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Since moving up in Secondary school, me and a few friends have moved up from weed up to things like shrooms, I've had some good experiences but I feel like I'm riding my luck, when I used to have panic attacks with weed I used to be put off it for months, anyone care to share some stories?
No fixes, just a rate. I really like the use of things I don't see very often, not the star of the show 'Bambi', but CB emboar, I think it's such an underrated Pokemon and it's great to see someone else singing its praises.
Make it a bit more colourful to read, do your comments in a different colour, and maybe add pictures of the 'mons, look at some successful war stories, they're interesting to read because they keep your attention.