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  • sandshrewz
    Np :)

    As in describe the 2 items as if they're the same set. Don't use phrases such as 'On the Specs set' etc... Use 'if holding a Specs' etc. Just don't make them sound too distinct. I don't think my Claydol check was really good though... :x hint hint? Nah I doubt it will... I should change 'this' to 'these' lol.

    Hm... I was hoping they'll test more PokeGrammar and format things... Those more random stuff are easier to catch. >.< my grammar sucks... D: hope they don't test advanced things such as comma splice, etc... Don't really get whats subject-verb agreement. Whats that? :/
    sandshrewz
    >.> I'm such a lagger at getting news... Oh well, here's something for you to consider. Hope it helps with your Claydol. It is allowed to mention scarf and specs as the same set >.< probably your way works as well. Not too sure though. It's for you to consider! :P that's why I aviod taking analyses with choice item :o
    Rakan
    Wait what Christmas what are you talking about xD

    If you want, you can send the test to me so I can look it over for you next time you apply :)
    sirndpt
    :DD

    hey, you write well yourself - that Claydol analysis was awesome! I think I change a bit too much sometimes, lol >_>

    eta: so sorry about the gp test thing :/ at least you can still keep contributing analyses! they're definitely a far better contribution to the site than gp checks imo. please don't be discouraged - I honestly do think you're an excellent writer, one of the best around in fact.
    sandshrewz
    Ugh. Sorry, just read your convo with Molk. :/ wth aren't you in yet??? @.@ :( I wanted you to accompany me as the next batch :( don't give up NB! You're in this for some time alr, it's too early to give up! You're not done with this.
    Rakan
    Wait, don't quit :(

    I don't understand why they aren't letting you on the GP team... To be quite frank, some of your checks are better than mine; you should definitely be on the team

    I don't know why freakin MOO is on the team he knows nothing and his grammar sucks (sorry had to rant about moo)
    Jellicent
    Haha, that might be wishful thinking, but thanks. I got a feeling you'll make the team as well :)
    sandshrewz
    Wait, X base Speed is allowed I think. No need to cap Base. Where did I get base X Speed from? @.@
    Molk
    dont give up, you probz just havent done enough GP checks, dont QUIT D:
    Molk
    i mean, there were so many changes to be made lol, the edited analysis looked like a rainbow
    Rakan
    GAHH I'm so starving right now it's not even funny lol

    Alrighty then, I guess the only thing to do it wait :/

    But if you want me to take a look at your checks, just VM me and I'll gladly do so and maybe even STAMP them ;)
    sandshrewz
    Hm.. Should i delete my post too? :P

    Thanks for the advice! I'll keep that in mind! I'll cut down the number of subjective changes, probably too many of those are irritating.

    Yea, while you go do that check, I'm doing Magmortar :)
    Rakan
    Oh. My. God. do i LIKE Fish and Chips??? I LOVE FISH AND CHIPS OM NOM NOM :D I'm really hungry right now... and it's 1:15 in the morning lol cuz my stupid chem prof making hw due Friday during break >:[

    I'm definitely sure that you'll get on GP the next time you apply, your checks have gotten significantly better :)

    Is there a specific amount of time you have to wait before applying again? :/
    sandshrewz
    Haha. Your buddy :) oh well, depends on what he wants to do with it. Your additional check was good too, not redundant. :)
    Rakan
    Aww... I'm sure you didn't do as badly as you think, but I guess practice makes perfect? For some unknown reason Great Sage didn't even give me the test... O.o
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