I've been meaning to post my first serious team to be reviewed for a long time now. I've just become a member of Smogon and due to an error on my computer, I cannot use shoddy or PO at the moment. Therefore this team has been built entirely around theory and has only been tested by using pokesav on my SoulSilver game.
This team is for 4th Gen OU so please don't submitt any improvement suggestions that include pokemon or moves from Gen 5.
This is my team at present...
This is my team at present...
Hazourdous Switch Duo: Forretress and Heatran
Forretress @ Leftovers
Ability: Sturdy
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 Atk
Sassy nature (+SpD, -Spe)
- Toxic Spikes
- Spikes
- Rapid Spin
- Payback
EVs: 252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 Atk
Sassy nature (+SpD, -Spe)
- Toxic Spikes
- Spikes
- Rapid Spin
- Payback
Heatran @ Leftovers
Ability: Flash Fire
EVs: 244 HP / 220 Spe / 32 SpA / 12 SpD /EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm nature (+SpD, -Atk)
- Substitute /Stealth Rock
- Torment /Flamethrower
- Protect /Roar
- Lava Plume /Protect
EVs: 244 HP / 220 Spe / 32 SpA / 12 SpD /EVs: 252 HP / 4 SpA / 252 SpD
Calm nature (+SpD, -Atk)
- Substitute /Stealth Rock
- Torment /Flamethrower
- Protect /Roar
- Lava Plume /Protect
Please state which moveset and EV Spread you think is best and WHY (either red or black)
Forretress sets down as many nentry hazards as it can whilst removing those of the opponent. It does so untill It faints or untill I predict a fire type move. If I predict a fire type move I switch In Heatran, who absorbs the fire attacks in order to power up his own. Heatran then tries to force switches using Torment, Protect and Substitute.
Good against: Most pokemon
Bad against: Bulky waters who can heal themselves from poison (e.g. Suicune and Gyarados)
and other Heatran.
Vaporeon @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 248 HP / 224 Def / 36 SpD
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect
- Surf
- Hidden Power Electric
- Protect
- Surf
- Hidden Power Electric
Vaporeon Covers The above 2 pokemon from Heatran and Gyarados. It absorbs their Stab attacks and retaliates with Surf or Hidden Power Electric respectively. I also use Vaporeon to counter Infernape because it takes very little damage from Grass knot but can hit Infernape hard with surf. I can also use Protect to force yet more switches and Wish to give my Pokemon more durability.
Hax Nightmare Duo: Jirachi and Machamp
Jirachi @ Leftovers
Ability: Serene Grace
EVs: 164 HP / 168 Atk / 176 Spe
Jolly nature (+Spe, -SpA)
- Substitute
- Thunder Wave
- Iron Head
- Fire Punch
- Thunder Wave
- Iron Head
- Fire Punch
Machamp @ Leftovers
Ability: No Guard
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Def
Adamant nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Rest
- Sleep Talk
- DynamicPunch
- Ice Punch
- Sleep Talk
- DynamicPunch
- Ice Punch
Jirachi spreads Paralsys round opponents team. This Reduces them to useless 25% of the time and reduces their speeds to Machamp's pitiful level. Depending on the pokemon I'm facing, either Jirach stays in, sets up a substitute and spams Iron Head, which has a 60% chance of causing a flinch due to Serene Grace. Otherwise I switch to Machamp and use Dynamic punch to confuse them and then attack with my 2 punching attacks, resting and sleep talking when my health gets low.
Good against: Most pokemon.
Bad against: Bulky pokemon who resist paralsys. (e.g. Hippowdon and Swampert)
Celebi @ Leftovers
Ability: Natural Cure
EVs: 252 HP / 220 Def / 36 Spe
Bold nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Grass Knot
- Recover
- Thunder Wave
- Earth Power
- Recover
- Thunder Wave
- Earth Power
Celebi holds the Bulky ground types at bay by spamming Grass Knot at their heavy bodies. I also knows thunder Wave so it can replace Jirachi should Jirachi faint early in the game. Recover provides instant recovery and Earth power is there to allow it to attack Steel types such as Heatran.
I do not want to change my two pairs at all if I can help it. Please feel free to suggest alternative Pokemon/moves to use instead of Vaporeon or Celebi, as long as you give a reason for your choice. I would be interested in hearing your thoughts on how I could counter common pokemon using my current team, and what changes you would suggest to make it work better.
Please leave a link to any of your threads If you are interested in my advice for your teams, although I'm not sure that i'll be a lot of use for 5th Gen teams!
If you want to suggest a spinblocker other than Rotom please tell me which pokemon it should replace.
Thankyou,
Chris Pepps