VGC 2009 Snorlax [QC 1/1] [GP 1/1]

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[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Snorlax) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Thick Fat
Level: 50
Happiness: 0
EVs: 52 HP / 236 Atk / 196 Def / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Frustration
- Self-Destruct
- Earthquake / Fire Punch
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
* Snorlax is a slow, bulky bruiser with access to one of the most powerful spread moves in the metagame: STAB-boosted Self-Destruct. Between its massive bulk and single weakness to Fighting, very few Pokemon can beat Snorlax one on one. However, Snorlax is held back by its low Speed, which makes it reliant on Trick Room or Thunder Wave support, and it is susceptible to status moves, Intimidate, and well-timed Protect usage.
* Frustration is Snorlax's main attacking move to make slow, steady progress, and it's Snorlax's preferred single-target STAB move to thwart the rare Transform Smeargle.
* Self-Destruct provides enormous spread damage, and Earthquake rounds out Snorlax's coverage, letting it hit Rock- and Steel-types that resist its Normal-type STAB moves. Fire Punch is an alternative coverage move that hits threats such as Metagross, Bronzong, Shedinja, and Scizor. Protect is mandatory to let Snorlax avoid double targeting or allow its ally to set Trick Room.
* Sitrus Berry is Snorlax's preferred item, giving it burst healing and notably preventing Life Orb Latios from achieving a 2HKO on it with Draco Meteor. Custap Berry is an alternative, letting Snorlax catch foes off-guard with an unexpected priority Self-Destruct.
* The defensive investment allows Snorlax to survive Close Combat from Infernape, two Meteor Mashs from Adamant Metagross, two Earthquakes from Adamant Life Orb Rhyperior, and three Thunderbolts from Modest Zapdos. The Attack investment grants Snorlax the ability to 3HKO most Cresselia and 2HKO bulky Zapdos with Frustration. The Speed investment lets Snorlax outspeed paralyzed Choice Scarf Smeargle.

Teambuilding
=========
* Snorlax works well on both bulky goodstuff and hard Trick Room teams. As such, Cresselia is one of its best partners. Cresselia provides Snorlax Trick Room or Thunder Wave support and can beat Fighting-types, while Snorlax can patch up its limited damage output and threaten Steel-types.
* Snorlax appreciates Ground-immune allies so that it can freely use Earthquake. Zapdos, Bronzong, Latios, and Salamence all fit the bill, with each providing unique upsides. While Zapdos and Bronzong provide speed control in Thunder Wave and Trick Room, respectively, Latios and Salamence handily beat Infernape. Salamence has the added benefit of Intimidate support to patch up Snorlax's low Defense.
* Snorlax struggles against a handful of common threats. It often can't hit Gengar due to Gengar's Normal and Ground immunities. It also trades damage poorly against Metagross and Rhyperior.
* Aside from direct damage output, Snorlax is susceptible to status moves such as Cresselia's Thunder Wave, Gengar's Will-O-Wisp, and Smeargle's Dark Void. Repeated triggers of Intimidate from Gyarados and Salamence greatly hamper Snorlax's damage output as well. Finally, Snorlax runs the risk of using Self-Destruct against a foe's Protect, which wastes the move and knocks itself out.

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[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Snorlax) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Thick Fat
Level: 50
Happiness: 0
EVs: 52 HP / 236 Atk / 196 Def / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Frustration
- Self-Destruct
- Earthquake / Fire Punch (Definitely needs mentioning, Fire Punch is used at least as often as Earthquake if not more)
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
* Snorlax is a slow, bulky bruiser with access to one of the most powerful spread moves in the metagame, STAB boosted Self-Destruct. Between it's massive bulk and single weakness to the Fighting-type, very few Pokemon can beat Snorlax one on one. However, it's held back by its low Speed which makes it reliant on Trick Room (perhaps it is worth mentioning Thunder Wave/Paralysis?), and it is susceptible to status moves, Intimidate, and well timed Protect.
* Frustration is Snorlax's main attacking move to make slow, steady progress, and is Snorlax's preferred single target STAB to thwart the rare Transform Smeargle.
* Self-Destruct provides enormously powerful spread damage and Earthquake rounds out Snorlax's coverage, letting it hit Rock- and Steel-types that resist its Normal STAB moves. Fire Punch is an alternative coverage move which hits threats such as Metagross, Bronzong, Shedinja, and Scizor. Protect is mandatory to let Snorlax avoid double targeting or allow its ally to set Trick Room.
* Sitrus Berry is Snorlax's preferred item, giving it burst healing and notably preventing Life Orb Latios from achieving a 2HKO. Custap Berry is also a great option, letting Snorlax catch opponents off guard with an unexpected speedy Self-Destruct.
* Snorlax's Speed investment lets it outpace Paralyzed Scarf Smeargle. [ELABORATE, SEEKING QC SUGGESTIONS ON EV SPREAD]
* The defensive investment allows Snorlax to survive Infernape Close Combat, two Adamant Metagross Meteor Mash, two Adamant Life Orb Rhyperior Earthquake and three Modest Zapdos Thunderbolt. The Attack investment grants Snorlax the ability to 3HKO most Cresselia and 2HKO bulky Zapdos. The Speed investment lets Snorlax outspeed Paralyzed Choice Scarf Smeargle.

Teambuilding
=========
* Snorlax works well on both bulky goodstuff teams as well as hard Trick Room. As such, Cresselia is one of its best partners. Cresselia appreciates allies that can patch up its limited damage output and threaten Steel-types, while Snorlax appreciates Trick Room support (possibly mention Thunder Wave?) and teammates that beat Fighting-types.
* Snorlax needs (a bit strong) appreciates Ground immune allies so it can freely use Earthquake. Zapdos, Bronzong, Latios, and Salamence all fit the bill, each providing unique upsides. While Zapdos and Bronzong provide speed control in Thunder Wave and Trick Room respectively, Latios and Salamence handily beat Infernape. Salamence has the added benefit of Intimidate support to patch up Snorlax's frailer Defense.
* Snorlax struggles against a handful of common threats. It often (Fire Punch) can't hit Gengar offensively due to its Normal and Ground immunities. Additionally, Snorlax is susceptible to status moves such as Thunder Wave, Will-o-Wisp, and Dark Void. Repeated Intimidate from opposing Gyarados and Salamence greatly hamper Snorlax's damage output too. Finally, Snorlax runs the risk of using Self-Destruct into an opposing Protect, thus wasting the move and knocking itself out. (Could be worth separating into more than one bullet point for clarity, also I would suggest mentioning Metagross and Rhyperior due to Snorlax's poor damage trading with them)

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Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Snorlax) @ Sitrus Berry
Ability: Thick Fat
Level: 50
Happiness: 0
EVs: 52 HP / 236 Atk / 196 Def / 4 SpD / 20 Spe
Adamant Nature
- Frustration
- Self-Destruct
- Earthquake / Fire Punch
- Protect

[SET COMMENTS]

Set Details
========
* Snorlax is a slow, bulky bruiser with access to one of the most powerful spread moves in the metagame: (comma → colon) STAB boosted STAB-boosted Self-Destruct. Between it's its massive bulk and single weakness to the Fighting-type Fighting, very few Pokemon can beat Snorlax one on one. However, it's Snorlax is held back by its low Speed, (AC) which makes it reliant on Trick Room or Thunder Wave support, and it is susceptible to status moves, Intimidate, and well timed Protect well-timed Protect usage.
* Frustration is Snorlax's main attacking move to make slow, steady progress, and is it's Snorlax's preferred single target single-target STAB move to thwart the rare Transform Smeargle.
* Self-Destruct provides enormously powerful enormous spread damage, (AC) and Earthquake rounds out Snorlax's coverage, letting it hit Rock- and Steel-types that resist its Normal Normal-type STAB moves. Fire Punch is an alternative coverage move which that hits threats such as Metagross, Bronzong, Shedinja, and Scizor. Protect is mandatory to let Snorlax avoid double targeting or allow its ally to set Trick Room.
* Sitrus Berry is Snorlax's preferred item, giving it burst healing and notably preventing Life Orb Latios from achieving a 2HKO on it. (with what move?) Custap Berry is also a great option (fluff) an alternative, letting Snorlax catch opponents off guard foes off-guard with an unexpected speedy priority (technically, moves can't be fast) Self-Destruct.
* The defensive investment allows Snorlax to survive Infernape Close Combat from Infernape, two Meteor Mashes from Adamant Metagross Meteor Mash, two Earthquakes from Adamant Life Orb Rhyperior, (AC) Earthquake and three Thunderbolts from Modest Zapdos Thunderbolt. The Attack investment grants Snorlax the ability to 3HKO most Cresselia and 2HKO bulky Zapdos. (with what move(s)?) The Speed investment lets Snorlax outspeed paralyzed Choice Scarf Smeargle.

Teambuilding
=========
* Snorlax works well on both bulky goodstuff teams as well as and hard Trick Room teams. As such, Cresselia is one of its best partners. Cresselia appreciates allies that can patch up its limited damage output and threaten Steel-types provides Snorlax Trick Room or Thunder Wave support and can beat Fighting-types, while Snorlax appreciates Trick Room or Thunder Wave support can patch up its limited damage output and teammates that beat Fighting-types threaten Steel-types. (I'm assuming that when you say "Cresselia/Snorlax appreciates...", the other Pokemon can provide such traits for it. I reworded this sentence with that in mind so that its not talking about the Pokemon's needs in a broad sense. Please lmk if there's an issue.)
* Snorlax appreciates Ground immune Ground-immune allies so that it can freely use Earthquake. Zapdos, Bronzong, Latios, and Salamence all fit the bill, with each providing unique upsides. While Zapdos and Bronzong provide speed control in Thunder Wave and Trick Room, (AC) respectively, Latios and Salamence handily beat Infernape. Salamence has the added benefit of Intimidate support to patch up Snorlax's frailer low Defense.
* Snorlax struggles against a handful of common threats. It often can't hit Gengar offensively (If a Pokemon attempts to attack another, we can generally assume it's going on the offensive) due to its Gengar's Normal and Ground immunities. It also trade trades damage poorly against opposing (We can easily assume that these Pokemon are Snorlax's foes) Metagross and Rhyperior.
* Aside from direct damage output, Snorlax is also susceptible to status moves such as Thunder Wave, Will-O-Wisp, and Dark Void. (Maybe list Pokemon that commonly run these moves, i.e. "Smeargle's Dark Void") Repeated triggers of Intimidate from opposing Gyarados and Salamence greatly hamper Snorlax's damage output too. (too casual) Finally, Snorlax runs the risk of using Self-Destruct into an opposing against a foe's Protect, thus wasting which wastes the move, (AC) and knocking itself out.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/ned.353628/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/oopsgtg.567986/
Grammar checked by:
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