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  • CP, there a few things with your UU Charizard check that I fixed myself, I just wanted to let you know what I did:

    "though it must be noted that SolarBeam from the Choice Specs set will 2HKO."

    The bolded part should be Fire Blast.

    "The EV spread is simple, maximizing Speed and Special Attack with the remaining EVs are thrown into Defense; this allows Charizard to switch into Stealth Rock twice by giving it an odd HP stat."

    I assume you meant "while" instead of with.
    That's not rewriting but just changing the sentences and combining paragraphs...

    Anyways, fine. Although I checked it myself and changed a few thingy's.

    Also, I wasn't planning on implementing that other guy's "GP check", if you take a look at it it's pretty damn flawed itself.
    About the UU Roserade analysis:

    I'm sorry but you haven't rewritten complete parts of the analysis lol, you just changed the line so that it sounds better. Why would it need an extra check... :/
    Hey CP, if you have chance, could you look at UU Charizard? It would be greatly appreciated :)
    Hey, TheAmericanDream38's analyses need a bunch of work. Since you have a great grasp on rewording and rewriting analyses in your checks, I feel his analyses would benefit a lot from it. I've done a preliminary check, fixing basic grammatical mistakes, and sentences, but much of it could use some rewriting, which I'm hesitant about doing (since I'm new). So when you have no other obligations, could you please check on this for me?
    I see you're back and GP Checking, that's great! If you have some time, could you give VGC 2012 Ninetales and VGC 2012 Toxicroak a GP Check? I'd really appreciate it!
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