Sand Rainbow-Peaked at 2000 on ps

Hi guys, that's my first OU team I post here !!
The idea was to do a solid balanced team, and i think I did.
I laddered successfull with this team (Boia Deh is my account)

I'm not a good writer, so I start to introduce my team...

AT GLACE

the building phase is not so complicated...Tyranitar+keldeo is a great offensive combo,choice band tyranitar kills jellicent, celibii and other stuff that stop keldeo, so choice scarf keldeo can revenge kill and sweep a whole team.
amoongus, bronzong and rotom-w are the defensive side, they are able to stop a lot of threats.
sword-polish landorus t is a great sweeper, and also could check terrakion and scizor

THE SETS​

Old Holborn (Tyranitar) (F) @ Choice Band
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 Atk / 140 Spd / 116 HP
Adamant Nature
- Crunch
- Pursuit
- Stone Edge
- Superpower

I don't think that cbtar needs explanecion, everybody know how much powerfull is...cbtar could also OHKO ninetales with pursuit, if switch, or with stone edge,if trys a will-o-wisp

- Crunch is the main dark stab
-Stone Edge is another strog stab
-Pursuit traps latwins, celebii, jellicent (need prediction)
-Superpower is for heatran and ferrothorm




Mescaline (Amoonguss) (F) @ Leftovers
Trait: Regenerator
EVs: 252 HP / 200 Def / 56 SDef
Calm Nature
- Spore
- Giga Drain
- Clear Smog
- Hidden Power [Fire]

with regenerator amoongus is a good poke for ou, in this team better than celebi...regenerator allows it to counter keldeo and techniloom, switch out after and back with more hp

-Spore is a 100% accuracy sleep move, everyone need it
-Giga Drain hits and gives extra hp
-Clear Smog stops techniloom and sometimes other statuppers
-Hidden Power Fire hits scizor in predict, ferrotorm, forretress

CONCLUSION​

:naughty:

EXTT (if someone would like to try)


thanks for you attention

Great pokemon team, but if you want to outspeed, put a choice scarf on landorus-t and put earthquake stone edge outrage and hammer arm :) Please answer mine? http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3476270

Hello ObScurity, happy to see you here with this good RMT!

At first, I'd use Will-O-Wisp in place of Hidden Power Fire on Ferrothorn, with Will-O-Wisp you can always burn Ferrothorn and you can damage the physical sweepers. Then, I'd use this EV spread on Amoonguss: EVs: 252 HP / 28 SAtk / 228 SDef, 28 Evs in SAtk allow to break Keldeo's Substitute that can be a little problem for your team (it beats Tyranitar, Bronzong, Landorus-T and hit hard Rotom-W). Finally, I suggest you to use Life Orb in place of Leftovers on your Landorus-T, it's a sweeper so I think that more fire power can be useful. Hope I helped, good luck. Luvdisc'd.

This is definetely a good team, so nice job!

I actually cant find any evident weaknesses, maybe i would say something like a sunny team with dugtrio, but you lose only if you mispredict a dugtrio switching in and im sure this wont happen.
What i would like to do is a general fix to some of your spread. For example try out this spread on amoonguss: EVs: 244 HP / 200 Def / 28 SAtk / 32 SDef / 4 Spd with Calm nature. 244 hp gives you a perfect regenerator point, while 28 in sp. atk are there to always break the sub of calm mind keldeo even at +2. the 4 evs in speed are to outspeed others amoonguss as well as other things like Calm mind reuniclus, those few evs does not change much but can come in handy in some situations.

You also may want to consider a different spread on Landorus-t; while i know that max speed investiment can be good to outspeed Lucario and Heatran, Lucario rarely carries ice punch so its going to do extremespeed anyway, and offensive Heatran normally have air baloon so you cant kill it, so i think you can drop it to have some more bulkyness to live random hits. This spread EVs: 68 HP / 252 Atk / 188 Spd with adamant nature is what i use on my landorus-t, basically it outspeed everything after a rock polish, even Venusaur under sun and Scarfed latios. The speed drop is not that problematic i think, as i said before the only two important things you will not outspeed are Lucario and Heatran but, they are not a problem at all. Gl with your team !

PS. you may want to consider Black sludge into your amoonguss, it can help deaing with scarfed rotom or other trick users.

hi guys thanks for the rate...
l'll sure fix with your spreads...
tnx

@alex i don't like life orb, l prefer have a little recover becous of terrakion and stealth rocks
hp fire damage ferrothorm, so i can finish it with my keldeo's stab wather, so l don't lose turns and switchs