Ambipom update

[Aslan07]

I'm not sure how to update a page but i feel Ambipom is missing a set so would be much appreciated if someone could add it or tell me how it's as follows

Fake out
Return
U-turn
Switcheroo
With a normal gem
252att 252spe 4hp
Ability technician

With technician, normal gem, and 252attack fake out can hit around 60% return can usually finish them from there, since you then have no item you can use switcheroo and take theirs for free U-turns for when you run into ghost, fighting, rock and steel, which this set can't deal with

 

[tehy]

Firstly, you should really have proper formatting, like so:

http://www.smogon.com/forums/announcement.php?f=172&a=227

Click that link and do that

Secondly, i'd put in Quality Control tags on your title and put in (WIP) in the title as well. That lets people know that it's a work in progress and in the Quality Control stage.

Thirdly, everything that's wrong with this set.

Basically, it's not a great use of your turn to steal someone's item. Whenever something like this happens, it's either:
A:Tricking them an item that really messes them up (Choice items, for example.)
B:Little Cup (Doesn't really apply here)
C:A defensive pokemon with nothing better to do using Knock Off
Ambipom doesn't have the defenses to take a hit and Knock off, and has better things to do.

You also have no way of damaging Ghosts, Rocks, or Steels. So it's not hard to wall you off and burn your gem, at which point you can't accomplish too much of anything. You're just really easy to switch into and not care.

Oh yeah, this needs a better description of what you're doing, what it accomplishes, etc. What are you doing 60% to? You just kind of say it, it'd be nice to have a list, at the very least. (Btw, Technician Normal Gem Fake Out reaches 90 BP before STAB, and Return reaches 102.5 BP before STAB. If the first does 60%, the second will always finish.) And try to have proper grammar and spelling too, this is really just making you look bad.