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That's all good, that amount of writing can't be perfect. Take all the time you need n.n

i swear i'm almost done :) anyway there's some stuff you need to watch out for; you need serial commas for a list, hyphens aren't used in place of semicolons or emdashes and the explanation of a lot of stuff that was implied was a bit unnecessary.

don't worry though, a lot of people make mistakes their first time in c&c and learn thereon ^.^

okay i finished the check, but I might give it another skim later