CAP 34 - Part 14 - Pokedex Submissions

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Final Submission

Chuggalong
, the Smokestack Pokemon

Scarlet: Chuggalong take pride in how much noise they produce from their roars and scales. They often ride alongside moving trains to show off their cacophony.

Violet: When Chuggalong travels across regions, it releases noxious fumes into the air. Unfortunately, these fumes can disrupt the migrations of other Pokemon.
 
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Final Submission

Chuggalong
, the Freight Drake Pokémon

Scarlet: The smog it blows out will choke the air for several days. If it stops spewing smoke, a hungry Koffing might be clogging up Chuggalong's chimney.

Violet: When facing potential rivals, Chuggalong will honk raucously until they back off. Early railroads had to learn this the hard way.

s/o to Ender for feedback
 
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Final Submission

Chuggalong
, the Train Rex Pokémon

Scarlet: It charges into the nest of its prey, suffocating them with noisy bellowing and poisonous smog. It then carries the unconscious prey back to its lair.

Violet: As Chuggalong ages, it is thought to grow additional segments to accommodate the powerful toxins that have built up within its scaly body.
 
Disqualifications:
  • Chaos_Mochi: Entry contains an illegal character.
  • TheFurretStar: Entry is longer than 153 characters.
Autofixes:
  • IronTemplar: "Chuggalong are quite friendly, despite..." -> "Chuggalong are quite friendly despite..."
  • SkyOfSouls:
    • "The main means for transporting goods..." -> "As the main means for transporting goods..."
    • "wheeshing" -> "whooshing"
Thank you to adorluigi for GP checking. Now off to the first poll!
 
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