Hey, TheAmericanDream38's analyses need a bunch of work. Since you have a great grasp on rewording and rewriting analyses in your checks, I feel his analyses would benefit a lot from it. I've done a preliminary check, fixing basic grammatical mistakes, and sentences, but much of it could use some rewriting, which I'm hesitant about doing (since I'm new). So when you have no other obligations, could you please check on this for me?