Copyediting 4a/Offensive Kyurem [GP 0/1]

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[SET]
Kyurem @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power
- Ice Beam
- Hidden Power Fire / Draco Meteor / Roost

[SET COMMENTS]

With Heavy Duty Boots, Kyurem can leverage its decent natural bulk and perfect movepool to clobber otherwise solid answers. Ice Beam and Freeze Dry are fantastic STAB options, able to maul structures reliant on bulky Water-types to stymy the assault of powerful Ice Beams. Hidden Power Fire and Earth Power serve as excellent coverage to hit the Steel-types that would otherwise be able to survive the onslaught, with Hidden Power Fire targeting Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, and Earth Power chunking Gholdengo and Galarian Slowking for more damage while maiming defensive Heatran. Draco Meteor, while less broadly applicable in its targets, can secure important interactions; OHKO'ing the Raging Bolt, Roaring Moon, and Mega Latios that would otherwise survive an Ice Beam from full health. Roost enables Kyurem to shrug off the chip it can often accumulate throughout a game at the expense of further offensive prowess.

With the ability to outspeed almost every Ground-type in the tier, Kyurem can find ample opportunities to exploit its coverage and extremely powerful STAB combination, especially against bulkier and slower structures. Kyurem is a one-stop-shop to handle common Gliscor and Toxapex structures, while also doing extremely well versus offenses reliant on Alomomola and Slowbro to be their defensive backbone. Kyurem is not without weaknesses- its middling speed tier and weak defensive typing means it is often outpaced and forced out by threatening offensive staples such as Zamazenta and Mega Diancie. Kyurem thusly pairs extremely well with lineups with a strong defensive core that it can rely on to absorb some of the pressure it inevitably incurs. Ting-Lu and Pecharunt serve to stymy the assault from Mega Latios and the aforementioned Zamazenta respectively. Galarian Slowking is an extremely powerful defensive partner for Kyurem, with invaluable resistances to Fighting- and Fairy-type attacks as well as access to Thunder Wave, crippling the faster threats that would otherwise force Kyurem out. Galarian Slowking also boasts access to Chilly Reception, which allows a slow pivot to get Kyurem onto the field safely with the bonus of Snow, boosting Kyurem's already solid bulk. Pecharunt with Parting Shot serves a similar role, with a Fighting-type immunity and Fairy-type resistance making it a reliable answer to the ever-threatening Iron Valiant, Zamazenta, Urshifu-Rapid and Ogerpon-Wellspring that can all force Kyurem into a corner. Bulky Gholdengo provides additional offensive pressure along with a robust answer to Tapu Lele, and can serve to soften targets for Kyurem to clean through, or trade out with offensive powerhouses that would deny Kyurem from wreaking havoc, while still retaining access to Thunder Wave to provide the aforementioned paralysis that Kyurem exploits so well. Mega Lopunny and Zamazenta make for excellent offensive partners, being able to rely on Kyurem for the bulkier structures that they tend to otherwise struggle against.

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[SET]
Kyurem @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power
- Ice Beam
- Hidden Power Fire / Draco Meteor

[SET COMMENTS]

With Heavy Duty Boots and a more offensive set, Kyurem can leverage its decent natural bulk and perfect movepool to clobber otherwise solid answers. Ice Beam and Freeze Dry are fantastic STAB options, able to maul structures reliant on bulky Water-types to stymy the assault of powerful Ice Beams. Hidden Power Fire and Earth Power serve as excellent coverage to hit the Steel-types that would otherwise be able to survive the onslaught, notably targeting Ferrothorn and Heatran respectively you wanna mention Hidden power fire hitting Mega Scizor as that it’s a common switch in to Kyurem and you wanna mention Earth Power hitting Gholdengo much harder as well. With the ability to outspeed almost every Ground-type in the tier Examples?, Kyurem can find ample opportunities to exploit its coverage and extremely powerful STAB combination, especially against bulkier and slower structures. Draco meteor needs to also be mentioned since it’s slashed.

Kyurem, when allowed to make full use of its movepool, is a one-stop-shop to handle common Gliscor and Toxapex structures, while also doing extremely well versus offenses reliant on Alomolola or and Slowbro to be their defensive backbone. Kyurem is not without weaknesses- its middling speed tier and weak defensive typing means it is often outpaced by threatening offensive staples such as Zamazenta and Mega Diancie. Kyurem thusly pairs extremely well with lineups with a hearty defensive core that it can rely on to absorb some of the pressure it inevitably incurs. Ting-Lu and Pecharunt serve to stymy the assault from Mega Latios and the aforementioned Zamazenta respectively. Galarian Slowking is an extremely powerful defensive partner for Kyurem, with an invaluable quadruple Fighting resistance Should mention how it and Pecharunt are good checks to Iron Valiant another threat to kyurem? and access to Thunder Wave, crippling the faster threats that would otherwise force Kyurem out, and Chilly Reception, which allows a slow pivot to get Kyurem onto the field safely with the bonus of Snow, boosting Kyurem's already solid bulk to new heights. A bulky Gholdengo provides additional offensive pressure along with a robust answer to Tapu Lele, and can serve to soften targets for Kyurem to clean through, or trade out with offensive powerhouses that would deny Kyurem from wreaking havoc mention Gholdengo and its Twave slowing down foes for kyurem. Mega Lopunny and Zamazenta make for excellent offensive partners, being able to rely on Kyurem for the bulkier structures that they tend to otherwise struggle against.

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1/2 when implemented good work.
 
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[SET]
Kyurem @ Heavy-Duty Boots
Ability: Pressure
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
IVs: 0 Atk
Timid Nature
- Freeze-Dry
- Earth Power
- Ice Beam
- Hidden Power Fire / Draco Meteor

[SET COMMENTS]

With Heavy Duty Boots and a more offensive set, Kyurem can leverage its decent natural bulk and perfect movepool to clobber otherwise solid answers. Ice Beam and Freeze Dry are fantastic STAB options, able to maul structures reliant on bulky Water-types to stymy the assault of powerful Ice Beams. Hidden Power Fire and Earth Power serve as excellent coverage to hit the Steel-types that would otherwise be able to survive the onslaught, with Hidden Power Fire targeting Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor, and Earth Power chunking Gholdengo for more damage and maiming defensive Heatran. Mention hitting Gking too Draco Meteor, while less broadly applicable in its targets, can secure important interactions; OHKO'ing the Raging Bolt, Roaring Moon, and Mega Latios that would otherwise win out versus Kyurem that can potentially live an Ice Beam from full health. With the ability to outspeed almost every Ground-type in the tier, Kyurem can find ample opportunities to exploit its coverage and extremely powerful STAB combination, especially against bulkier and slower structures. I like this sentence but its more suited for the second paragraph imo.

Kyurem, when allowed to make full use of its movepool, is a one-stop-shop to handle common Gliscor and Toxapex structures, while also doing extremely well versus offenses reliant on Alomolola Alomomola and Slowbro to be their defensive backbone. Kyurem is not without weaknesses- its middling speed tier and weak defensive typing means it is often outpaced and forced out by threatening offensive staples such as Zamazenta and Mega Diancie. Kyurem thusly pairs extremely well with lineups with a hearty defensive core that it can rely on to absorb some of the pressure it inevitably incurs. Ting-Lu and Pecharunt serve to stymy the assault from Mega Latios and the aforementioned Zamazenta respectively. Galarian Slowking is an extremely powerful defensive partner for Kyurem, with invaluable resistances to Fighting- and Fairy-type attacks as well as as access to Thunder Wave, crippling the faster threats that would otherwise force Kyurem out, and Chilly Reception, which allows a slow pivot to get Kyurem onto the field safely with the bonus of Snow, boosting Kyurem's already solid bulk to new heights. See if you can break up the previous sentence, its really long. Pecharunt serves a similar role, with a Fighting-type immunity and Fairy-type resistance making it a reliable answer to the ever-threatening Iron Valiant beef this up a little bit, pecha also checking things like Waterpon, Shifu, Zama, etc is great that can force Kyurem into a corner. A bulky Gholdengo provides additional offensive pressure along with a robust answer to Tapu Lele, and can serve to soften targets for Kyurem to clean through, or trade out with offensive powerhouses that would deny Kyurem from wreaking havoc, while still retaining access to Thunder Wave to provide the aforementioned paralysis that Kyurem appreciates so deeply. Mega Lopunny and Zamazenta make for excellent offensive partners, being able to rely on Kyurem for the bulkier structures that they tend to otherwise struggle against.

More of a general statement, as much as I love some of the flowery descriptive language GP might not, if you can trim the fat off of this a little bit in terms of descriptions they would probably appreciate it.

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Written by:
slopcat
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Good stuff, QC 2/2
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note for gp: added this line to end of first paragraph-

"Roost enables Kyurem to shrug off the chip it can often accumulate throughout a game at the expense of further offensive prowess."
 
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