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I would remove the sentence "Vullaby fits on balance teams that struggle with Pokemon like Gothita and Hisuian Zoroark, since it can force them out." Since vullaby fits on everything. After that, this can go to gp
This person reads the Pokedex. Crazy.
Some feedback is to avoid simply writing what the moves do. Saying something like: "Brave Bird hits common pokemon and knock off removes eviolites making switching in more difficult" is more helpful than the type chart and move descriptions. Removed the...
You're not wrong but multihit move phrasing is weird in general. Especially since Vullaby can survive the two hit Icicle Spear!
Reword cicle Spear sentence to say you can threaten common pokemon such as Voltorb-H and Vullaby. The specifics can be ignored and Mudbray is a bad example due to...