My first team

Yo, I'm new to competitive Pokémon, so any advices are welcome! I read alot in order to make this team, making alot of changes in the process and trying my best to balance things out. So, here we go.

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Scizor @ Scizorizite
Trait: Technician
EVs: 252 HP / 40 Atk / 216 SpD
Adamant Nature
- Bullet Punch
- Swords Dance
- Bug Bite
- Roost

Scizor is my SD physical sweeper, and my personal favorite pokemon. With M-Scizor's bulk and EV spread, I can tank special hits, and once fire attacks are down, switch in and set up. If I can get one or two Swords Dance off, it's hard to stop Scizor from sweeping entire teams. Bullet Punch is a must on most Scizor sets, because of STAB and priority (and also now, fairies being weak to Steel), and Bug Bite provides coverage that my team doesn't have, while still being a powerful STAB attack. Roost so I can heal up the damage that I took while setting up.

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Aegislash @ Life Orb
Trait: Stance Change
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 SpA
IVs: 0 Spe
Quiet Nature
- Shadow Ball
- Sacred Sword
- Shadow Sneak
- Iron Head

Aegislash is my wallbreaker and main pivot. With its amazing power and good coverage, with good using it can weaken teams enough and deal with bulky fairies so my Talonflame can come in and finish the job. I prefered the Mixed Aegislash, since Shadow Ball hits so hard, and I feel King's Shield a bit lackluster, since it's easily predictable, and my plan is to do constant switches, and while Swords Dance give Aegislash sweeping potential, I prefer the Iron Head coverage to deal with fairies. Shadow Sneak ensures that I can finish things weakened by Shadow Ball, making it a great combo.

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Greninja @ Life Orb
Trait: Protean
EVs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Hasty Nature
- Surf
- Ice Beam
- Dark Pulse
- U-Turn

Greninja is here for coverage, and he does an amazing job with 4 STAB attacks, thanks to Protean. While I do carry Rotom-W for water type, I feel that my team was too vulnerable to Dragons, since there wasn't real counters to them. I was using Hydreigon before, so I changed it for Greninja, which still provides Dark Pulse coverage, which only got better in Generation VI, and gets Ice Beam to deal with Dragons and others. I also use U-Turn, which greatly synergizes with Volt Switch from Rotom-W and U-Turn from Talonflame, making it a great Volt-turn core.

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Talonflame @ Choice Band
Trait: Gale Wings
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Brave Bird
- Flare Blitz
- U-Turn
- Tailwind

Talonflame is here for revenge kill and also a late game cleaner. Few things can take a Choice Banded priority Brave Bird and come out alive. Flare Blitz is my only fire coverage in my team, which is also incredible powerful, allowing me to hit Steel types for amazing damage. U-Turn for the Volt-turn synergy, and Tailwind when an opportunity comes up. Once all Talonflame counters are out, it can come and clean up evertyhing. It's also my check to Mega Lucario, who seems to bet pretty popular. Also, I don't know if I should use Jolly nature, so I can outspeed Landorus and kill with Flare Blitz.

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Rotom-W @ Chesto Berry
Trait: Levitate
EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpA
Bold Nature
- Volt Switch
- Hydro Pump
- Will-O-Wisp
- Rest

Rotom-W is an vital part of my core (what's a Volt-Turn without Volt Switch?), and usually my lead. I don't think I can go wrong with the most used pokémon in the PokeBank OU meta. With this EV spread, it can easily take care of Talonflame, which is a hure threat, and checks alot of other things with its great typing. He provides an EQ switch-in, and completes the Volt-Turn core, keepind the momentum in my favor. I prefer the ChestoRest variation, since Pain Split appears, to me, unreliable, and Rest can give me an entire new life.


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Excadrill @ Air Ballon
Trait: Mold Breaker
EVs: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Rapid Spin
- Earthquake
- Rock Slide
- Stealth Rock/Swords Dance (not sure what to get)

Excadrill is my spinner and Rotom-W counter, since it appers to be everywhere. With mold breaker, Gengar can't spinblock because of Earthquake OHKOing it, while also dealing with Aegislash, who only survives the OHKO with HP or Def EVs, even in Shield form. My only question is if I should get Swords Dance for a chance of sweeping or Stealth Rock to ensure KOs for my team. I'm thinking of get Stealth Rock, since Excadrill already hits hard, but still not sure. Stealth Rock ensures that i'll be able to OHKO Genesect with priority Brave Bird, but Swords Dance give Excadrill amazing sweep potential. Also, still unsure if I should go for a Jolly nature, in order to outspeed some threats that I read about.


I've got two questions:
As I said earlier, I swap Hydreigon for Greninja. Would be better to keep Hydreigon and swap Excadrill for Starmie (which has similar coverage to Greninja)? But I think with this I would be missing the Earthquake and Rock Slide, since I got no other ground or rock moves.

I'm not sure if I should run Adamant or Jolly in Talonflame. If I run Jolly with 144 Spe, it allows me to outspeed positive natures M-Lucario and Thundurus, but I don't know if I will miss some important KOs due to the attack lost. But Jolly also allow me to invest more in HP (112). Any advices?
 
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You have a lot of investment on Sp.Att. when you don't need it... I am assuming you have Shadow Ball there for Foretress, Skarmory, Ferrothorn etc. so here are some calcs:

0+ SpA Aegislash-Blade Shadow Ball vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Skarmory: 180-213 (53.8 - 63.7%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery

0+ SpA Aegislash-Blade Shadow Ball vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Forretress: 204-240 (57.6 - 67.7%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Leftovers recovery

0+ SpA Aegislash-Blade Shadow Ball vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Ferrothorn: 118-141 (33.5 - 40%) -- 28.7% chance to 3HKO after Leftovers recovery

And that's with 0 investment in Sp.Att... So I recommend you putting less EVs in Sp.Att. and more in HP so you can take hits a tad better

And I also recommend you putting rocks on Exca to deal with Volcarona and Talonflame.

I hope I helped. Thanks! :)
 
While the SpA investment might be alot, with Stealth Rock up from Excadrill, it can ensure some OHKO and 2HKO against this pokémons:

252+ SpA Life Orb Aegislash-Blade Shadow Ball vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Forretress: 313-370 (88.4 - 104.5%) -- guaranteed OHKO after Stealth Rock

252+ SpA Life Orb Aegislash-Blade Shadow Ball vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Skarmory: 278-329 (83.2 - 98.5%) -- 68.8% chance to OHKO after Stealth Rock

252+ SpA Life Orb Aegislash-Blade Shadow Ball vs. 252 HP / 0 SpD Ferrothorn: 183-216 (51.9 - 61.3%) -- guaranteed 2HKO after Stealth Rock and Leftovers recovery

But I'll sure take this in consideration, and test it later. Thanks for the input, I really appreciate it.
 
Hey man, got the request, welcome to smogon! May I suggest the mentorship program?

Anyway this seems like an interesting team, albeit a little standard. From what it looks like you work for a SD Scizor sweep, which is nice and all but i personally find its STABs subpar. You attempt this with excellent wallbreakers in Aegislash and Greninja, who really put pressure on an opponent. Rotom W is a nice pivot who performs great in this metagame, especially so with talonflame everywhere. Excadrill is obligatory spinner with talonflame on the team and voltturning going around, while lastly Talonflame seems to be really nice as well, with priority Brave Bird.

The first thing i see is how Scizor isnt all that good of a sweeper (at least in my opinion). Too many things resist its STABs, and you only do an ok job at removing those things. Heatran is still a big threat forcing a couple of your pokemon out (talonflame and scizor) and Aegislash is a big threat too as it can come in on Scizor and put an end to your sweep. You might want to try Mega Lucario as its a much better late game sweeper. It also acts as a nice wallbreaker and whatnot early game. However if you are uncomfortable with switching that out, you can also try Knock Off on Scizor over Roost with 248 HP/ 252 Atk/ 8 Spe to be able to catch Aegislash, Heatran switchins, Skarmory, etc. Dark/Steel/Bug is also decent coverage so yeah (Bug/Steel is bad).

On Talonflame, theres no need to run 252 Speed! Talonflame outspeeds a majority of the tier with Jolly 144 Spe. This outspeeds Mega Lucario, arguably the best speed tier right now. Theres no need to run 252 speed! Also, Stealth Rock on Excadrill.

I hope this helps man! Sorry if it isnt as in depth as it could be (Talonflame could probably go it really puts pressure on Excadrill) im just really exhausted. Good luck with your team! Have a merry christmas as well!!

Lucario @ Lucarionite
Trait: Adaptability
EVs: 4 HP/ 252 Atk/ 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Close Combat
- Crunch/ Ice Punch
- Bullet Punch/ Extremespeed
- Swords Dance
 
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