4th Gen OU team

[TheMrGrimer]

Hey guys, this is the first team I've built in a while so bare with me. Any constructive criticism and questions/queries are more than welcome :)

Lead: Crobat (Batarang)

Inner focus, Jolly + Life Orb

HP 60/ ATK 192/ SPE 252

Brave Bird
Taunt
Roost
Super Fang

I mixed up the EV spread a little to ensure less likelihood of death from rocks or life orb, and especially since super fang will reduce most pokes to half health anyways I thought it was better invested there.

Ludicolo (KingDeDeDe)

Rain Dish, Calm + Leftovers

HP 226/ SPE 60/ SpD 224

Toxic
Protect
Leech seed
Substitute

again i've seen this set somewhere before, but I've tried tweaking the EV spread a little and increased speed slightly to help get my sub up asap.

Drapion (Grapion)

Battle Armour, Jolly + leftovers

HP 252/ SPE 136/ SpD 120

Swords Dance
EQ
Crunch
Protect

pretty standard set...

Heatran (RedDead)

Flash Fire, Timid + Choice Scarf

HP 4/ SpATK 252/ SPE 252

Overheat
Earth Power
Dragon Pulse
Explosion

Basically acting as potential sweeper/ revenge killer

Gengar (GenGareth)

Levitate, Timid + Focus Sash

HP 4/ SpATK 252/ SPE 252

Shadow Ball
Thunderbolt
Hidden Power (Fire.. I think)
Explosion

Basically but him in for a safe switch and type coverage, I was thinking maybe a Rotom instead? Let me know what you think, and finally..

Snorlax (BigDaddy)

Thick Fat, Impish + Leftovers

HP 252/ DEF 252/ SpDEF 4

Stockpile
Belly Drum
Body Slam
Rest

Very similar to The Flaming Spades StockBelly Snorlax, however I invest more into the Defensive side to help me to get the +6 attack asap, and even if the Body Slam is a two hit KO I can still rest and my +3 DEF and SpDEF will shield me enough to land the two hits I think. Late game sweeper.


So yeah, thats my team so far, again like I said anyone help would be more than welcome :)

 

[Bloo]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

Your descriptions are lacking, which means you are violating the above quoted RMT rule. If you wish to remedy this problem, explain your reasoning behind each Pokemon and why they work on your team more thoroughly. Try to aim for 3-4 sentences with your descriptions. I recommend lurking through the RMT Archive in order to see examples of what we're looking for in an RMT! If you fix this problem, private message me indicating that you have done so. Once you've done that, I will unlock your thread.

 

[haunter]

This is also in the wrong section. Moving to past gens.

BTW; Bloo is a (BAN ME PLEASE) and inferior to me... and he knows it.