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Due to medical health reasons, I cannot complete my analyses and forfeit them. I apologize for the inconvenience

This was in my own writing style... The similarities between this and the UU analysis are in the content so, to be more specific, I'm asking the GP team how to phrase statements like: "over 150 base attack" and "beating Uber behomoths" differently as to differentiate them from the UU analysis.

After too long of an absence, I have reviewed my analysis. Frankly, I'm not sure how to change it. I mean, all the information is vital and I dont think it should be taken away and adding anything would be redundant. So changing the wording would be the main option and I cant think of how to do...

Fixed all the above changes, Thank-you. Damn, they are really similar. I changed some of the wording around but is still much too similar. Unfortunately, that's the information that was on my skeleton and can't change it too much without having to do QC all over again. If any GP members have...

Fixed and put Specs in OO

Ok, Overview: You need to go into specifics on a lot of things. Why is the typing bad defensively? What makes it a great staller? Why is Dream World ability a let down? etc. The answers may seem obvious but are necessary for people new to competitive battling. Mention something about its...

I actually think Reversal should go in AC of the support set over Stone Edge. Itt goes with Focus Sash great especially with SR and Sucker Punch. It gives it a more multi purpose edge. I dont think it deserves a slash but maybe a mention in AC. I would also mention Sub and Leftovers in the AC of...

Ok, fixed. Many apologies for stupid mistakes. Any other formatting errors?

Still awaiting QC checks... Nothing I have to add?

Zweilous is now written up but as this is my first analysis there are many things I am unsure about.

Added. So just waiting for the last check

Umm. As said previously replace the hyphens (-) on the Set Name and EVs with a colon (:). You have 2 Checks and counters section and 2 Dream world sections. You also should take the Set Comments out of capitalization but thats me being picky. As far as content goes there is a lot to work on...

You still have a couple formatting errors. It should be [Overview] (between brackets and lower case). The st should literally look like this: [SET] name: Stallrein move 1: Protect move 2: Substitute move 3: Blizzard / Surf move 4: Super Fang / Toxic / Roar item: Leftovers ability: Ice Body...

Thanks, still waiting for other checks or recommendations :)

It's kind of hard to read take a look at some other analyses and follow there spacing/ punctuation there are some good examples like: http://www.smogon.com/forums/showthread.php?t=3456354. :)

Your overview needs to be beefed up quite a bit. Your overview would literally be one sentence longf with only that information. You have its movepool to talk about, Dual Stabs, defensive typing (something beyond "good"), niche in the metagame, etc. IMO, Ice Fang should get first slash on the...

I did it and seems kind of confused. Theres a lot in AC that could be split into different sections. I personally prefer the 2 set approach but ok. For the 4th slot I think Tauntshould get first slash but regardless. There is a lot I put in AC that could go into OO so some opinions on that are...

Took out of OO and added as a set. I moved the 8 SpD eves to HP for simplicitys sake. I dont really know what they do but can easily change it back.

Done, thanks.

I'm not sure about Punishments place with Cresselia gone and U-Turn being superior to dealing with Psycjhics. I guess Sub Calm Mind Alakazam and its not like Ice Punch isnt filler anyway.... I forgot where I was going with this. Leave it as a secondary slash. Im skeptical of the second set but...