The character count limit forced me to make a 2nd post so yeah. You mentioned how Koko and Lele were annoying if Jirachi got weakened, and something like that is perfect, but just be to sure to add in a few more threats that might look really annoying. For me, Kartana looks really annoying once Jirachi goes down, so in case the user doesn't know from the start, it'd be worth letting them know to watch out for that.
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