National Dex Monotype Babut (Poison) [QC:2/2] [GP:1/1]

[Pengairxan]

Fun fact, this is the first Analysis for a mon I actually legitimately own.

[SET]
Crobat @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Utility (Poison)
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 HP / 56 SpD / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Toxic / U-turn
- Defog
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Crobat finds a solid role on Poison teams thanks to its Ground immunity, high Speed, and solid utility movepool. Brave Bird deals with threats such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gallade, and Ogerpon-W. Infiltrator + Toxic is used to spread status against targets such as Substitute Hydreigon and Kyurem, while U-turn can be used to retain momentum against foes like Gholdengo. Defog provides longevity to teammates including Mega Venusaur and Alolan Muk by removing entry hazards so they can get the most out of their bulk. The EV spread allows Crobat to outspeed threats like Tornadus-T, Meowscarada, and Sneasler while still providing reasonable bulk, allowing it to take hits such as Freeze-Dry from Substitute Kyurem and +2 Dark Pulse from Hydreigon. Crobat greatly appreciates bulky teammates such as Toxapex and Mega Venusaur that can take Knock Off from the likes of Alolan Muk, Hisuian Goodra, and Ferrothorn, preventing it from losing its Heavy-Duty Boots. Mega Venusaur also complements Crobat by handling Ground-types such as Mega Swampert, Mamoswine, and Great Tusk. Alolan Muk provides a complementary Psychic immunity and can handle Psychic- and Ghost-type threats like Tapu Lele, Galarian Slowking, Blacephalon, and Gholdengo thanks to Knock Off and Pursuit. Nidoking can handle Electric-, Rock-, and Steel-type threats including Tapu Koko, Nihilego, Heatran, and Ferrothorn that can otherwise wall Crobat. Sneasler can similarly threaten Steel- and Rock-types threats like Hisuian Goodra, Tyranitar, and Ogerpon-C thanks to Close Combat, and it appreciates Crobat's ability to switch into bulky Ground-types like Clodsire and Hippowdon.

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[boomp]

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Fun fact, this is the first Analysis for a mon I actually legitimately own.
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[SET]
Crobat @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Utility (Poison)
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 HP / 56 SpD / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Toxic
- Defog
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Crobat finds a solid role on Poison teams thanks to its Ground immunity curiosity of its secondary Flying typing, high speed and solid utility movepool. Brave Bird is the STAB of Choice preventing Crobat from being too passive and can deal with threats such as Iron Valiant, and Mega Gallade, and Ogerpon-W. Toxic is used to spread status against bulkier targets such as Hippowdon and Slowbro. Defog is vital providing longevity to teammates including Mega Venusaur and Alolan Muk by removing hazards to get the most out of their bulk. [Add an infiltrator sentence.] The EV Spread allows Crobat to outspeed threats like Tornadus-T, Meowscarada, and Sneasler while still providing reasonable bulk allowing it to take hits such as a Nidoking Ice Beam or a boosted Dark Pulse from Hydreigon.

[Ease of use break for my eyes between mon and team, will remove come upload]

Crobat greatly appreciates bulky teammates such as Toxapex and Mega Venusuar who can both take Knock Off from the likes of Alolan Muk, Hisuian Goodra, and Ferrothorn, preventing Crobat from losing its Heavy-Duty Boots along with dealing with Rock-types like Mega Diancie and Kleavor. Toxapex can also take on Ice-type attacks from the likes of Weavile and Meowscarada which crumple Crobat otherwise. Mega Venusaur meanwhile can handle Water- and Ground-types such as Barraskewda, Mega Swampert, Mamoswine, and Great Tusk. Alolan Muk provides a complimentary Psychic-type immunity creating an immunity core and can handle Psychic- and Ghost-type threats like Tapu Lele, Galarian Slowking, Blacephalon, and Gholdengo. Nidoking with its Ground typing can handle Electric-, Rock-, and Steel-type threats including, defensive Zapdos, Nihilego, Heatran, and Ferrothorn who can otherwise wall Crobat. Electric- and Rock-type threats including, Zapdos, Alolan Golem, and Garganacal along with Steel-types like Heatran and Ferrothorn who otherwise can sit on Crobat. [just reworded it also crucial to put defensive zapdos as specs hurricane zapdos just kos it. also A Golem is not used.] Sneasler can simialry threaten Steel- and Rock-types threats like Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, Tyranitar, and Ogerpon-C thanks to Close Combat and appreciates Crobat giving it a safe target to switch to against bulky Ground-types like Clodsire and Hippowdon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality Checked by:
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QC 1/2 :gengargrin:

 

[Neko]

flying car

[SET]
Crobat @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Utility (Poison)
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 HP / 56 SpD / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Toxic
- Defog
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Crobat finds a solid role on Poison teams thanks to its Ground immunity curiosity courtesy of its secondary Flying typing, high speed and solid utility movepool. Brave Bird is the STAB of Choice preventing Crobat from being too passive and can deal with threats such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gallade, and Ogerpon-W. Toxic is used to spread status against bulkier targets such as Hippowdon and Slowbro(its more for infiltrator Toxic which scares off Hydrei and Kyurem + add Alternatively, U-turn can be used because we cant have good things and Gholdengo blocks our defog / lets us retain momentum). Defog is vital providing longevity to teammates including Mega Venusaur and Alolan Muk by removing hazards to get the most out of their bulk. Infiltrator is used to get past Substitute from threats like Hydreigon. (you can cut this line if you add it on the Toxic part)The EV Spread allows Crobat to outspeed threats like Tornadus-T, Meowscarada, and Sneasler while still providing reasonable bulk allowing it to take hits such as a Nidoking Ice Beam (Sub Kyu FDry?) or a boosted Dark Pulse from Hydreigon.

[Ease of use break for my eyes between mon and team, will remove come upload]

Crobat greatly appreciates bulky teammates such as Toxapex and Mega Venusuar who can both take Knock Off from the likes of Alolan Muk, Hisuian Goodra, and Ferrothorn, preventing Crobat from losing its Heavy-Duty Boots along with dealing with Rock-types like Mega Diancie and Kleavor. Toxapex can also take on Ice-type attacks from the likes of Weavile and Meowscarada which crumple Crobat otherwise. Mega Venusaur meanwhile can handle Water- and Ground-types such as Barraskewda, Mega Swampert, Mamoswine, and Great Tusk. (shorten to two short sentences pls) Alolan Muk provides a complimentary Psychic-type immunity creating an immunity core and can handle Psychic- and Ghost-type threats like Tapu Lele, Galarian Slowking, Blacephalon, and Gholdengo (also has pursuit). Nidoking with its Ground typing can handle Electric-, Rock-, and Steel-type threats including, defensive Zapdos Tapu Koko, Nihilego, Heatran, and Ferrothorn who can otherwise wall Crobat. Sneasler can simialry threaten Steel- and Rock-types threats like Hisuian Goodra, Heatran, Tyranitar, and Ogerpon-C (too many examples) thanks to Close Combat and appreciates Crobat giving it a safe target to switch to against bulky Ground-types like Clodsire and Hippowdon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality Checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
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QC 2/2, thankie Pengairxan

 

[Pengairxan]

GP Team
Woe, Toxic be upon ye.

 

[Mateeus]

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[Techno]

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Fun fact, this is the first Analysis for a mon I actually legitimately own.
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[SET]
Crobat @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Utility (Poison)
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 HP / 56 SpD / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Toxic / U-turn
- Defog
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Crobat finds a solid role on Poison teams thanks to its Ground immunity courtesy of its secondary Flying typing, high Speed, (ac) and solid utility movepool. Brave Bird is the STAB of choice dealing deals with threats such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gallade, and Ogerpon-W. Infiltrator + Toxic is used to spread status against targets such as Substitute Hydreigon and Kyurem, (ac) while U-turn can be used to retain momentum against targets foes (removing "targets" repetition - can use a different word if you'd like) like Gholdengo. (removed second period) Defog is vital providing provides longevity to teammates including Mega Venusaur and Alolan Muk by removing entry hazards to get the most out of their bulk. The EV Spread allows Crobat to outspeed threats like Tornadus-T, Meowscarada, and Sneasler while still providing reasonable bulk, (ac) allowing it to take hits such as a Subusuite Freeze-Dry from Substitute Kyurem Freeze Dry or a boosted and +2 (I'm assuming Nasty Plot, if not you can change - specify the specific boost rather than just "boosted" Dark Pulse from Hydreigon. (Dark Pulse is mentioned before Hydreigon, so moved Freeze-Dry before Kyurem for consistency)

[Ease of use break for my eyes between mon and team, will remove come upload]

Crobat greatly appreciates bulky teammates such as Toxapex and Mega Venusuar who Venusaur that can take Knock Off from the likes of Alolan Muk, Hisuian Goodra, and Ferrothorn, preventing Crobat it from losing its Heavy-Duty Boots. Mega Venusaur also compliments complements Crobat by handling Ground-types such as Mega Swampert, Mamoswine, and Great Tusk. Alolan Muk provides a complimentary complementary Psychic-type immunity creating an immunity core and can handle Psychic- and Ghost-type threats like Tapu Lele, Galarian Slowking, Blacephalon, and Gholdengo thanks to Knock Off and Pursuit. Nidoking with its Ground typing can handle Electric-, Rock-, and Steel-type threats including Tapu Koko, Nihilego, Heatran, and Ferrothorn who that can otherwise wall Crobat. Sneasler can simialry similarly threaten Steel- and Rock-types threats like Hisuian Goodra, Tyranitar, and Ogerpon-C thanks to Close Combat, (ac) and it appreciates Crobat giving it a safe target to switch into against bulky Ground-types like Clodsire and Hippowdon.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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[Pengairxan]

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Implemented cause I felt like it.

 

[autumn]

1/1 GP Team done credit both of us, removed the line break for you bc this is the last check

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[SET]
Crobat @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Name: Utility (Poison)
Ability: Infiltrator
EVs: 252 HP / 56 SpD / 200 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Brave Bird
- Toxic / U-turn
- Defog
- Roost

[SET COMMENTS]
Crobat finds a solid role on Poison teams thanks to its Ground immunity, high Speed, and solid utility movepool. Brave Bird deals with threats such as Iron Valiant, Mega Gallade, and Ogerpon-W. Infiltrator + Toxic is used to spread status against targets such as Substitute Hydreigon and Kyurem, while U-turn can be used to retain momentum against foes like Gholdengo. Defog provides longevity to teammates including Mega Venusaur and Alolan Muk by removing entry hazards to so they can get the most out of their bulk. The EV Spread spread allows Crobat to outspeed threats like Tornadus-T, Meowscarada, and Sneasler while still providing reasonable bulk, allowing it to take hits such as Freeze-Dry from Substitute Kyurem and Nasty Plot +2 Dark Pulse from Hydreigon. Crobat greatly appreciates bulky teammates such as Toxapex and Mega Venusaur that can take Knock Off from the likes of Alolan Muk, Hisuian Goodra, and Ferrothorn, preventing it from losing its Heavy-Duty Boots. Mega Venusaur also complements Crobat by handling Ground-types such as Mega Swampert, Mamoswine, and Great Tusk. Alolan Muk provides a complementary Psychic immunity and can handle Psychic- and Ghost-type threats like Tapu Lele, Galarian Slowking, Blacephalon, and Gholdengo thanks to Knock Off and Pursuit. Nidoking can handle Electric-, Rock-, and Steel-type threats including Tapu Koko, Nihilego, Heatran, and Ferrothorn that can otherwise wall Crobat. Sneasler can similarly threaten Steel- and Rock-types threats like Hisuian Goodra, Tyranitar, and Ogerpon-C thanks to Close Combat, and it appreciates Crobat giving it a safe target to switch into against bulky Ground-types like Clodsire and Hippowdon. (this last part isn't really clear. I think you're talking about Sneasler benefitting from Crobat's Ground immunity, but you don't actually say that. If that's what you mean, you can use 'it appreciates Crobat's ability to switch into bulky Ground-types' - if that's not what you mean, make sure to clarify the sentence)

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/pengairxan.622813/
Quality Checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/boomp.637295/
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/neko.542526/
Grammar Checked by:
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