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My mistake; good catch!

Also don't cancel your submission. It may not have been polished on the first try, but the justification showed promise, especially for a rookie. You still have time to retool it and I'll give it another look when it's time to make the slate.

But can I send two spreads?
Anyway there are too many smudges on the first: not enough bulk, equal defenses, not enough speed and too much Atk.
Also I haven't the time to control and give it some calcs.
I can barely recontrol the second spread today...

Oh when I saw "cancelled" I thought you canceled your submission entirely. Didn't see the new one at the time; I'll comment on it later today.

If you want say something you have about five hours starting now, then I have to go to sleep and then to work, so I will not be able to answer you

The submission is finished, but I can't change the text or send a new one because of a server error.