Being brutally honest, yes, your analyses do need some work. I don't want to flat-out reject them because of the time you put in to them and your willingness to contribute. I'll try to find the time tonight to post my concerns.
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Fuzznip
JEFLIV
Alright man, cool. And thanks for your patience, I'm new to competitive and I'm not familiar with OU, having only done LC to a full extent.
Fuzznip
If you're not familiar with the OU metagame or competitive play, then you probably shouldn't be writing analyses for this tier, JEFLIV.
JEFLIV
Let me rephrase: I'm familiar with the metagame but not with which Pokemon are threats, and things like that.