Gen 3 ADV Abra [DONE]

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[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute / Encore
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry / Lum Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat with its combination of Speed and Special Attack. It outspeeds and can revenge kill many weakened foes like Quilava, Aipom, Flaaffy, and Seaking. Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty with Psychic after a single boost. Encore disrupts setup sweepers like Anorith and Beedrill as well as defensive threats like Wartortle and Delcatty by locking them into an unthreatening move. This offers Abra more setup opportunities and can make up for its poor defenses. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. STAB Psychic threatens a 2HKO on many common foes such as Flaaffy and Seaking, making Abra very difficult to switch into and very powerful as a revenge attacker. Hidden Power Grass threatens mainly Corsola with the potential to OHKO it without a boost but can also serve to hit Water-types really hard and KO them with additional damage. Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x super effective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena and Lileep slightly harder. Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s Special Attack allows it to swiftly clean up chipped teams, even 2HKOing special walls like Delcatty and Porygon with a +1 Psychic. Lum Berry is a great alternative to absorb and return status to preserve when Abra can be a threat without the additional power from Petaya. Lum Berry is ideal when running Encore + Calm Mind and no substitute. A Timid nature is recommended to outspeed the entirety of the tier outside of Voltorb and Elekid as well as Ponyta, which Abra Speed ties with.

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late-game sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of Encore. Abra is at its strongest when it’s preserved to clean up late-game after its checks are dealt with or in a health range that allows Abra to KO them. This makes defensive pivots critical on any team with Abra to cover a number of common threats. Koffing can take on common physical attackers like Ponyta, Beedrill, Anorith and common Choice Band users like Meditite, Doduo, Seaking, and Aipom when they’re locked into a resisted move. Intimidate Mightyena and Normal-resistant Pokemon like Corsola, Rhyhorn, and Anorith can come in on Quick Attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility, which makes strong Baton Pass users such as Ariados, Meditite, and Delcatty great pairings. Ariados can come in on Mightyena and threaten it out with a strong STAB Signal Beam while also taking on other threats with good coverage in Sludge Bomb and Psychic for Koffing and Beedrill. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users, notably Doduo, Ponyta, and Meditite. Specially defensive pivots are required alongside Abra to counteract opposing special walls that are not yet in range of a KO. Ariados can serve as a strong Mightyena switch-in and additionally functions as a slow pivot via Baton Pass. Delcatty can serve as a special wall and cleric support for Abra and other offensive threats on the team. Specially defensive Gloom and Noctowl can be great alternative options. Gloom can come in on many threats like Corsola and Mightyena and force progress with Stun Spore or Leech Seed. Noctowl can slowly wear down Pokemon that Abra doesn’t threaten like Mightyena or Drowzee. Abra enjoys being paired with additional sweepers that can enable its sweep. Options like Anorith can break through special walls like Noctowl, Delcatty and Porygon that can get in Abra's way. Weather sweepers like Seaking and Tropius can also open up Abra's offensive gameplan by putting opposing teams in KO range of its attacks. Choice Band wallbreakers like Ponyta and Mightyena can offer much of the same by damaging foes that tend to slow down Abra.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in Fire Punch for Magnemite at the expense of utility. Abra can also run status moves as an alternativse to Encore or Substitute. Toxic can be paired with Substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks like Noctowl, Delcatty, and Drowzee, wearing them down with Toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Calm Mind or Substitute can be ran alongside three attacks to provide Abra even stronger coverage. Encore offers Abra more defensive utility, but opting for Encore over additional coverage moves opens up the risk of not being able to guarantee crucial KOs on Pokemon like Corsola with Hidden Power Grass, Tropius with Ice Punch, and Magnemite with Fire Punch.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Priority Attackers**: Doduo, Ponyta, and Volbeat can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority Quick Attack and even OHKO it when they’re holding a Choice Band. Fake Out from Meditite, while less common, can also threaten Abra out. Even Quick Attack from Pokemon like Quilava can finish off an Abra that has reduced its HP down to 25% with Substitute.

**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or use Explosion against it in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather-based attackers such as Ariados, Tropius, and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic-Immune Pokemon**: Mightyena can come in for free on Psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO Abra back.

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Porygon as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

**Drowzee**: Seismic Toss Drowzee can take on Abra one-on-one without fear of taking much damage in return. Drowzee with status moves can invalidate an Abra without a Lum Berry or Encore as well.

**Magnemite**: Magnemite resists most common damaging moves from Abra and can stifle its ability to make an impact in battle.

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we need to fix some formatting issues before i will clear you for QC 1. solid start for your first crack at this. lmk if you have any questions
[SET]
Name: Encore
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Encore
- Calm Mind / Substitute
- Psychic
- Ice Punch / Hidden Power Grass
Abra @ Petaya Berry / Lum Berry
Ability: Synchronize
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Please make sure you follow the correct format for uploading analyzes and follow how the set is in smogdex. it should look like this:

[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid

evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat that can easily fit on many . with Abra’s its combination of speed and special attack, it outspeeds and can revenge kill weakened foes. Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s highest in tier special attack allow it to swiftly clean up chipped teams. Lum Berry is a great alternative to absorb and return status to preserve when Abra can be a threat without the additional power from Petaya. Encore disrupts setup sweepers and defensive threats alike by locking them into an unthreatening move and allowing Abra a free turn to calm mind or substitute. Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. Psychic offers excellent stab that threatens a 2HKO on much of the tier. Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x Supereffective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena slightly harder. Hidden Power Grass threatens Water-types such as Seaking, Chinchou, and Corsola with a 2HKO without boost. Timid is recommended to outspeed entirety of tier outside of Voltorb, Elekid as well as a speed-tie with Ponyta. talk about the set in order from move 1 - move 4, then item, then ability (only if there's another viable one), then nature (only if it's not standard), then EVs (only if it's not max max)

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late game sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of encore. Encore can help prevent teams from getting overwhelmed by strong setup sweepers. Encore can also be a wincon against defensive options looking to recover health points through protect or wish, opening up Calm Mind sweeping potential or protection behind a sub. Abra is strongest when preserved to clean up late game after its checks are dealt with. However it can revenge kill in mid game and also offer quick damage in early game scenarios when required. It’s natural speed and special attack require no setup allowing Abra to be potent at any stage of the game it can find itself a safe switch in. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility. This can be offered by strong baton passers like Ariados and Meditite that halt/threaten progress and can ensure safe switch in. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users notably Dodou and Ponyta, and Meditite. Intimidate Mightyena or normal resists are a perfect pairing to offer Abra an ease to switch out. the point of this paragraph is to mention teams abra fits on (like offensive and balance teams) as well as teammates that benefit abra or that abra can benefit. mention stuff like pokemon that help abra get past pokemon that can check it (like mightyena, porygon, etc), teammates that can help break down special walls for abra (like other special attackers, breakers, and physical mons), and other teammates you think are worth mentioning, especially covering weaknesses listed in the checks and counters section. you dont need to go more in dept about encore or make general statements about abra being strong. we want direct mentions of pokemon it can handle and situations where encoring something can lead to it or a teammate setting up, etc.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
**Coverage Moves**: Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch and thunder punch but these options are much more niche.

**Status**: Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

this is just a paragraph of writing, you dont need to break it up into sections like this. it should look like below:

Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch and thunder punch but these options are much more niche (what are the benefits of running these coverage moves?). Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks (such as?) wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Priority Attackers**: like Dodou, Ponyta and Meditite (i wouldn't even mention Med here, fake out isnt popular enough on it) can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority Quick Attack and even OHKO when holding a Choice Band.

**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or boom in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather abusers such as Ariados, Tropius and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic Immune**: Mightyena can come in for free on psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO back.

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Drowzee as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

mention magnemite

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we need to fix some formatting issues before i will clear you for QC 1. solid start for your first crack at this. lmk if you have any questions
[SET]
Name: Encore
Timid Nature
IVs: 0 Atk
- Encore
- Calm Mind / Substitute
- Psychic
- Ice Punch / Hidden Power Grass
Abra @ Petaya Berry / Lum Berry
Ability: Synchronize
EVs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

Please make sure you follow the correct format for uploading analyzes and follow how the set is in smogdex. it should look like this:

[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid

evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat that can easily fit on many . with Abra’s its combination of speed and special attack, it outspeeds and can revenge kill weakened foes. Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s highest in tier special attack allow it to swiftly clean up chipped teams. Lum Berry is a great alternative to absorb and return status to preserve when Abra can be a threat without the additional power from Petaya. Encore disrupts setup sweepers and defensive threats alike by locking them into an unthreatening move and allowing Abra a free turn to calm mind or substitute. Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. Psychic offers excellent stab that threatens a 2HKO on much of the tier. Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x Supereffective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena slightly harder. Hidden Power Grass threatens Water-types such as Seaking, Chinchou, and Corsola with a 2HKO without boost. Timid is recommended to outspeed entirety of tier outside of Voltorb, Elekid as well as a speed-tie with Ponyta. talk about the set in order from move 1 - move 4, then item, then ability (only if there's another viable one), then nature (only if it's not standard), then EVs (only if it's not max max)

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late game sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of encore. Encore can help prevent teams from getting overwhelmed by strong setup sweepers. Encore can also be a wincon against defensive options looking to recover health points through protect or wish, opening up Calm Mind sweeping potential or protection behind a sub. Abra is strongest when preserved to clean up late game after its checks are dealt with. However it can revenge kill in mid game and also offer quick damage in early game scenarios when required. It’s natural speed and special attack require no setup allowing Abra to be potent at any stage of the game it can find itself a safe switch in. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility. This can be offered by strong baton passers like Ariados and Meditite that halt/threaten progress and can ensure safe switch in. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users notably Dodou and Ponyta, and Meditite. Intimidate Mightyena or normal resists are a perfect pairing to offer Abra an ease to switch out. the point of this paragraph is to mention teams abra fits on (like offensive and balance teams) as well as teammates that benefit abra or that abra can benefit. mention stuff like pokemon that help abra get past pokemon that can check it (like mightyena, porygon, etc), teammates that can help break down special walls for abra (like other special attackers, breakers, and physical mons), and other teammates you think are worth mentioning, especially covering weaknesses listed in the checks and counters section. you dont need to go more in dept about encore or make general statements about abra being strong. we want direct mentions of pokemon it can handle and situations where encoring something can lead to it or a teammate setting up, etc.

[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
**Coverage Moves**: Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch and thunder punch but these options are much more niche.

**Status**: Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

this is just a paragraph of writing, you dont need to break it up into sections like this. it should look like below:

Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch and thunder punch but these options are much more niche (what are the benefits of running these coverage moves?). Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks (such as?) wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Priority Attackers**: like Dodou, Ponyta and Meditite (i wouldn't even mention Med here, fake out isnt popular enough on it) can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority Quick Attack and even OHKO when holding a Choice Band.

**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or boom in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather abusers such as Ariados, Tropius and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic Immune**: Mightyena can come in for free on psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO back.

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Drowzee as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

mention magnemite

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Ready for full qc check. If you like the progress, lmk if you feel okay about me doing spdef gloom. sleid
 
you're making great progress, i just want to make sure this implementation looks good before moving you onto the next qc
[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat with it's combination of speed and special attack, it outspeeds and can revenge kill weakened foes. Encore disrupts setup sweepers and defensive threats alike (mention specific pokes) by locking them into an unthreatening move and allowing Abra a free turn to calm mind or substitute (the calm mind sentence should be before encores sentence. also, encore and calm mind aren't ran in conjunction so it only gets to fire off free moves or a substitute). Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. Psychic offers excellent stab that threatens a 2HKO on much of the tier (provide an example or 2). Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x Supereffective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena slightly harder (HP Grass needs to be mentioned before the sentence for Ice Punch). Hidden Power Grass threatens Water-types such as Seaking, Chinchou, and Corsola with a 2HKO without boost (psychic and hp grass do about the same damage so i would specifically mention corsola only) . Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s highest in tier special attack allow it to swiftly clean up chipped teams. Lum Berry is a great alternative to absorb and return status to preserve when Abra can be a threat without the additional power from Petaya. (mention lum in OO not here) Timid is recommended to outspeed entirety of tier outside of Voltorb, Elekid as well as a speed-tie with Ponyta.

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late game sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of encore. Abra is strongest when preserved to clean up late game after its checks are dealt with or in a health range that allows Abra to KO. This makes defensive pivots critical on any team with Abra to cover a number of common threats. Koffing can take on common physical attackers like Ponyta, Beedril, Anorith and common Choice Band users like Meditite, Dodou, Seaking, and Aipom when locked into a resist. Mightyena can come in on quick attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility which makes strong baton passers a great pairing such as Ariados, Meditie, and Delcatty. Ariados can come in on Mightyena and threaten it out with a strong STAB bug Signal Beam while also taking on other threats with good coverage in Sludge Bomb and Psychic for Koffing and Beedril. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users notably Dodou and Ponyta, and Meditite. Intimidate Mightyena or normal resists like Corsola, Rhyhorn and sometimes Anorith are a perfect pairing to offer Abra an ease to switch out on quick attacks (you mention two different sentences about mons that help with quick attack like this one and the one with mighty, drop one of them). Specially Defensive pivots are required alongside Abra to counteract opposing special walls that are not yet in range of a KO. Delcatty can shake off hits from common special attackers and offer cleric support for Abra and other offensive threats on the team. Specially Defensive Gloom and Noctowl can be great alternative options. Gloom can come in on many threats like Corsola and Mightyena and force progress with stun spore or leech seed. Noctowl can slowly wear down Pokemon that Abra can not OHKO through toxic and often rest for longevity and keeping Abra preserved. mention other special attackers that make abra's job of cleaning easier. last thing here, this paragraph can definitely be shortened. just mention special walls in general instead of going into exact specifics on each one of them



[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch and thunder punch but these options are much more niche. Fire Punch's main use comes against Magnemite Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute (this sentence should be behind the tpunch sentence). Thunder Punch can provide additional damage to water over Hidden Power Grass but will reduce it's effectiveness on Corsola and Chinchou this needs to have some sort of KO range difference to be worth mentioning otherwise only mention fire punch. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks like Noctowl, Delcatty And Drowzee wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Priority Attackers**: Dodou, Ponyta can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority quick attack and even OHKO when holding a Choice Band. mention meditite since you have it above

**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or boom in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather abusers such as Ariados, Tropius and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic Immune**: Mightyena can come in for free on psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO back.

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Drowzee as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

**Magnemite**: Magnemite resists most common damaging moves from Abra in Hidden Power Grass and Ice Punch and can stifle Abra's ability to make an impact in battle.

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great work here. a few small changes to add and you're good to send it onto QC 2. Gangsta Spongebob it looks like BP wanted to do QC 2 from talks in the ADV ZU cord
[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat with it's combination of speed and special attack, it outspeeds and can revenge kill weakened foes. Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty. Encore disrupts setup sweepers like Anorith and Beedrill as well as defensive threats Wartortle and Delcatty alike by locking them into an unthreatening move and allowing Abra a free turn to attack or substitute. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. Psychic offers excellent stab that threatens a 2HKO on many common foes such as Flaaffy and Seaking making Abra very difficult to switch into and very powerful as a revenge attacker. Hidden Power Grass threatens mainly Corsola with potential to OHKO without boost but can also serve to hit Water-Types extra hard when additional damage can secure a KO. Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x Supereffective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena slightly harder. Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s highest in tier special attack allow it to swiftly clean up chipped teams (maybe mention a calc this helps with like picking up an ohko or a 2hko on something). Timid is recommended to outspeed entirety of tier outside of Voltorb, Elekid as well as a speed-tie with Ponyta.

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late game sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of encore. Abra is strongest when preserved to clean up late game after its checks are dealt with or in a health range that allows Abra to KO. This makes defensive pivots critical on any team with Abra to cover a number of common threats. Koffing can take on common physical attackers like Ponyta, Beedril, Anorith and common Choice Band users like Meditite, Dodou, Seaking, and Aipom when locked into a resist. Intimidate Mightyena or normal resists like Corsola, Rhyhorn and sometimes Anorith come in on quick attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility which makes strong baton passers a great pairing such as Ariados, Meditie, and Delcatty. Ariados can come in on Mightyena and threaten it out with a strong STAB bug Signal Beam while also taking on other threats with good coverage in Sludge Bomb and Psychic for Koffing and Beedril. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users notably Dodou and Ponyta, and Meditite. Specially Defensive pivots are required alongside Abra to counteract opposing special walls that are not yet in range of a KO. Delcatty can serve as a special wall and cleric support for Abra and other offensive threats on the team. Specially Defensive Gloom and Noctowl can be great alternative options. Gloom can come in on many threats like Corsola and Mightyena and force progress with stun spore or leech seed. Noctowl can slowly wear down Pokemon that Abra can not handle well.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch for Magnemite at the expense of utility. Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks like Noctowl, Delcatty And Drowzee unbold this wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Checks and Counters
===================

**Priority Attackers**: Dodou, Ponyta can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority quick attack and even OHKO when holding a Choice Band. Fake Out from Meditite, while less common can also threaten Abra out. Even quick attack from options like Quilava can finish off an Abra that subbed down to 25%.

**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or boom in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather abusers such as Ariados, Tropius and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic Immune**: Mightyena can come in for free on psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO back.

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Drowzee as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

**Magnemite**: Magnemite resists most common damaging moves from Abra in Hidden Power Grass and Ice Punch and can stifle Abra's ability to make an impact in battle.

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[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute / Encore
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry / Lum Berry
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

I would argue here that you can drop Sub Abra's coverage for Encore. Substitute is still necessary for pinch berry activation. However, I think the most optimal and clean thing to do here is to add Lum Berry and slash Sub with Encore. I will talk about this change further in the OO section.

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat with it's combination of speed and special attack, <-(split this into 2 sentences and provide examples of mons it demolishes once they're weakened) ->it outspeeds and can revenge kill weakened foes. Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty(with how many boosts?). Encore disrupts setup sweepers like Anorith and Beedrill as well as defensive threats Wartortle and Delcatty alike by locking them into an unthreatening move and allowing Abra a free turn to attack or substitute. (ADD) ->This greatly increases the number of setup opportunities and helps offset Abra's terrible defenses. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. Psychic offers excellent stab that threatens a 2HKO on many common foes such as Flaaffy and Seaking making Abra very difficult to switch into and very powerful as a revenge attacker. Hidden Power Grass threatens mainly Corsola with potential to OHKO without boost but can also serve to hit Water-Types extra hard when additional damage can secure a KO. Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x Supereffective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena slightly harder. Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s excellent highest in tier special attack allow it to swiftly clean up chipped teams even against special walls like Delcatty and Porygon that take 57%-67% and 49%-57% respectively. Timid is recommended to outspeed entirety of tier outside of Voltorb, Elekid as well as a speed-tie with Ponyta.

In you Ice Punch Sentence mention Lileep as well

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late game sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of encore. Abra is strongest when preserved to clean up late game after its checks are dealt with or in a health range that allows Abra to KO. This makes defensive pivots critical on any team with Abra to cover a number of common threats. Koffing can take on common physical attackers like Ponyta, Beedril, Anorith and common Choice Band users like Meditite, Dodou, Seaking, and Aipom when locked into a resist. Intimidate Mightyena or normal resists like Corsola, Rhyhorn and sometimes Anorith come in on quick attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility which makes strong baton passers a great pairing such as Ariados, Meditie, and Delcatty. Ariados can come in on Mightyena and threaten it out with a strong STAB bug Signal Beam while also taking on other threats with good coverage in Sludge Bomb and Psychic for Koffing and Beedril. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users notably Dodou and Ponyta, and Meditite. Specially Defensive pivots are required alongside Abra to counteract opposing special walls that are not yet in range of a KO. Give Ariados a sentence here Delcatty can serve as a special wall and cleric support for Abra and other offensive threats on the team. Specially Defensive Gloom and Noctowl can be great alternative options. Gloom can come in on many threats like Corsola and Mightyena and force progress with stun spore or leech seed. Noctowl can slowly wear down Pokemon that Abra can not handle well.

Mention secondary sweepers as they allow Abra to be more flexible in when it decides to blow stuff up.
[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
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Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch for Magnemite at the expense of utility. Abra can also run status as an alternative to encore or substitute. Toxic can be paired with a substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks Noctowl, Delcatty and Drowzee wearing them down with toxic. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Here is where I would like you mention the downsides of slotting Encore over Calm Mind and its Coverage move. Encore is such a good move to have that I believe its important to cover almost every aspect of its use on different set compositions. This should assume that Abra is Petaya Berry since it keeps Substitute in these OO Scenarios.
Checks and Counters
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**Priority Attackers**: Dodou, Ponyta can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority quick attack and even OHKO when holding a Choice Band. Fake Out from Meditite, while less common can also threaten Abra out. Even quick attack from options like Quilava can finish off an Abra that subbed down to 25%.
Add a Volbeat mention as it can eat a fire punch/psychic iirc and can threaten with Quick Attack or Signal Beam
**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or boom in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather abusers such as Ariados, Tropius and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic Immune**: Mightyena can come in for free on psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO back.

Mention that Mightyena must be wary of repeated switch-ins as it can get worn down fairly quickly

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Drowzee as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

Drowzee needs its very own sentence here as it completely destroys Abra with Seismic Toss/status. If Abra lacks Encore then Drowzee is always winning the 1v1 bar no insane hax.

**Magnemite**: Magnemite resists most common damaging moves from Abra in Hidden Power Grass and Ice Punch and can stifle Abra's ability to make an impact in battle.
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Opting for Encore over Substitute requires Abra to also run Lum Berry over Petaya Berry because without substitute, there is no reliable way to activate Petaya Berry.

Don't talk about Encore over Sub as all information pertaining to that should be in the main set paragraph.

The part I'm saying needs to be described is Encore over other moves and the weakness and strengths that provides.
 
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[SET]
name: Special Attacker
move 1: Calm Mind / Encore
move 2: Substitute / Encore
move 3: Psychic
move 4: Hidden Power Grass / Ice Punch
item: Petaya Berry / Lum Berry (You don't explain the merits of Lum Berry in the set comments.)
ability: Synchronize
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Abra is a huge threat with it's its ("it's" = "it is") combination of speed Speed and special attack Special Attack. (RS, mind your spaces) It outspeeds and can revenge kill many weakened foes like Quilava, Aipom, Flaaffy, and Seaking to name a few. (fluff) Calm Mind makes Abra an even stronger attacker and allows it to 2HKO even special walls like Porygon and Delcatty with Psychic after a single boost. Encore disrupts setup sweepers like Anorith and Beedrill as well as defensive threats like Wartortle and Delcatty alike by locking them into an unthreatening move. This offers Abra more setup opportunities and can make up for it's its poor defenses. Substitute pairs well with Petaya Berry to ensure it can be activated and is a safer way to boost Abra's offensive power without risking an OHKO. (RS) STAB Psychic offers excellent (fluff) stab that threatens a 2HKO on many common foes such as Flaaffy and Seaking, (AC) making Abra very difficult to switch into and very powerful as a revenge attacker killer. Hidden Power Grass threatens mainly Corsola with the potential to OHKO it without a boost but can also serve to hit Water-Types Water-types extra really hard and KO them when with additional damage can secure a KO. Ice Punch threatens Tropius with 4x Supereffective super effective damage and can also be an option over Hidden Power Grass to hit Mightyena and Lileep slightly harder. (RS) Petaya Berry coupled with Abra’s special attack Special Attack allows it to swiftly clean up chipped teams, (AC) even against 2HKOing special walls like Delcatty and Porygon that take 57%-67% and 49%-57% with +1 Psychic respectively. (You kind of already stated this fact about beating special walls with Calm Mind + Psychic; I'm not sure if it's necessary to re-state it here.) A Timid nature is recommended to outspeed the entirety of the tier outside of Voltorb (RC) and Elekid as well as a speed-tie with Ponyta, (AC) which Abra Speed ties with.

Abra fits both on offensive and defensive teams as a late-game (AH) sweeper and constant disruptor with the threat of encore Encore. (Move names are always capitalized.) Abra is at its strongest when it's preserved to clean up late-game (AH) after its checks are dealt with or in a health range that allows Abra to KO them. This makes defensive pivots critical on any team with Abra to cover a number of common threats. Koffing can take on common physical attackers like Ponyta, Beedrill, Anorith and common Choice Band users like Meditite, Dodou Doduo, Seaking, and Aipom when they're locked into a resisted move. Abra’s extremely poor bulk makes it an easy target for priority users, (AC) notably Dodou Doduo, (AC) and Ponyta, and Meditite. (Moved this sentence here, since it correlates more with the following sentence.) (RS) Intimidate Mightyena or and normal resists Normal-resistant Pokemon like Corsola, Rhyhorn, (AC, analyses require the serial comma) and sometimes to a lesser extent Anorith can come in on quick attack Quick Attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way. Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility, (AC) which makes strong baton passers Baton Pass users a great pairing such as Ariados, Meditie, and Delcatty great pairings. (RS) Ariados can come in on Mightyena and threaten it out with a strong STAB bug Signal Beam while also taking on other threats with good coverage in Sludge Bomb and Psychic for Koffing and Beedrill. (RS) Specially Defensive defensive pivots are required alongside Abra to counteract opposing special walls that are not yet in range of a KO. (RS) Ariados can serve as a strong Mightyena switchin switch-in and additionally functions as a slow pivot via baton pass Baton Pass. (RS) Delcatty can serve as a special wall and cleric support for Abra and other offensive threats on the team. (RS) Specially Defensive defensive Gloom and Noctowl can be great alternative options. (RS) Gloom can come in on many threats like Corsola and Mightyena and force progress with stun spore Stun Spore or leech seed Leech Seed. (RS) Noctowl can slowly wear down Pokemon that Abra can not handle well. (This is a vague sentence. It doesn't explain how Noctowl wears down its foes, and it also doesn't give examples of Pokemon that give Abra trouble and Noctowl can help out against.) (RS) Abra enjoys being paired with additional sweepers that can enable an Abra its sweep. (RS) Options like Anorith can break through special walls like Noctowl, Delcatty, (AC) and Porygon that can get in Abra's way. (RS) Weather Sweeper's sweepers like Seaking and Tropius can also open up Abra's offensive gameplan by putting opposing team's teams in KO range of an Abra sweep its attacks. Choice Band wallbreakers like Ponyta and Mightyena can offer much of the same by damaging foes that tend to slow down Abra.


[STRATEGY COMMENTS]
Other Options
=============
Abra has the option to run additional offensive coverage in fire punch Fire Punch for Magnemite at the expense of utility. (RS) Abra can also run status moves as an alternatives to encore Encore or substitute Substitute. (RS) Toxic can be paired with a substitute Substitute to take on otherwise defensive checks like Noctowl, Delcatty, (AC) and Drowzee, (AC) wearing them down with toxic poison. Thunder Wave can be useful on teams that may benefit from speed control like Clamperl offense.

Calm Mind or Substitute can be ran alongside 3 three attacks to provide Abra even stronger coverage. (RS) Encore offers Abra more defensive utility, but Opting opting for Encore over additional coverage moves opens up the risk of not being able to guarantee crucial KO’s KOs on options Pokemon like Corsola with HP Hidden Power Grass, Tropius with Ice Punch, (AC) or and Magnemite with Fire Punch. Encore offers Abra more defensive utility at the cost of less coverage. (Condensed this sentence down into the previous sentence.)

Checks and Counters
===================

**Priority Attackers**: Dodou Doduo, Ponyta, and Volbeat can easily revenge kill a damaged Abra with their priority quick attack Quick Attack and even OHKO it when they're holding a Choice Band. (RS) Fake Out from Meditite, while less common, (AC) can also threaten Abra out. (RS) Even quick attack Quick Attack from options Pokemon like Quilava can finish off an Abra that subbed down has reduced its HP to 25% with Substitute.

**Faster Attackers**: Elekid and Voltorb can finish off a weakened Abra or boom use Explosion against it in Voltorb’s case. Agility users and weather-based abusers attackers such as Ariados, Tropius, (AC) and Seaking can threaten to outspeed and OHKO Abra in certain conditions.

**Psychic Immune Psychic-immune Pokemon**: Mightyena can come in for free on psychic Psychic or take unboosted special attacks fairly well and threaten to OHKO Abra back.

**Special Walls**: Noctowl, Delcatty, and Porygon as well as Mightyena can take unboosted attacks and threaten to OHKO Abra.

**Drowzee**: Seismic Toss Drowzee can take on Abra one-on-one without fear of taking much damage in return. (RS) Status Drowzee with status moves can invalidate an Abra without a Lum Berry or Encore as well.

**Magnemite**: Magnemite resists most of Abra's common damaging moves from Abra in Hidden Power Grass and Ice Punch (idt it's necessary to list out Abra's attacks when you already said that Magnemite resists most of them) and can stifle Abra's its ability to make an impact in battle.
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Some changes were not implemented as they were previous parts that I was told to remove. This is referring to Lum Berry in the Set comments as well as going into more detail on Noctowl. Looking for feedback on how to best proceed. BP
 
Some changes were not implemented as they were previous parts that I was told to remove. This is referring to Lum Berry in the Set comments as well as going into more detail on Noctowl. Looking for feedback on how to best proceed.

1: Yes you need to talk about Lum Berry in the set comments section

2: I don't see the issue with noctowl your noctowl section is probably fine
 
Noticed these typos:
Intimidate Mightyena aNormal-resistant and Normal-resistant Pokemon like Corsola, Rhyhorn, and Anorith can come in on a Quick Attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way.

Didn't catch this one in my proper check:
Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility, which makes strong Baton Pass users such as Ariados, Meditite, and Delcatty great pairings.
 
Noticed these typos:
Intimidate Mightyena aNormal-resistant and Normal-resistant Pokemon like Corsola, Rhyhorn, and Anorith can come in on a Quick Attack users as well as opposing Abra and also do respectable damage to special walls that can get in Abra's way.

Didn't catch this one in my proper check:
Abra benefits greatly from a safe switch in due to its fragility, which makes strong Baton Pass users such as Ariados, Meditite, and Delcatty great pairings.
Fixed, ty
 
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