Recent content by JermemGoffdoff

Here's a mini-check. I might add/remove some later in the day (perhaps I may even finish it). I can't reserve posts for WIPs for amchecks without actually posting the WIP. I wouldn't implement any of these changes directly from my check, rather I would wait for them to be approved (if they are...

I'm not done yet, but here are the beginnings of my amcheck for this analysis. EDIT 2: Here ya go add remove comment As always, never implement an amcheck unless it's approved, as it may be very shitty. EDIT: Almost done... EDIT 2: OK... I'm done... I'd suggest reviewing Smogon's Sixth Gen...

I think before someone checks your analysis, it would be nice of you if you would correct any capitalization errors, referring to these standards: http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_grammar_standards You could also proofread it to make sure there aren't any obvious errors such as incomplete...

You're a great writer~ remove:red add:blue comment:green this is an amcheck - do not implement it unless it's approved... [OVERVIEW] With its great bulk and strong supportive movepool, Togekiss works as a solid option to help the rest of its team shine. Primarily used for its access to...

I think working as a brain surgeon might have made Ben Carson insane. With his "work incentives" for illegal immigrants, he's basically pro slavery for crying out loud... But I don't think it really matters that he thinks being gay is a choice. It doesn't really matter for Republicans either...

Hello Adding Removing Pointing Something Out [OVERVIEW] Out of the many additional Pokemon that roam free in CAP, it's no stretch to say that Colossoil is a creation that has had one of the most significant impacts on the metagame as a whole. For starters, Colossoil's capabilities as a...

I understand. There was a reason I didn't finish it and told him explicitly not to use it lol. I posted it because I felt like not posting it would have made it even more of a waste of time than it already was :P

Here's a half check. I was a little tired, so I stopped midway. blue:add red:remove ...don't edit in these changes unless they're approved. [OVERVIEW] Venusaur is a unique Pokémon. While its sub-par stats may cause many players pass over it without thinking twice, in that it has just...

the 'can' additions were to keep the mood consistent in that paragraph. I thought to add 'frailer' so that the use of 'even' would make more sense in contrasting 'bulkier' in the preceding sentence. I agree that adding 'as they're also' was probably unnecessary.

Here you go... red:remove blue:add [OVERVIEW] A high Attack stat and access to Agility make Kingler a potent sweeper as well as a strong wallbreaker before setting up. Its solid coverage and access to Knock Off also make it fairly annoying to switch into. However, it Kingler has trouble...

I checked. According to The Chicago Manual of Style, American style necessitates period inside quotation. It turns out closing the quotation before the period was incorrect. The truly correct sentence: John's sister said that he "doesn't like chocolate"; but I think he was referring to what...

Here's a few suggestions... [OVERVIEW] Thanks to its superb defensive typing and decent base 91 Speed, Rotom is a threatening status spreader in RU. Rotom's typing grants it five resistances and three immunities, which allow it to deal with influential walls in RU such as Mega Steelix and...

The Federal Minimum Wage should be seen mainly as a tool for the labor force. It prevents companies from playing games with their employees, threatening to lower their wages to unfair lows in return for higher productivity. As such, the main reason for its existence is for negotiation. The...

Chou Toshio The problem, I feel, with incentives and taxation as a mechanism, is that they would have to be proportionate to company income for them to have any significant impact, which would mean they could end up being severe or unpredictable, and they would also be difficult to enforce...