It's been a long time since I've posted a "Rate My Team" thread here on Smogon, primarily because my abilities were only subpar until recently, having been tutored by the likes of Kevin Garrett and Reachzero in the team building and competitive aspects of the OU metagame. Now that I've gotten better at battling and overall team building, I decided to create a team that would emphasize "bulky offense", being my preferred playing style.
So now, I present to you my newest team built for the Standard Ladder...
The Fury of the Storm
Description: This team relies on "bulky offense" to win games, keeping the theme of "the best offense can also be your best defense".
Standard Team Created for the OU Metagame
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Jirachi ** Suck My Hax @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 108 HP / 212 Atk / 184 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Stealth Rock
- Iron Head
- Body Slam
- Fire Punch
This specific Jirachi set was introduced to me by reachzero, and I have fallen in love with it since. I decided to go with a Jirachi lead instead of, say, Metagross, because Jirachi's combination of Body Slam and Iron Head increase my chances of pulling off a sweep in the late game by narrowing my opponent's chances of having the advantage in any given situation. The set itself is pretty straightforward: I'll usually Body Slam Azelf and Aerodactyl leads and then hit with Iron Head for a KO, I'll switch to Magnezone if I'm up against Metagross, and I'll switch to Vaporeon against Infernape and Heatran.
The EVs given on this set are an alteration to reachzero's original spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe with a Jolly Nature. Essentially, the given EVs give Jirachi an HP stat 368 for optimal Leftovers recovery and allow Jirachi to outspeed Pokémon running less than 280 Speed, including Adamant Lucario.
Vaporeon (M) ** Ye Old Puppy @ Leftovers
Trait: Water Absorb
EVs: 188 HP / 252 Def / 68 Spe
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect
- Surf
- Toxic
I originally decided to add Vaporeon in an attempt to deal with bulky waters who can prevent Salamence from sweeping, but as of late, Vaporeon has been exceeding my expectations for its role on the team. Vaporeon mainly serves the team in the form on "Wish Passing", allowing my team to maintain a strong offense and overall keep to the "bulky offense" theme. The set is extremely simple, with this Vaporeon running Toxic over Hidden Power Electric because Gyarados will hardly ever stay in on Vaporeon and Toxic + Sandstorm + Stealth Rock still counters it well.
The EVs were pulled straight from the analysis, as I felt no modifications were necessary to maximize Vaporeon's potential on the team.
Tyranitar (M) ** Choice Band Sucks! @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Earthquake
- Pursuit
I added Tyranitar to my team as my best answer to stall teams, being able to take on Blissey and Rotom-a without much trouble at all, and the advantage here is that I'm not locked into Choice Band unlike most other Tyranitar sets. This Tyranitar was specifically made to eliminate Cresselia as a Salamence counter, but has been able to pull its weight by effectively countering special sweepers, such as Jolteon, who can severely threaten my team. I decided to run this set over Dragon Dance Tyranitar because my main objective to to open a Salamence sweep, and DDTar lacks the defenses needed Tyranitar's role on the team.
The EVs given allow for maximum Attack and Defensive potential, and were also recommend to me by reachzero.
Gengar (M) ** This Thing Just Owns @ Black Sludge
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast
- Thunderbolt
Gengar was placed on my team because it complements Magnezone and Tyranitar in terms of both defensive and offensive synergy. Gengar is an extremely underrated sweeper in today's metagame, and is extremely deadly when prediction is eliminated as a factor in its sweeping abilities through the use of Substitute. Shadow Ball, Focus Blast, and Thunderbolt provide the best coverage out of all the attacks available to Gengar, and Black Sludge prevents Sandstorm from ruining the premise of this set. The only concern I have is Focus Blast's accuracy.
The EVs are generally self explanatory, giving me maximum Special Attack and Speed to maximize Gengar's sweeping potential.
Magnezone ** Balls of Steel @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 40 HP / 252 SpA / 216 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Magnet Rise
Magnezone is one of the most critical members of my team, for being the most effective Pokémon in eliminating Salamence's counters for a late-game sweep: Steel-types. Since I absolutely hate "Choice" items, I decided to settle for another Substitute sweeping set, this time focusing more on sweeping instead of taking hits. Magnezone specifically deals with Metagross, whose only option is to Explode on my Substitute, and Scizor, which is baited out my Gengar. Thunderbolt and Substitute are a must, and Magnet Rise was recently added because Metagross is a bitch with Explosion; Hidden Power Grass was mainly chosen as a filler move to hit Swampert, so I'd appreciate suggestions for possible replacements.
The EVs given net Magnezone a Speed stat of 231, enough to outspeed Adamant Scizor and most Adamant Metagross that don't run Agility.
Salamence (M) ** The Final Ultimatum @ Life Orb
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge / Roost
Salamence is the final member and the central core of the team, establishing a basis for the rest of the team. Salamence is one of the most effective late-game sweepers in the game, with only Steel-types resisting Outrage and everything else being either 2HKOed or OHKOed by Outrage. Health is not a concern here, and Salamence is really only meant to be used late-game after its counters have been eliminated, so Life Orb was chosen for maximum Attack power. Earthquake and Stone Edge are obligatory options for the last two moveslots, but I've been considering Roost lately since Salamence is only one of two Pokémon on my team who can safely switch into Ground and Fighting-type attacks.
The EVs generate max Attack and max Speed for Salamence, which are necessary for maximum sweeping potential.
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There were a few concerns in which I specifically want advice/help on for my team, which are:
- the lack of priority
- the lack of a true counter/check against Salamence
- the ability to constantly maintain the advantage
I feel the lack of priority really places my team at a disadvantage compared to other offensive teams, as this team is suspectible to a sweep from Pokémon such as Salamence and Dragon Dance Tyranitar. Generally, my team doesn't give Salamence much of a chance to set up, with each team member being able to either hit it for high damage or cripple it with status, but the argument that it can set up and sweep my team remains nonetheless. My third concerns generally ties into what has already been explained in this paragraph.
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I'd like to thank everyone for having taken a look at my team. I'd appreciate any comments and concerns. I'd also like for people to take a look at my team building process and threat data presented in the following two posts.*
* Second and third posts will be updated as soon as possible. I will still be accepting any rates, however.
So now, I present to you my newest team built for the Standard Ladder...
The Fury of the Storm
Description: This team relies on "bulky offense" to win games, keeping the theme of "the best offense can also be your best defense".
Standard Team Created for the OU Metagame
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Jirachi ** Suck My Hax @ Leftovers
Trait: Serene Grace
EVs: 108 HP / 212 Atk / 184 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Stealth Rock
- Iron Head
- Body Slam
- Fire Punch
This specific Jirachi set was introduced to me by reachzero, and I have fallen in love with it since. I decided to go with a Jirachi lead instead of, say, Metagross, because Jirachi's combination of Body Slam and Iron Head increase my chances of pulling off a sweep in the late game by narrowing my opponent's chances of having the advantage in any given situation. The set itself is pretty straightforward: I'll usually Body Slam Azelf and Aerodactyl leads and then hit with Iron Head for a KO, I'll switch to Magnezone if I'm up against Metagross, and I'll switch to Vaporeon against Infernape and Heatran.
The EVs given on this set are an alteration to reachzero's original spread of 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe with a Jolly Nature. Essentially, the given EVs give Jirachi an HP stat 368 for optimal Leftovers recovery and allow Jirachi to outspeed Pokémon running less than 280 Speed, including Adamant Lucario.
Vaporeon (M) ** Ye Old Puppy @ Leftovers
Trait: Water Absorb
EVs: 188 HP / 252 Def / 68 Spe
Bold Nature (+Def, -Atk)
- Wish
- Protect
- Surf
- Toxic
I originally decided to add Vaporeon in an attempt to deal with bulky waters who can prevent Salamence from sweeping, but as of late, Vaporeon has been exceeding my expectations for its role on the team. Vaporeon mainly serves the team in the form on "Wish Passing", allowing my team to maintain a strong offense and overall keep to the "bulky offense" theme. The set is extremely simple, with this Vaporeon running Toxic over Hidden Power Electric because Gyarados will hardly ever stay in on Vaporeon and Toxic + Sandstorm + Stealth Rock still counters it well.
The EVs were pulled straight from the analysis, as I felt no modifications were necessary to maximize Vaporeon's potential on the team.
Tyranitar (M) ** Choice Band Sucks! @ Leftovers
Trait: Sand Stream
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Stone Edge
- Crunch
- Earthquake
- Pursuit
I added Tyranitar to my team as my best answer to stall teams, being able to take on Blissey and Rotom-a without much trouble at all, and the advantage here is that I'm not locked into Choice Band unlike most other Tyranitar sets. This Tyranitar was specifically made to eliminate Cresselia as a Salamence counter, but has been able to pull its weight by effectively countering special sweepers, such as Jolteon, who can severely threaten my team. I decided to run this set over Dragon Dance Tyranitar because my main objective to to open a Salamence sweep, and DDTar lacks the defenses needed Tyranitar's role on the team.
The EVs given allow for maximum Attack and Defensive potential, and were also recommend to me by reachzero.
Gengar (M) ** This Thing Just Owns @ Black Sludge
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Shadow Ball
- Focus Blast
- Thunderbolt
Gengar was placed on my team because it complements Magnezone and Tyranitar in terms of both defensive and offensive synergy. Gengar is an extremely underrated sweeper in today's metagame, and is extremely deadly when prediction is eliminated as a factor in its sweeping abilities through the use of Substitute. Shadow Ball, Focus Blast, and Thunderbolt provide the best coverage out of all the attacks available to Gengar, and Black Sludge prevents Sandstorm from ruining the premise of this set. The only concern I have is Focus Blast's accuracy.
The EVs are generally self explanatory, giving me maximum Special Attack and Speed to maximize Gengar's sweeping potential.
Magnezone ** Balls of Steel @ Leftovers
Trait: Magnet Pull
EVs: 40 HP / 252 SpA / 216 Spe
Timid Nature (+Spe, -Atk)
- Substitute
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power [Grass]
- Magnet Rise
Magnezone is one of the most critical members of my team, for being the most effective Pokémon in eliminating Salamence's counters for a late-game sweep: Steel-types. Since I absolutely hate "Choice" items, I decided to settle for another Substitute sweeping set, this time focusing more on sweeping instead of taking hits. Magnezone specifically deals with Metagross, whose only option is to Explode on my Substitute, and Scizor, which is baited out my Gengar. Thunderbolt and Substitute are a must, and Magnet Rise was recently added because Metagross is a bitch with Explosion; Hidden Power Grass was mainly chosen as a filler move to hit Swampert, so I'd appreciate suggestions for possible replacements.
The EVs given net Magnezone a Speed stat of 231, enough to outspeed Adamant Scizor and most Adamant Metagross that don't run Agility.
Salamence (M) ** The Final Ultimatum @ Life Orb
Trait: Intimidate
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SpA)
- Dragon Dance
- Outrage
- Earthquake
- Stone Edge / Roost
Salamence is the final member and the central core of the team, establishing a basis for the rest of the team. Salamence is one of the most effective late-game sweepers in the game, with only Steel-types resisting Outrage and everything else being either 2HKOed or OHKOed by Outrage. Health is not a concern here, and Salamence is really only meant to be used late-game after its counters have been eliminated, so Life Orb was chosen for maximum Attack power. Earthquake and Stone Edge are obligatory options for the last two moveslots, but I've been considering Roost lately since Salamence is only one of two Pokémon on my team who can safely switch into Ground and Fighting-type attacks.
The EVs generate max Attack and max Speed for Salamence, which are necessary for maximum sweeping potential.
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There were a few concerns in which I specifically want advice/help on for my team, which are:
- the lack of priority
- the lack of a true counter/check against Salamence
- the ability to constantly maintain the advantage
I feel the lack of priority really places my team at a disadvantage compared to other offensive teams, as this team is suspectible to a sweep from Pokémon such as Salamence and Dragon Dance Tyranitar. Generally, my team doesn't give Salamence much of a chance to set up, with each team member being able to either hit it for high damage or cripple it with status, but the argument that it can set up and sweep my team remains nonetheless. My third concerns generally ties into what has already been explained in this paragraph.
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I'd like to thank everyone for having taken a look at my team. I'd appreciate any comments and concerns. I'd also like for people to take a look at my team building process and threat data presented in the following two posts.*
* Second and third posts will be updated as soon as possible. I will still be accepting any rates, however.