A random team that needs Rating Please!!!

[Mr.Sandman]

This team sorta just came to me one night, although it probably needs some work :P

1. Gallade @ Lum Berry

6 HP, 252 Atk, 252 Spe
~Hypnosis
~Will-o-wisp
~Close Combat
~Psycho Cut

Simple double-statuser Gallade, Lum Berry to prevent it from getting statused first.

2. Umbreon @ Leftovers

252 HP, 112 Def, 144 SpDef
~Yawn
~Protect
~Taunt
~Wish
Stable Umbreon for my special wall and for wish support.

3. Forretress @ Leftovers

252 HP, 252 Def, 6 SpDef
~Explosion
~Stealth Rock
~Gyro Ball
~Rapid Spin
Simple Rapid Spin/SRock coverage, Gyro Ball works with extremely low speed and Explosion when almost dead

4. Modest Heatran @ Choice Scarf

200 HP, 200 SpAtk, 110 Spe
~Earth Power
~Fire Blast
~Hidden Power (Grass)
~Dragon Pulse
Main Special Sweeper, takes all of the Steel/Fire hits for the team.

5. Impish Gliscor @ Leftovers

252 HP, 242 Def, 16 Spe
~Roost
~Stone Edge
~Earth Quake
~Swords Dance
Physical Tank who can take a lot of hits after Forry is dead.

6. Timid Alakazam @ Choice Specs

252 SpAtk, 6 SpDef, 252 Spe
~ Trick
~ Energy Ball
~ Psychic
~ Focus Blast/Shadow Ball
More of a Revenge Killing Alakazam for Late Game sweeping.

So ya, please tell me what you think! Kthxbi

 

[sverdon]

The gallade is good, and the double statusing is a good idea. The umbreon however, I don't like much. He will get simply owned by taunt. So my suggestions are to take off protect and give it Payback instead. It has good enough defenses to be able to live hits so...yeah. Forry acts as a good wall for your team, and that mixed with Heatran works as an M-azing combo. However, I don't see the purpose of Gliscor. Forry works just fine as a wall, and Forry justs adds another quad weakness too your team. As for Alakazam, he looks good to me, however, if you would like to make him a revenge killer, give him choice scarf instead of Specs. This way he is atleast faster than most other pokes. So instead of gliscor, I would add something along the lines of a mixed attacker. I am not sure of any right now, but if i come up with any ideas, then I will tell you l8tr. Bye, and hope my suggestions helped.

EDIT: You might also want to make the mixed attacker have a priority move. You team is lacking there.

 

[dr4g0n]

The team seems ok, but the idea of having trickzam not opening is kinda weird. I suggest opening with it and taking people by surprise by tricking Choice Scarf (rather than Specs). This kind of Zam can be a major pain in the ass, thus is beneficial to your team.

The Umbreon is weird. I wouldn't even run Umbreon, but if you insist on running it, at least give it options in the face of Taunt.

You don't really have much in the way of resists to powerful boltbeamers.

The Gliscor is redundant after Forretress.