Pika kill (warstory)

Guys, I wanted to present a close fight I had awhile ago in Shoddy. (my first warstory too.

I can't really find images but i'll post my team, my opponents team is a surprise


Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause

the_artic_one sent out Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
werpooler2492 sent out Froslass (lvl 100 Froslass ?).
Froslass used Thunder Wave.
Bronzong is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!

---

I start with my annoyer frosslass and start with thunder wave, hopefully he wont move because Gyro ball can OHKO my frosslass

Froslass used Swagger.
Bronzong's attack was sharply raised.
Bronzong became confused!
Bronzong is confused!
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!

---

My prediction worked!! I can now Swagger him and set-up spikes.

The next few turns will be me setting spikes.

Froslass used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Bronzong is confused!
It hurt itself in its confusion!
Bronzong lost 15% of its health.

---
Froslass used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Bronzong is confused!
It hurt itself in its confusion!
Bronzong lost 17% of its health.

---
Froslass used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
Bronzong snapped out of confusion!
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Froslass fell asleep!

---

Finally, 3 layers of spikes for the prize of me sleeping, I think Fosslass can die in peace now.

Zech has entered the room.

Froslass is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Rain Dance.
Rain began to fall!
The rain continues to fall.

---

I though he'd kill me this turn but alas, he didn't

werpooler2492: hi zech again

Froslass is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
It's super effective!
Froslass lost 100% of its health.
werpooler2492's Froslass fainted.
The rain continues to fall.

---
Finally death comes to my frosslass as I send My next pokemon to avenge my frosslass.

Zech: Hello
Zech: :]

werpooler2492 switched in Muk (lvl 100 Muk ?).
Muk used Curse.
Muk's speed was lowered.
Muk's attack was raised.
Muk's defence was raised.
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzong's attack missed!
The rain continues to fall.

---

I tried to set-up, forgetting that Bronzong could hypnotize me, Thank God it missed.

Muk used Fire Punch.
It's super effective!
Bronzong lost 22% of its health.
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzong's attack missed!
The rain continues to fall.

---

After my Muk had curse, I was ready for anything he throws at me, As he tried to hypnotize me (his bronzong needs glasses) I dodged and delivered a fiery punch to Obliterate him (atleast 2KO) But alas, the opponent emerged with little damaged, As I began to ask Einstein what happened, I realized that it was raining with putout my fiery fists as it became only a punch.

werpooler2492 switched in Skarmory (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Skarmory fell asleep!
The rain continues to fall.

---

I knew Lady Luck wouldn't be so kind to me without a condition, So I called Muk back and summoned a Flying fried chicken marinated in Silver, So shiny, So majestic yet dumb enough to be hypnotise by a giant Icecream bell thingie.

Skarmory is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
It's not very effective...
Skarmory lost 34% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---

For some reason my opponent was so confident that his floating bell could kill me so he sent a flying,spinning ball of vanilla (right from the ice cream trunk) to kill me while my chicken imitates Snorlax and suffered a blow.

The next few turns are my opponents attempts to kill my chicken before it realizes that my chicken is about to wake up from the ruckus he is causing

Skarmory is fast asleep!
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.
---
Skarmory is fast asleep!
Bronzong used Gyro Ball.
It's not very effective...
Skarmory lost 34% of its health.
The rain stopped.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---
Zech has left the room.

Skarmory is fast asleep!
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.
---
Skarmory woke up!
Skarmory used Roost.
Skarmory restored 45% of its health.
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!
---


Finally, before my steel bird died, it woke up and went flying back to its nest and sleep again for one turn.(doesn't skarm ever get tired from imitating Snorlax?)

Bronzong used Rain Dance.
Rain began to fall!
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
the_artic_one switched in Kabutops (lvl 100 Kabutops ?).
Kabutops was hurt by Spikes!
Kabutops lost 25% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
---


I sent his Bronzong flying back to its trainer, and the opponent sent something I could not believe, A scyther wannabe!

Kabutops used Waterfall.
Skarmory lost 54% of its health.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
Skarmory flinched!
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---

Little did I know that Scyther wannabe caused more trouble than the real one.

Kabutops used Waterfall.
Skarmory lost 52% of its health.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
Skarmory used Roost.
Skarmory restored 50% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---

So he tried to KO me with waterfall and I in response used Roost.

Kabutops used Waterfall.
Skarmory lost 54% of its health.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
Skarmory used Roost.
Skarmory restored 50% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---
Kabutops used Swords Dance.
Kabutops's attack was sharply raised.
Skarmory used Roost.
Skarmory restored 42% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.

---

Then he tried again, I was wondering when he is going to realize that he cannot Ko me at this pace, Somehow he got hit by Einstein in the head and realized this, I predicting that he would use waterfall, used Roost again.

Kabutops used Waterfall.
Skarmory lost 93% of its health.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
Skarmory used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---

I knew that another Roost would certainly kill my Skarm so I set up rocks before I told skarm to retreat to safety.

werpooler2492 switched in Vaporeon (lvl 100 Vaporeon ?).
Kabutops used Waterfall.
The rain continues to fall.

---

I predicted that he would use waterfall again so I sent my own version of a wannabe, I sent out my very own Mermaid Wannabe to Absorb the waterfall he was going to throw at me.

Kabutops used Stone Edge.
Vaporeon lost 100% of its health.
werpooler2492's Vaporeon fainted.
Kabutops lost 10% of its health.
The rain stopped.

---

For some reason, I did realize that a swords danced, STABED, coming from 115 base poke would OHKO my mermaid wannabe.

werpooler2492 switched in Muk (lvl 100 Muk ?).
the_artic_one switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Jirachi was hurt by Spikes!
Jirachi lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Jirachi.
Jirachi lost 6% of its health.
Muk used Curse.
Muk's speed was lowered.
Muk's attack was raised.
Muk's defence was raised.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.

---

I sent Muk, my Ube flavored icecream, and my opponent, realized the awesomeness of this pokemon, retreated his scyther wannabe and released a weird entity which I named Starboywonder.

Jirachi used Rain Dance.
Rain began to fall!
Muk used Fire Punch.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 19% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.

---

After Cursing that Starboywonder, My muk realized that the awesomeness of this entity was so great that he could not stand seeing someone greater than him so my muk delivered a fiery punch at a snaillike speed only after Starboywonder finished a dance that caused it to rain again.

Jirachi used Wish.
Jirachi made a wish!
Muk used Curse.
Muk's speed was lowered.
Muk's attack was raised.
Muk's defence was raised.
The rain continues to fall.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.

---

After that, seeing the measly damage created my Fire Punch, I ordered muk to curse again while Jirachi wished, wished that Muk would stop cursing him.

Muk used Shadow Sneak.
Jirachi lost 13% of its health.
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's super effective!
Muk lost 24% of its health.
The wish came true!
Jirachi restored 45% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Muk's Black Sludge restored a little health!
Muk restored 6% of its health.

---

I granted Jirachi's wish for muk to stop cursing him, Instead I asked Muk to stalk that Jirachi to know the secret which made him awesome. On the otherhand, Jirachi, saw Muk stalking himso he rammed his giant head against my Muk.

Jirachi used Thunder.
Muk lost 19% of its health.
Muk is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Muk is paralysed! It can't move!
The rain continues to fall.
Muk's Black Sludge restored a little health!
Muk restored 6% of its health.

---

Since the Hax Gods saw the injustice that Muk was Doing to Jirachi, they gave grace to jirachi and paralyzing my Muk so Revenge was delivered.

the_artic_one switched in Donphan (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
Donphan was hurt by Spikes!
Donphan lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Donphan.
Donphan lost 6% of its health.
Muk used Curse.
Muk's speed was lowered.
Muk's attack was raised.
Muk's defence was raised.
The rain stopped.
Donphan's leftovers restored its health a little!
Donphan restored 6% of its health.
Muk's Black Sludge restored a little health!
Muk restored 6% of its health.

---

His Jirachi got scared of what might muk do after paralyzing it. So he retreated and sent a weird flying Creature from his Pokeball, And saw a movie idol, It was DUMBO!!

Muk is paralysed! It can't move!
Donphan used Roar.
werpooler2492 switched in Mamoswine (lvl 100 Mamoswine ?).
Donphan's leftovers restored its health a little!
Donphan restored 6% of its health.

---

As, I asked Disney Channel, why the **** is Dumbo here in pokemon while he should be in disney Channel, He roared back in response, so mighty that my Muk's cursing could not stand.

the_artic_one switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzong.
Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
Mamoswine used Ice Shard.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 10% of its health.

---

As I sent Dumbo's primitive relative in, he sent Belle (this is not a misspelled word, I call his Bronzong belle) which I did not notice as my Dumbo's dead relative threw ice spears at the belle.

werpooler2492 switched in Skarmory (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzong's attack missed!
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---

I was afraid what so I sent in Skarm to cope with the coming Gyro ball but instead he tried to hypnotize me and missed (boy, that bronzong really needs Glasses.)

Skarmory used Roost.
Skarmory restored 50% of its health.
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---
Skarmory used Roost.
Skarmory restored 25% of its health.
Bronzong used Rain Dance.
Rain began to fall!
The rain continues to fall.

---

I took the advantage to nurse my Steel chicken back to full health as he tries to dance.

Bronzong used Hypnosis.
Bronzong's attack missed!
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
the_artic_one switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Jirachi was hurt by Spikes!
Jirachi lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Jirachi.
Jirachi lost 6% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Jirachi's leftovers restored its health a little!
Jirachi restored 6% of its health.

---

Yet again, I have to say that his Bronzong needs glasses.....BADLY

Jirachi used Thunder.
It's super effective!
Skarmory lost 63% of its health.
Skarmory used Whirlwind.
the_artic_one switched in Ludicolo (lvl 100 Ludicolo ?).
Ludicolo was hurt by Spikes!
Ludicolo lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Ludicolo.
Ludicolo lost 12% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.
Skarmory's leftovers restored its health a little!
Skarmory restored 6% of its health.

---

I remembered Starboywonder's awesomeness and blew away starboywonder back to his pokeball as my opponent sent something
I didn't foresee what was coming, nor was I scared, because he sent a platypus that lived in hawaii.

Ludicolo used Surf.
Skarmory lost 43% of its health.
werpooler2492's Skarmory fainted.
The rain continues to fall.
---


It was unexpected that in Hawaii, Platypus' are abnormally powerful and sent my chicken to be eaten by him.

werpooler2492 switched in Mamoswine (lvl 100 Mamoswine ?).
Mamoswine used Ice Shard.
A critical hit!
Ludicolo lost 63% of its health.
the_artic_one's Ludicolo fainted.

The rain continues to fall.
---

I thought that I was going to lose this match, but it seems that the Gods wanted to play with us more and gave me the power of hax teporarily.

the_artic_one switched in Kabutops (lvl 100 Kabutops ?).
Kabutops was hurt by Spikes!
Kabutops lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Kabutops.
Kabutops lost 2% of its health.
the_artic_one's Kabutops fainted.

the_artic_one: d'oh

the_artic_one switched in Bronzong (lvl 100 Bronzong).
Pointed stones dug into Bronzong.
Bronzong lost 6% of its health.
Bronzong is paralysed! It can't move!
Mamoswine used Avalanche.
It's not very effective...
Bronzong lost 14% of its health.
The rain continues to fall.

---

My opponent was so frightened of my hax, that he sent his scyther wannabe to the field not noticing he small hit points it has left and Died.
and he sent out belle, as Dumbo's relative shouted which cause Mount Everest to collapse and fell on Belle but it seems that Mount Everest was not enough to bring down Belle.

Bronzong used Explosion.
Mamoswine lost 100% of its health.
werpooler2492's Mamoswine fainted.
the_artic_one's Bronzong fainted.
The rain continues to fall.

---

My opponent realized that he could not win against a mammoth and made a suicide pact with his bronzong and they went KABLUEWEE!!!!

the_artic_one switched in Donphan (lvl 100 Donphan ?).
werpooler2492 switched in Pikachu (lvl 100 Pikachu ?).
Donphan was hurt by Spikes!
Donphan lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Donphan.
Donphan lost 6% of its health.
Pikachu used Grass Knot.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Donphan lost 50% of its health.
the_artic_one's Donphan fainted.
The rain stopped.
---


Dumbo, hearing that his relative just died, rushed out to face Jerry (from tom and jerry) not just an ordinary Jerry, But a Jerry that could generate Electricity (I wonder what Tom did to him.) and then Dumbo was greeted by a Grass Knot powered by hax Gods and sent him to Dumbo's Funeral.

the_artic_one switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Jirachi was hurt by Spikes!
Jirachi lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Jirachi.
Jirachi lost 6% of its health.
Pikachu used Thunderbolt.
Jirachi lost 44% of its health.
the_artic_one's Jirachi fainted.

---

My opponent sent Starboywonder back again. Jerry Stayed, even knowing that the opponent has a higher base from him because he knew that a famous 50 year old character wouldn't die so easily and generated a thunderbolt so powerful that Starboywonder got knocked out. (Thank you Warner Bros.)

the_artic_one switched in Jolteon (lvl 100 Jolteon ?).
Jolteon was hurt by Spikes!
Jolteon lost 25% of its health.
Pointed stones dug into Jolteon.
Jolteon lost 12% of its health.
Jolteon used Shadow Ball.
A critical hit!
Pikachu lost 100% of its health.
werpooler2492's Pikachu fainted.

---

Disney, sent Jolteon to kill the agent of Warner Bros. But not an ordinary Jolteon, but a Jolteon souped up by haxed power, and threw a black beach ball so powerful that Jerry was thrown back to his TV show.

werpooler2492 switched in Muk (lvl 100 Muk ?).
Jolteon used Shadow Ball.
Muk lost 25% of its health.
Muk is paralysed! It can't move!
Muk's Black Sludge restored a little health!
Muk restored 6% of its health.
---


I sent Muk, to counter Disney but the hax power was still flowing to jolteon that I stopped moving.

Jolteon used Shadow Ball.
Muk lost 27% of its health.
Muk's special defence was lowered.
Muk used Poison Jab.
Jolteon lost 50% of its health.
Jolteon was poisoned!
Jolteon is hurt by poison!
Jolteon lost 12% of its health.
the_artic_one's Jolteon fainted.


But the final clash just began, and the hax God's placed all their power at this last battle, as the enemy threw a beach ball so powerful that my special defense fell, knowing this I attacked with My full STABed power move but this power wasn't enough to KO jolteon and when the smoked clear, I saw Jolteon still standing, I knew I was going to lose since I had my special defense dropped. As I told my Muk to endure the next attack, we both braced ourselves expecting an attack that would cause my to lose, but alas no attack happened, As I opened my eyes, i saw Jolteon, collapsed from the poison I inflicted at its body and......

werpooler2492 wins!
werpooler2492: gg
the_artic_one: gg
the_artic_one has left the room.


Comments would be greatly appreciated :D
 
NP, and BTW you could format the Warstory, to make it more enjoyable to read, like bolding the commentary/battle log, adding colors..etc.
 
I thought the commentary was kinda corny actually. I agree with metalforce though, you need to add formatting. Watch your grammar and punctuation too.

Thanks for the sprite resource Metalforce!

Also, I wanna point out that your play with froslass in the beginning was abysmal. You should never let a pokemon die like that. What if your spikes were spun away? Fross could block RS, set new spikes, wall stuff ect. Does she have an attacking move?
 
Some of the comments were a bit silly, and the battle didn't have much prediction. Formatting would be good as well. It was still pretty good though.

EDIT: Yeah, that Froslass play was quite poor.
 
The froslass lead only worked out cause paralysis and confusion worked 4 turns in a row. You should have thrown up a sub for protection incase the parafusion didnt work out since a gyroball would have killed you in any one of the 4 turns that parafusion actually did work.
 
After the 4th hypnosis miss I was imagining his cross-eyed Bronzong trying to hypnotize the floor or something. SLEEP DANGIT!

Good battle, nice read.
 
"I knew Lady Luck wouldn't be so kind to me without a condition, So I called Muk back and summoned a Flying fried chicken marinated in Silver, So shiny, So majestic yet dumb enough to be hypnotise by a giant Icecream bell thingie."

Straight to my sig. Lmfao lol
 
nice battle @OP
@Phonix - Thanks for your AWESOME wi-fi battle,although I STILL owned you at the end. (I love you Flash Cannon/Psychih CM Jirachi :)
 
I hate to be harsh, but the hax in the first 5 turns was rather unenjoyable. Warstories should have tension, key plays, and little to no hax. I appreciate you're effort though.
 
I hate to be harsh, but the hax in the first 5 turns was rather unenjoyable. Warstories should have tension, key plays, and little to no hax. I appreciate you're effort though.
Normally I'd agree... but Bronzong is such an annoying lead that seeing it get haxed puts a small smile on my face.
 
Your use of grammar and spelling was poor, making the commentary hard to read. That was made worse with all of the corny jokes you saturated it with:

Disney, sent Jolteon to kill the agent of Warner Bros. But not an ordinary Jolteon, but a Jolteon souped up by haxed power, and threw a black beach ball so powerful that Jerry was thrown back to his TV show.

Some of them don't even make sense.

Dumbo, hearing that his relative just died, rushed out to face Jerry (from tom and jerry) not just an ordinary Jerry, But a Jerry that could generate Electricity (I wonder what Tom did to him.) and then Dumbo was greeted by a Grass Knot powered by hax Gods and sent him to Dumbo's Funeral.

Next time lay off the 'humor'. :\

The battle was.. okay at best, you did manage to win despite some mistakes (Fire Punching in the rain..).
 
Your use of grammar and spelling was poor, making the commentary hard to read. That was made worse with all of the corny jokes you saturated it with:



Some of them don't even make sense.



Next time lay off the 'humor'. :\

The battle was.. okay at best, you did manage to win despite some mistakes (Fire Punching in the rain..).

My thoughts exactly. Alright warstory with no images/pictures/variation combined with some truly facepalm inducing commentary.
 
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