Copyediting Foongus [QC 2/2] [GP 0/1]

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[OVERVIEW]
Due to its good defensive typing, excellent ability and utility provided by Spore, Foongus is one of the best defensive Pokemon in Little Cup. With the longevity provided by Regenerator and Synthesis, Foongus is able to reliably check many threats over the course of the game, including Chinchou, Grookey, and Mienfoo. Spore is threatening due to the fast paced nature of Little Cup and luck based nature of sleep. However, due to Foongus being relatively passive, it can be taken advantage of offensively once Spore has been exhausted.

[SET]
name: Defensive
move 1: Giga Drain
move 2: Sludge Bomb
move 3: Spore
move 4: Synthesis
item: Eviolite
ability: Regenerator
nature: Bold
tera type: Water / Steel
evs: 124 HP / 156 Def / 156 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Giga Drain and Sludge Bomb make for an effective STAB combo capable of hitting most of the tier for at least neutral damage. The added poison chance on Sludge Bomb can ruin potential switch-ins such as Mienfoo or Toedscool. Synthesis provides extra longevity so Foongus doesn't solely rely on Regenerator, as Giga Drain doesn't provide consistent healing. The given EV spread maximizes Foongus' bulk, allowing it to soft check a variety of Pokemon. Tera Water is a generally good defensive type and makes Foongus resistant to Shellder's Icicle Spear, but in return leaves it vulnerable to Electric- and Grass-types such as Elekid and Grookey. Tera Steel resists Vullaby's Brave Bird and is more effective at checking Shellder with the added resistance to Rock Blast, however Foongus becomes weak to Ground- and Fighting-types such as Mudbray and Mienfoo. It should be noted that once Terastallized, Foongus is no longer able to absorb Spore from opposing Foongus.

Foongus is a staple on many teams and defensively supports its team with its longevity and Spore. Wingull and Vullaby appreciate Foongus switching in on Electric-type moves from Chinchou and Elekid. Foongus has issues with Flying-types such as Wingull and Vullaby, making Chinchou a good partner. Teammates that can remove entry hazards like Defog Vullaby or Rapid Spin Alolan Sandshrew enable Foongus to switch around more comfortably. As Foongus often acts as a check to itself, Pokemon that can help it succeed in the mirror such as Sandshrew Alola and Stunky make good teammates. These two can switch in on an opposing Foongus attacking or healing with Synthesis and offensively pressure it.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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An alternate EV spread of 76 Special Attack, 76 Special Defense, and 76 Speed EVs can be considered to beat opposing Foongus one-on-one. However, due to the reduced bulk it will take significantly more damage from Chinchou's Ice Beam, Elekid's Psychic, and Glimmet's Power Gem. Tera Ghost can be used for Foongus to escape Gothita's Shadow Tag, but it leaves Foongus weak to Knock Off from multiple Pokemon including Mienfoo, Vullaby, Stunky, and Grookey.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Spore Immune Pokemon**: Some Pokemon are able to use items or moves to block Spore from Foongus while not threatened by its STAB moves. Alolan Sandshrew can use Safety Goggles to safely switch in on Foongus and threaten Triple Axel, while Stunky can use Substitute, which Foongus cannot break in one hit.

**Gothita**: Gothita is able to easily trap and remove Foongus with Psychic, which can be made easier with help provided by Chinchou or Elekid's Volt Switch or Mienfoo's U-turn. Additionally, Gothita can opt for a Tera Steel SubCM set that completely shuts down Foongus and turns it into a setup opportunity to sweep.

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[SET COMMENTS]
Giga Drain and Sludge Bomb make for an effective STAB combo capable of hitting most of the tier for at least neutral damage. The added poison chance on Sludge Bomb is valuable against potential switch-ins such as Mienfoo or Toedscool. Synthesis provides extra longevity so Foongus doesn't solely rely on Regenerator, as Giga Drain doesn't provide consistent healing. The given EV spread maximizes Foongus' bulk, allowing it to soft check a variety of Pokemon. Tera Water is a generally good defensive type and makes Foongus resistant to Shellder's Icicle Spear, but in return leaves it vulnerable to Electric- and Grass-types such as Elekid and Grookey. Tera Steel has similar benefits to Tera Water and also resists Vullaby's Brave Bird, however Foongus becomes weak to Ground- and Fighting-types such as Mudbray and Mienfoo.

Foongus is able to pair nicely with many Pokemon because of its defensive presence. Wingull and Vullaby appreciate Foongus switching in on Electric-type moves from Chinchou and Elekid. Foongus can help Alolan Sandshrew against Mienfoo’s High Jump Kick, while Alolan Sandshrew can keep Stealth Rock or Spikes off the field to support Foongus. Foongus has issues with Flying-types such as Wingull and Vullaby, making Chinchou a good partner. ashrews also a nice pairing bc it can give you an easy avenue to escape foongus wars - not sure on exact wording to use though

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

An alternate EV spread of 76 Special Attack, 76 Special Defense, and 76 Speed EVs can be considered to beat opposing Foongus one-on-one, however due to the reduced bulk, it will take significantly more damage from Chinchou's Ice Beam, Elekid's Psychic, and Glimmet's Power Gem. Tera Ghost can be used for Foongus to escape Gothita's Shadow Tag, but it leaves Foongus weak to Knock Off from multiple Pokemon including Mienfoo, Vullaby, Stunky, and Grookey.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Spore Immune Pokemon**: Some Pokemon are able to use items or moves to block Spore from Foongus while not threatened by its STAB moves. Alolan Sandshrew can use Safety Goggles to safely switch in on Foongus and threaten Triple Axel, while Stunky can use Substitute, which Foongus cannot break in one hit.

**Gothita**: Gothita is able to easily trap and remove Foongus with Psychic, which can be made easier with help provided by Chinchou or Elekid's Volt Switch or Mienfoo's U-turn. maybe mention demon goth here asw - unsure
qc 1/2 - if this gets left sitting for a while you can just mark this as ready for gp i think everything looked good but might want 2nd eyes anyways
 
good job!
[OVERVIEW]
Due to its good defensive typing, excellent ability and utility provided by Spore, Foongus is one of the best defensive Pokemon in Little Cup. With the longevity provided by Regenerator and Synthesis, Foongus is able to reliably check many threats over the course of the game, including Chinchou, Grookey, and Mienfoo. Spore is incredibly threatening due to the fast paced nature of Little Cup often leaving little time for a Pokemon to wake up. However, due to Foongus being relatively passive, it can be taken advantage of offensively once Spore has been exhausted.
just as a comment i think u can cut down on adverbs like "often leaving", "incredibily threatening" though incredibly threatening is probably fine. content here looks great.

[SET]
name: Defensive
move 1: Giga Drain
move 2: Sludge Bomb
move 3: Spore
move 4: Synthesis
item: Eviolite
ability: Regenerator
nature: Bold
tera type: Water / Steel
evs: 124 HP / 156 Def / 156 SpD

[SET COMMENTS]
Giga Drain and Sludge Bomb make for an effective STAB combo capable of hitting most of the tier for at least neutral damage. The added poison chance on Sludge Bomb is valuable against potential switch-ins such as Mienfoo or Toedscool. i think there's a more active phrase for "is valuable against" Synthesis provides extra longevity so Foongus doesn't solely rely on Regenerator, as Giga Drain doesn't provide consistent healing. The given EV spread maximizes Foongus' bulk, allowing it to soft check a variety of Pokemon. Tera Water is a generally good defensive type and makes Foongus resistant to Shellder's Icicle Spear, but in return leaves it vulnerable to Electric- and Grass-types such as Elekid and Grookey. Tera Steel has similar benefits to Tera Water and also resists Vullaby's Brave Bird, however Foongus becomes weak to Ground- and Fighting-types such as Mudbray and Mienfoo. you may also want to mention how tera makes you lose the foongus mirror as its usually your sleep sponge; steel is also better against opp foongus. If you're looking to cut down words to add that I don't think "Tera Steel has similar benefits to Tera Water" contributes all that much

Foongus is able to pair pairs nicely with many Pokemon because of its defensive presence (fixed passive to active voice but I also think there's a stronger phrase than "pairs nicely", you could say "defensively supports" because of x/y/z and it gives the sentence more value). Wingull and Vullaby appreciate Foongus switching in on Electric-type moves from Chinchou and Elekid. Foongus can help Alolan Sandshrew against Mienfoo’s High Jump Kick, while Alolan Sandshrew can keep Stealth Rock or Spikes off the field to support Foongus you can broaden this to removal if you'd like (defog vull too) since you also talk about ashrew later. Foongus has issues with Flying-types such as Wingull and Vullaby, making Chinchou a good partner. As Foongus often acts as a check to itself, Alolan Sandshrew can assist Foongus by switching in on an attack or Synthesis attempt, threatening the opposing Foongus and allowing better positioning with its partner. rly like the last sentence, could be extended to stunky + vull or steel types like tink but not necessary

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============

An alternate EV spread of 76 Special Attack, 76 Special Defense, and 76 Speed EVs can be considered to beat opposing Foongus one-on-one, however due to the reduced bulk, it will take significantly more damage from Chinchou's Ice Beam, Elekid's Psychic, and Glimmet's Power Gem maybe split this sentence into two?. Tera Ghost can be used for Foongus to escape Gothita's Shadow Tag, but it leaves Foongus weak to Knock Off from multiple Pokemon including Mienfoo, Vullaby, Stunky, and Grookey.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Spore Immune Pokemon**: Some Pokemon are able to use items or moves to block Spore from Foongus while not threatened by its STAB moves. Alolan Sandshrew can use Safety Goggles to safely switch in on Foongus and threaten Triple Axel, while Stunky can use Substitute, which Foongus cannot break in one hit.

**Gothita**: Gothita is able to easily trap and remove Foongus with Psychic, which can be made easier with help provided by Chinchou or Elekid's Volt Switch or Mienfoo's U-turn. Additionally, Gothita can opt for a Tera Steel SubCM set that completely shuts down Foongus and turns it into a setup opportunity to sweep.

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Written by:
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