I'm fine with the "-boosted" change and the maximum Attack thing is okay but the other two really don't improve the work. These changes just make my wording less concise without adding any extra meaning.
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Kingler
No, they help fix the clarity of the sentence; all of them reaad weirdly. I would highly, highly recommend that all of these changes be made bc afaik they dont change the meaning and fix the clarity properly.
Kingler
anyway might as well explain; notably is used wrongly. Like you say, 'Life Orb gains a bunch of kos, notably xyz' which is NOT the context you meant to say because the two facts weren't related. Also the unboosted physical attackers is optional but makes it seem like suicunes bulk sucks
Alter
eh I think "a Scald burn _can also_" makes it clear that I'm referring to another aspect of why Scald is good. "Unboosted" simply means that stat boosts haven't been applied and I've made it clear through the analysis that it has great bulk so it wouldn't make sense to imply that it sucks with "unboosted"