An Agressive OU Team

[Jamesb8]

An Agressive OU Team Magikarp Sweeps with ratio of 50:3

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Hi this my OU Team it's not that great please give me some hints (I think it might need a bulky water?)

Sorry I could not get the Pictures working here is the team.

Team = Mamoswine Scizor Lucario Gengar Heatran Tyranitar

Mamoswine Adamant
Snow cloak @Focus Sash 252Atk/252Spe/6Def
SR
Earthquake
Ice Shard
Stone Edge
Kills off a lot of other leads and sometimes gets the rocks down. Works well, haven’t used a better lead but I never use stone edge and don't know what to replace it with.

Scizor Adamant
Technician@Choice Band 252Atk/248HP/4Spe/4Def
U-Turn
Bullet Punch
Superpower
Pursuit
Your bread and butter Scizor he gets in U - Turns if he wants to scout and uses Bullet Punch for speed. Only 4 Speed Ev's so he U -Turns last and I can go to the right counter against other Scizor.

Lucario Jolly
Steadfast@Life Orb 252Atk/252Spe/6Def
Swords Dance
Close Combat
Extreme Speed
Ice Punch
Steadfast is there to absorb Fake out, Iron head and get a speed boost right at the start for a possible early sweep, at least some big Damage. Ice Punch is their because I forgot to Breed Crunch onto Lucario and can't be stuffed with more breeding. (Crunch could be used on Shoddy Battle)

Gengar
Levitate@Life Orb 252Satk/252Spe/4Def
Shadow Ball
Energy Ball
Focus Blast
Icy Wind
Gengar is great in my opinion Energy ball is there because my team can't handle water and Icy wind gets so many free kills on things that think they are safe .I think gengar is my best team member.

Heatran Timid
Choice Scarf@Flash Fire 252Spatk/252Spe/6HP
Fire Blast
Explosion
Earth Power
Dragon pulse
Revenge Killer and very Powerful Moves. He gives me a much needed fire immunity.

Tyranitar Jolly
Expert Belt@Sand Stream 52HP/252Atk/208Spe
Aqua Tail
Crunch
Earthquake
Stone Edge
Speed evs outrun brelooom spore puncher and hits dam hard on just about every pokemon. I never liked running Crunch and Pursuit on the same poke either so this set is pretty good.

I was thinking bulky gyrados could be good on this team also Expert Belt Electivire would beat Jolteon with Earthquake and could be a good choice. My team is very weak to fighting, fire and ground moves all of which are common and might need a bit of fixing up. Thanks for your help anyone who replies!

Sorry there aren’t any Pics.

 

[haunter]

Please expand your descriptions, especially Heatran, Gengar and Mamoswine, as they're definitely not up to rule 3:

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

Take a look at the RMT archive to see what kind of descriptions we are looking for. PM me the fixed descriptions and I'll unlock this thread.