Welcome to the community! For criticism you COULD use the RMT forum but I advise against that straight up (since you're better off just chatting to us until you get a feel for the community basically). So really the best place would be the #mentor channel on synirc! Do you know how to get there? If not, it's linked at the start of the Introduction Thread, if I recall correctly, or in one of the other stickies there!