A RMT: Shocking..Isn't It?

[KDH]

This is my First RMT at Smogon fourms. I've read the rules. And I hope that I don't break any of them. If i do, I'm really sorry.

Changes in Bold

Anyways. Here is a quick look at my team.

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Gengar@ Wide Lens/Choice Scarf
Nature: Timid
EVs: 252 SpA/252 Spe/4 Hp
-Hypnosis
-Shadow Ball
-Thunderbolt
-Focus Blast

This is my lead. I can usually get a quick hypnosis in, then switch out to another pokemon who can cause severe damage to that one.

Electrivire@ Expert Belt
Nature: Mild
EVs: 180 Spe/252 SpA/76 Atk
-Thunderbolt
-Flamethrower
-Hidden Power (Ice)
-Cross Chop

This is one of my solutions to either Blissey/Snorlax. I could also use this with Togekiss to make Electrivire a very hard pokemon to stop.

Togekiss@Leftovers
EVs: 252 Hp/ 194 Spe/ 64 SpD
Nature: Calm
-Nasty Plot
-Air Slash
-Baton Pass
-Roost

This works well with my Electrivire. I can do to Nasty Plots, Roost, then Baton Pass off to Electrivre. Or my other Pokemon for a very decent power boost!

Blissey@Leftovers
EVs: 20 Hp/ 252 Def/236 SpD
Nature: Calm
-Thunder Wave
-Ice Beam
-Protect
-Wish

Pretty much a standard WishBliss, I can come out and protect, then wish. Maybe get in a quick Thunder wave. The Switch out to a injured pokemon. Hopefully getting healed.

Swampert@Leftovers
Nature: Relaxed
Evs: 240 HP / 216 Def / 52 SpA
-Stealth Rock/Surf
-Ice Beam
-Earthquake
-Roar/Protect

One of my tanks/Walls. This Swampert can take a beating. And could be a decent phazer, with roar...

Garchomp@ Yache Berry
4 HP / 252 Atk / 252 Spe
Jolly
-Outrage
-Earthquake
-Fire Fang/Flamethrower
-Swords Dance

My main sweeper. This can take down loads of pokemon with outrage, even ones that aren't weak to it. Yache Berry ensures Chomps survival. Due to his weakness of Ice.


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(Suggestions)

Salamence@Leftovers
Jolly
EVs: 252 HP / 180 Def / 76 Spe
-Earthquake
-Dragon Dance
-Roost
-Dragon Clam

Corrupted suggested to take Garchomp out for Bulky DD Mence

Togekiss@Leftovers
EVs: 252 Hp/20 Def/236 Spe
Nature: Timid
-Encore
-Wish
-Air Slash
-Body Slam

Corrupted Suggested to switch BP Togekiss for Encore Togekiss

Electrivire@Expert Belt
EVs: 252 Atk/80 SpA/176 Spe
Nature: Lonely
-Thunderbolt
-Ice Punch
-Cross Chop
-Earthquake

Corrupted suggested to switch Electrivire for a Physical Electrivire.

Weaknesses: Mamoswine (Pointed out by pr4mence)

Thoughts: Adding an Umbreon/Jolteon to this team.

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[Tracker]

I see that your team has a huge weakness to Weavile. It can hit half your team for SE with its STAB moves and Blissey gets hit by Brick Break. You also have nothing that is faster than it. I would replace Garchomp with an Infernape running Fake Out and Mach Punch. It would also let you use the team on the Suspect Ladder.

Also, Bold + Wish is illegal on Blissey.

 

[Corrupted]

Looks pretty decent. But first of all, give Swampert Stealth Rock over Surf and go for Roar over Protect. Surf has rather redundant coverage alongside EQ + IB. And please change Blissey's EVs 20 HP / 252 Def / 236 SDef would do just fine. Also kinda Hera/Luke weak, try Bulky DD Mence over Garchomp. Jolly, 252 HP / 180 Def / 76 Spe with DD / DC / EQ / Roost. Also I would not do the Plot Pass thing, and just go for Encore kiss, to stop Calm Cune and such. It can also provide Wish support for Swampert. Timid, 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe with Encore / Wish / Air Slash / Body Slam would suit you nicely. Then you can change Electivire to a more Physical Build but keep T- Bolt for Skarm.

From there the only thing I'm worreid about are Stall teams.

 

[Corrupted]

I see that your team has a huge weakness to Weavile. It can hit half your team for SE with its STAB moves and Blissey gets hit by Brick Break. You also have nothing that is faster than it. I would replace Garchomp with an Infernape running Fake Out and Mach Punch. It would also let you use the team on the Suspect Ladder.

Also, Bold + Wish is illegal on Blissey.

Swampert beats Weavile.

And Bold WishBliss is not illeagal.

 

[KDH]

I see that your team has a huge weakness to Weavile. It can hit half your team for SE with its STAB moves and Blissey gets hit by Brick Break. You also have nothing that is faster than it. I would replace Garchomp with an Infernape running Fake Out and Mach Punch. It would also let you use the team on the Suspect Ladder.

Also, Bold + Wish is illegal on Blissey.

oops. I ment Calm. Lol (goes and changes it)

Looks pretty decent. But first of all, give Swampert Stealth Rock over Surf and go for Roar over Protect. Surf has rather redundant coverage alongside EQ + IB. And please change Blissey's EVs 20 HP / 252 Def / 236 SDef would do just fine. Also kinda Hera/Luke weak, try Bulky DD Mence over Garchomp. Jolly, 252 HP / 180 Def / 76 Spe with DD / DC / EQ / Roost. Also I would not do the Plot Pass thing, and just go for Encore kiss, to stop Calm Cune and such. It can also provide Wish support for Swampert. Timid, 252 HP / 20 Def / 236 Spe with Encore / Wish / Air Slash / Body Slam would suit you nicely. Then you can change Electivire to a more Physical Build but keep T- Bolt for Skarm.

From there the only thing I'm worreid about are Stall teams.

Ok, I will give it a try.

Swampert beats Weavile.

And Bold WishBliss is not illeagal.

It isnt. mines Calm. I accedently put bold. because i had a bold vaporeon combonation with Blissey..Lol. So i keep doing that to Blissey..oops. Lol.
Thanks.

 

[pr4mence]

Hmm...pretty decent team, though I can see Mamoswine doing severe damage here. Only Swampert and Gengar stand a chance at switching in, everyone else gets annihilated. Also, you lack something that can switch into Garchomp, as pretty much everything can get 2HKO by Outrage. I would suggest a Bronzong, but I have trouble seeing where it would fit without making drastic changes to your team.

 

[KDH]

Hmm...pretty decent team, though I can see Mamoswine doing severe damage here. Only Swampert and Gengar stand a chance at switching in, everyone else gets annihilated. Also, you lack something that can switch into Garchomp, as pretty much everything can get 2HKO by Outrage. I would suggest a Bronzong, but I have trouble seeing where it would fit without making drastic changes to your team.

Umm (Flashback from an hour ago.) Mamoswine is a big problem. But With Yache Berry, and Fire Fang Garchomp could take it down....Lol.

 

[KDH]

I made some changes on the first post. So...

*Bump*

=D