NFE Krokorok [Done]

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name: KrokoRocks (Stealth Rock Lead)
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Taunt
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Earthquake
item: Eviolite
ability: Intimidate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 152 Def / 104 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Krokorok provides Stealth Rock and early momentum as a lead. Hattrem is ineffective as a form of entry hazard prevention due to it fearing a STAB Knock Off, while Taunt targets Defog users like Vullaby and Togetic. Taunt also prevents opposing entry hazards such as Stealth Rock from Galarian Corsola and Piloswine, Sticky Web from Charjabug, Toxic Spikes from Koffing, and Spikes from Ferroseed. Earthquake proves itself valuable for scaring out Toxic Spikes users like Mareanie and Koffing. Intimidate along with Krokorok's defensive investment allows it to survive an attack followed by priority when up against Machoke and Piloswine. The remaining Speed investment and a Jolly nature let Krokorok outspeed Modest Roselia along with other slower attackers like Lampent and Porygon. Alternatively, an offensive spread paired with a Focus Sash works too for a better matchup against foes like Tangela and Kadabra.

Use Krokorok as a lead and supplement it with offensive teammates that preserve the momentum it gains early-game. Sweepers like Thwackey and Lampent appreciate Stealth Rock pressuring Flying-types like Vullaby and Togetic, as well as Knock Off both weakening Machoke, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola and making Heavy-Duty Boots users like Fletchinder and Raboot vulnerable to entry hazards. Roselia is particularly potent as a partner, not only for providing additional entry hazard pressure with Spikes, but also for checking threats to Krokorok like Thwackey, Tangela, Wartortle, and Seadra. Faster attackers like Kadabra and Raboot revenge kill Krokorok and are immune to entry hazard damage with Magic Guard and Heavy-Duty Boots, respectively. It is best then to pair Krokorok with cleaners like Klang, Wartortle, and Fraxure to deal with them, as well as forms of speed control such as Hattrem and Charjabug. To help preserve Krokorok, pick teammates that resist Ice or are immune to Fighting like Klang, Galarian Corsola, and Lampent; the two Ghost-types are additionally compatible as spinblockers.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Marjane, 355753], [SBPC, 468904]]
- Grammar checked by: [deetah, 297695]]
 
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[SET]
name: KrokoRocks (Lead Stealth Rock)
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Taunt
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Earthquake
item: Eviolite
ability: Intimidate
nature: Impish
evs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 252 Def i have a new spread to propose EVs: 252 HP / 230 Def / 28 Spe, does same thing except it oustpeeds forb choke and timid lampent, lmk what you think

[SET COMMENTS]
Krokorok provides Stealth Rock and early momentum as a lead. Its secures its entry hazard as Hattrem is ineffective at being a switch-in due to fearing a STAB Knock Off, while Taunt targets Defog users like Vullaby and Togetic. Taunt also prevents opposing entry hazards from Galarian Corsola, Charjabug, Koffing, and Ferroseed. (I'd actually like an eq mention here because there are a few moves that krokorok could run like toxic and others, so saying why one might run eq feels worthy of a sentence.) Intimidate along with Krokorok’s defensive investment allows it to live an attack followed by priority when up against Machoke and Piloswine. The remaining Speed investment (what remaining speed investment?) and a Jolly nature lets Krokorok outspeed Modest Roselia along with other slower attackers like Lampent. (not sure what this is regarding since you have 0 speed and no jolly nature)

Use Krokorok as a lead, and supplement it with offensive teammates that preserve the momentum it gains early-game. Sweepers like Thwackey and Lampent appreciate Stealth Rock pressuring Flying-types, as well as Knock Off weakening Machoke, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola. Roselia is particularly potent as a partner not only for providing additional entry hazard pressure with Spikes, but for also checking threats to Krokorok like Thwackey, Tangela, Wartortle, and Seadra. Faster attackers like Kadabra and Raboot revenge kill Krokorok, and are immune to entry hazard damage with Magic Guard or Heavy-Duty Boots. It is best then to pair Krokorok with cleaners like Klang, Wartortle, and Fraxure to deal with them, as well as Speed control from Hattrem and Charjabug. fighting- and ice-type checks should be mentioned as well, sometimes you can't just sack your krokorok to choke and pilo.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Marjane, 355753], ]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
good work, qc 1/2

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Qc 2
[SET]
name: KrokoRocks (Lead Stealth Rock)
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Taunt
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Earthquake
item: Eviolite / Focus Sash [Because it has a purpose as a lead]
ability: Intimidate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 152 Def / 104 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Krokorok provides Stealth Rock and early momentum as a lead. Its secures its entry hazard as Hattrem is ineffective at being a switch-in due to fearing a STAB Knock Off [reword the part marked in purple, its a pain to read otherwise fine], while Taunt targets Defog users like Vullaby and Togetic. Taunt also prevents opposing entry hazards such as rocks from Galarian Corsola and Piloswine, webs from Charjabug, or Toxic Spikes and Spikes from Koffing, (RC) and Ferroseed respectively. Earthquake proves itself valuable for scaring out Toxic Spikes users like Mareanie and Koffing. Intimidate along with Krokorok’s defensive investment allows it to live an attack followed by priority when up against Machoke and Piloswine. The remaining Speed investment and a Jolly nature lets Krokorok outspeed Modest Roselia along with other slower attackers like Lampent [another example here.].

Use Krokorok as a lead, and supplement it with offensive teammates that preserve the momentum it gains early-game. Sweepers like Thwackey and Lampent appreciate Stealth Rock pressuring Flying-types [what flying types?] , as well as Knock Off weakening Machoke, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola. [Mention removal of Heavy-Duty Boots, as removing those is huge for hazard chip down the road] Roselia is particularly potent as a partner not only for providing additional entry hazard pressure with Spikes, but for also checking threats to Krokorok like Thwackey, Tangela, Wartortle, and Seadra. Faster attackers like Kadabra and Raboot revenge kill Krokorok, and are immune to entry hazard damage with Magic Guard or Heavy-Duty Boots. It is best then to pair Krokorok with cleaners like Klang, Wartortle, and Fraxure to deal with them, as well as Speed control from Hattrem and Charjabug. To help preserve Krokorok, pick teammates that resist Ice or are immune to Fighting like Klang, Galarian Corsola, and Lampent; these Ghost-types are additionally compatible as spinblockers.

Mostly some AM GP to make this a bit easier to read and make some information clearer, along with needing a few extra details, will want to see after changes
 
ADD REMOVE COMMENT my changes are small good job Ho3nconfirm3d!
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[SET]
name: KrokoRocks (Lead Stealth Rock)
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Taunt
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Earthquake
item: Eviolite / Focus Sash (After reading I see Focus Sash mentioned, so I think it would be a good idea to add it here)
ability: Intimidate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 152 Def / 104 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Krokorok provides Stealth Rock and early momentum as a lead. Opposing Hattrem is ineffective hazard prevention due to it fearing a STAB Knock Off, while Taunt targets Defog users like Vullaby and Togetic. Taunt also prevents opposing entry hazards such as Stealth Rock from Galarian Corsola and Pilsowine Piloswine, Sticky Web from Charjabug, Toxic Spikes from Koffing, and Spikes from Ferroseed. Earthquake proves itself valuable for scaring out Toxic Spikes users like Mareanie and Koffing. Intimidate along with Krokorok’s defensive investment allows it to live an attack followed by priority when up against Machoke and Piloswine. The remaining Speed investment and a Jolly nature lets Krokorok outspeed Modest Roselia along with other slower attackers like Lampent and Porygon. An offensive spread whilst holding Focus Sash works too for a better match up against foes like Tangela and Kadabra.

Use Krokorok as a lead, and supplement it with offensive teammates that preserve the momentum it gains early-game. Sweepers like Thwackey and Lampent appreciate Stealth Rock pressuring Flying-types like Vullaby and Togetic, as well as Knock Off both weakening Machoke, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola and making Heavy-Duty Boots users like Fletchinder and Raboot vulnerable to entry hazards. Roselia is particularly potent as a partner not only for providing additional entry hazard pressure with Spikes, but for also checking threats to Krokorok like Thwackey, Tangela, Wartortle, and Seadra. Faster attackers like Kadabra and Raboot revenge kill Krokorok, and are immune to entry hazard damage with Magic Guard or Heavy-Duty Boots. It is best then to pair Krokorok with cleaners like Klang, Wartortle, and Fraxure to deal with them, as well as Speed control from Hattrem and Charjabug. To help preserve Krokorok, pick teammates that resist Ice or are immune to Fighting like Klang, Galarian Corsola, and Lampent; these Ghost-types are additionally compatible as spinblockers.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Marjane, 355753], [SBPC, 468904]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
Add Remove Comments (AC) = Add Comma (RC) = Remove Comma

GP 1/1


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[SET]
name: KrokoRocks (Lead Stealth Rock Lead)
move 1: Stealth Rock
move 2: Taunt
move 3: Knock Off
move 4: Earthquake
item: Eviolite / Focus Sash (This was mentioned in the second QC)
ability: Intimidate
nature: Jolly
evs: 252 HP / 152 Def / 104 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Krokorok provides Stealth Rock and early momentum as a lead. Opposing Hattrem is ineffective as a form of entry hazard prevention due to it fearing a STAB Knock Off, while Taunt targets Defog users like Vullaby and Togetic. Taunt also prevents opposing entry hazards such as Stealth Rock from Galarian Corsola and Pilsowine Piloswine, Sticky Web from Charjabug, Toxic Spikes from Koffing, and Spikes from Ferroseed. Earthquake proves itself valuable for scaring out Toxic Spikes users like Mareanie and Koffing. Intimidate along with Krokorok’s Krokorok's (Use ASCII apostrophes) defensive investment allows it to live survive an attack followed by priority when up against Machoke and Piloswine. The remaining Speed investment and a Jolly nature lets let Krokorok outspeed Modest Roselia along with other slower attackers like Lampent and Porygon. Alternatively, an offensive spread whilst holding paired with a Focus Sash works too for a better match up matchup against foes like Tangela and Kadabra.

Use Krokorok as a lead, (RC) and supplement it with offensive teammates that preserve the momentum it gains early-game. Sweepers like Thwackey and Lampent appreciate Stealth Rock pressuring Flying-types like Vullaby and Togetic, as well as Knock Off both weakening Machoke, Piloswine, and Galarian Corsola and making Heavy-Duty Boots users like Fletchinder and Raboot vulnerable to entry hazards. Roselia is particularly potent as a partner, (AC) not only for providing additional entry hazard pressure with Spikes, but for also for checking threats to Krokorok like Thwackey, Tangela, Wartortle, and Seadra. Faster attackers like Kadabra and Raboot revenge kill Krokorok, (RC) and are immune to entry hazard damage with Magic Guard or and Heavy-Duty Boots, respectively. It is best then to pair Krokorok with cleaners like Klang, Wartortle, and Fraxure to deal with them, as well as forms of speed (Lowercase in this instance) control from such as Hattrem and Charjabug. To help preserve Krokorok, pick teammates that resist Ice or are immune to Fighting like Klang, Galarian Corsola, and Lampent; these the two Ghost-types are additionally compatible as spinblockers.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Ho3nConfirm3d, 231074]]
- Quality checked by: [[Marjane, 355753], [SBPC, 468904]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 
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