4th Gen RMT and suggestions?

[Mr. J]

Bronzong@ Light Clay
Nature: Sassy
EV: 252HP /152 Atk /8 Def /96 SpD

Moveset:
-Light Screen
-Reflect
-Stealth Rock
-Explosion

Um so this is my lead. This is the dual screen Bronzong but instead of Gyro Ball i decided to put Stealth Rock for some damage. When Everything is set up I just have him explode so the opponent can take some damage


Electivire@ Expert Belt
Nature: Jolly
EV: 4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe

Moveset:
-Earthquake
-Ice Punch
-Cross Chop
-Thunderpunch

Ok so this Electivire is for switching in on electric moves to activate motor drive and sweep. In the case of an electric move not hitting, I let it have a jolly nature for a little extra speed T-Punch for stab I-Punch for Those super effective grounds and e-quake just because its a good move to have

Breloom@ Toxic Orb
Nature: Jolly
EV: 252 Atk / 12 HP / 244 Spe

Moveset:
-Focus Punch
-Substitute
-Seed Bomb
-Spore

Breloom basically is the normal breloom you would see in competetive battles. Use spore than sub and focus punch. Nothing special about it


Gengar@ Black Sludge
Nature: Timid
EV: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

Moveset:
-Focus Blast
-Substitute
-Shodow Ball
-Hypnosis

Gengar is my Special Sweeper. This really only works if hypnosis actually hits but i can sub while they are asleep or are switching in and either use shadow ball or focus blast

Scizor@ Choice Scarf
Nature: Adamant
EV: 248 HP / 252 Atk / Spe

Moveset:
-Brick Break
-U-Turn
-Pursuit
-Bullet Punch

I don't really know what I use Scizor for. Mostly another Physical attacker. I can use bullet punch for priority or u turn for the hit and run or maybe pursuit for switch ins. Brick break is a "just in case" move


Vaporeon@ Leftovers
Nature: Bold
EV: 248 HP / 224 Def / 36 SpD

Moveset:
-Hidden Power (Ground)
-Surf
-Protect
-Toxic

I wanted a bulky water pokemon on this team so I went with Vaporeon for the role. Im not sure if i should keep it. But Surf is there for STAB Toxic for poison and protect for the free health gain and my opponents hp loss and hidden power ground in case of electric opponents

 

[Christopher]

1st, your lead isn't very good. You have a screener which I guess is fine but you don't have any attacking moves and then just explode? What are you going to do when you need another screen up or if one of the other pokemon has brick break? I would switch use gyro ball instead of stealth rock and make another poke carry stealth so you can keep him as a wall and do some damage.

2nd, You have three physical attackers. I would take out electivire and replace with a poke that has stealth rock or possibly a troll like whimsicott.

3rd, Besides bronzong and vaporeon, you have no walls. Especially if your going to explode your bronzong. A pokemon like reuniclus could sweep your team.

 

[e5 y vx]

4th, there's another place for G4 now.

5th, use Pain Spilt Gengar. or just lose the black sludge for life orb/left overs if Hypnosis works for you.

6th, Scizor wants 240hp, 252 atk and rest in def or spdef. and CHOICE BAND.

7th, and needs more words. I'm not sure what you're going for...