don't think I can take...

before I approve this, I want to highlight a few issues. First of all, go back and read your Set Comments paragraph. Count the number of times you use the word "lets" or "letting". I didn't make any changes there because it would end up being me rewriting almost the entire paragraph, which I...

omg literally worst

http://tappedout.net/mtg-decks/bu-zombie-hunt/ Holy shit this is a thing and it's modern legal.

Colonel M the sets now need to be in HTML form, please wrap sets information in <p></p> tags and use <br /> for new lines. Use this to also give it one more comb-over. Tag me when that's done and I'll get around to it by tonight.

The number of issues here is not insignificant. Your writing style is very sloppy. In particular, please look at your placements of commas, your clause construction, and the overall flow of your sentences. Moreover, there were a number of mistakes that Tehy highlighted that you neglected, and...

seems good

Yeah, should be okay. I didn't notice that all the sets were for Mega Ampharos only and thought some of them might be for normal Ampharos. So yeah, that's fine.

For some reason I was under the impression that Stone Edge's crit rate gave it a sheer force bonus. Rock Slide would indeed be better. Regarding EV spreads, I think that you'd want enough for Poison Jab to OHKO Sylveon, Florges, and potentially Blissey/Chansey. From there, maxing Speed and...

I would prefer just a consistent baseline of "Always append "-type", allow exceptions for Dragons and Fairies."