Magmar needs expanding, everything else looks fine. If you're gonna put Frillish and Hypno, you might as well add Dodrio, Golduck, Gabite and Beartic. Mr. Mime may be worth it for Baton Pass. Natu isn't great, but Magic Bounce might need a mention. Granbull and Stoutland are the same, so if you mention one then you should include the other (preferably in the same line).
